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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 23


While hearing it dadima got confuse thinking not what did maan do ...while maan got one more shock no 'no biggest shock of the morning hearing this sentence from geet...

And thought '


Maan: Maine...abh is me mere kya galti hai?


And frowned thinking this super shocked as well as confused as in what did he do and what's his fault in this'.

Then thought'.

Maan: yeh acha hai mood swings isku ho rahi aur galti is me mere wah...wah

On the other hand dadima was not getting anything as in what geet wanted to say and asked her '.


Dadima: geet beta app kya kherahi hai? Hume kuch samaj nahi arahai beta?


When geet answered dadima giving her one more shock '


Geet: aur nahi tu kya dadima inhi ki wajise mera insab chizu mainse kuch bhi khani ka maan nahi Ker raha hai'.


While dadima was not getting anything and maan was like god now what is my fault in this and he give geet a glare'while geet made a baby face and said'.giving dadima a sweet shock and maan just took a relief breath hearing it '


Geet: mujhi Na inki haat ka banaya huwa pasta khana hai wohi ju inhoni us din banaya tha jab main yahaan phele bar aye thi'.


Geet said this making a baby face''


While dadima hearing it said to maan'


Dadima: wah maan beta wah humare liye tu ajj tak apke pass itna bhi time nahi tha ki aap humare saat akar breakfast karsake humare liye cocking tu bahutdur ki baat hai'.

Maan felt lil guilty hearing it but then he know that his dadima was just trying to emotional blackmail him he knows what drama queen she was and just shook his head thinking here we go in'


When geet who took dadima's words seriously give maan a look like he had done some crime and said'.


Geet: that means dadima he never made any thing for u with his hands?


Asked geet with lil shock and then give maan an accusing look'and dadima knew that it's a perfect chance for her to trouble her grandson lil more how can she late it go from her hands ''..and said to geet making a hurt face'like a baby do when he don't get his chocolate '.


Dadima: yes'


When maan said' seeing where the conversation is going to lead him'.


Maan: dadima can we please come back to the main point of this topic'.


Then he turned to geet without giving dadima a chance to say anything he continued '.

Maan: and geet stop acting like a child and eat it for now I am not going to cook anything right now and that time also I did it because u challenged me ok so stop it all and eat u r breakfast '


When dadima said knowing how to make maan do the work she turned to geet and said'.


Dadima: leave it geet he is too busy u know he doesn't have time for his old dadima to cook anything for her u r lucky that u at least taste the food made by him'

Dadima said as if she was hurt and geet looked at maan with angry and accusing eyes while maan who was till now faking acting as if he didn't want to cook just garb this chance as he know geet was carving for his cooked food and it will also stop dadima's emotional attyachar on him for a while so he said as if finally giving up'..


Maan: ok stop it I am cooking it for both of u'.


He said shaking his head at both off them and get up and moved to kitchen while dadima smirked seeing her plan work and geet who was happy that her carving was going to be full filled didn't got any hint of their thoughts being her innocent self ''.

They were waiting for maan to bring their pasta while they watch him cooking when dadima's mobile ring and dadima excused her and made her way out of the dining table to pick the call'


Geet was seeing maan cocking and then got up and moved thinking to help him and said coming near maan'.


Geet: maan sir do u wants me to help u'


Maan: no geet u just go and sit their'it's almost done'

Geet: ok


When geet all of a sudden said'.


Geet: I am troubling u a lot Na'.


While maan got shocked hearing her say that and instantly turn towards her and said'


Maan: why r u thinking like that geet u have all the right to do so u know and I love it when u trouble me like this it add color and flavor into my boring and dull life '.


Then taking her face in his palms he locked his eyes with her and said in a voice and eyes filled with love, admiration and respect '..

Maan: geet u r the one who teach me to leave my life again before u came in my life I was leaving a robotic life whose life has no meaning I was just leaving waiting for my dea'.


He couldn't complete his sentence as geet cover his mouth with her hands shaking her head for a no and hugged him tight'..while maan to reciprocated the hug taking her in his arms feeling bad for making her sad and she said beating him with her fist on his chest '

Geet: dare u repeat those words aur main'main'..


She was out of words with her throat choked and tears flowing out of her eyes '.when maan felt something wet on his shirt and knew he made her cry with his talks so to lighten the mode he said'.


Maan: what main' main u know what u can't do anything'


He said it with a teasing smirk on his face and this is what was needed to get geet back in her shirni mood and coming out of his arms she looked at him giving him her baby angry looks to him and said'.


Geet: r u trying to challenge me that I can't do anything to u '


When maan in return just smirked at her giving her a teasing look while geet fumed seeing his look and just wanted to wipe off that smirk of his face so she said'.

Geet: ok then hear me out for once and for all because if u ever repeat it again na then I will never ever talk to u again and u know I can do it just like I did it in the past'.


She said smirking when maan thought of it remembering that day when geet was not talking to him he no way wanted that to happen again so he said after thinking a lil about it ''..


Maan: geet and if u have forgotten then let me remind u how I made u talk to me'.


When geet said'.


Geet: u r a cheater u cheated that time'


Maan: geet its not cheating its called smartness u knows '


When geet made a 'O' shape face and maan just smirk at her in return'

Geet: grhhh ok if u repeat it again Na then main'.


Maan: leave it u can't do anything u can only say main-main '


When an angry geet got frustrated with his teasing and bang''.


Maan: ahhh


Maan started shouting holding his leg as geet has bang her foot on his leg and said glaring at her'


Maan: geeettt


When geet didn't reply and stomped her foot leaving from the kitchen and goes to her room'.


While maan kept calling her from back but she ignored it all to gather and left highly angry with him ''.


Here dadima come back after finishing her call and saw geet stomping her foot on maan's leg and then leaving from there the sight was worth watching for her as well as stunned her like anything it took her few seconds to digest what she had seen was true and then she burst out laughing like a lunatic holding her stomach which was aching due to boast of laughter which hit her after the scene which she just saw'..


While maan was highly embarrassed seeing his dadima laughing at him his cheeks turn pink in embarrassment he was right now looking like a kid who had been caught by his parents seeing him drooling over his new crush'''


But then he composed himself and turns giving his dadima one of his stern look which made dadima burst out laughing once again as how much ever he try the redness was still visible on his cheek for dadima to see and she couldn't control her laugh at all seeing her arrogant grandsons red cheek '.


While maan right now so much wanted to just run from their and hide himself from his dadima's teasing eyes''


When all of a sudden dadima's eyes turn to the gas on which pasta was kept for cocking and see saw that it was ready and said after composing herself with a teasing smile on her face'..

Dadima: maan beta I think u pasta is ready'.check it before it burns after all I don't think u r angry fianc will like it or it may just blow her anger all the more on u '..And me I will love it anyhow after all its first time u has made something for me '


She said giving him her evil smirk while maan just turned his face pouting a lil like a kid and said in his angry tone'


Maan: dadima please'


While dadima just smirk at him in return and maan again got busy checking the pasta and taking it off from the gas he served it in 2 plates ' when they were interrupted by geet who had come down again smelling the pasta her mouth watered while maan and dadima looked at her confuse as in how she came down again when she had left from their angrily...when they were surprised as geet took both the plates of pasta from the maan and said looking at dadima ignoring maan like he is not at all visible to her '.


Geet: dadima come let's have our breakfast I am really very hungry'


While dadima just nodded and moved with geet towards the table and both set having the pasta while maan looked at both of them stunned with their behavior and attitude'dadima knew she had to do something but don't know what she knew if she said something geet might feel like dadima is supporting maan and she didn't want that that's why she just moved with geet and had her breakfast behaving normally with both like nothing had happened here she wanted them both to solve it out on their own she knew maan needs to manofy geet for making her angry and after all its between them both so leave it on them only and said to maan after a few bites..


Dadima: wow maan beta I didn't knew u cock so well it really very tasty and thank u geet beta just because of u my grandson made something for me and I was able to taste his cocked food '.otherwise who knows if I had ever had gotten this opportunity'.


She said it jokingly while geet felt bad for dadima hearing it as she took it seriously and gives maan an angry look and said to dadima'


Geet: dadima'


But couldn't complete as she felt some burning sensation in her throat and started coughing and then sneezing both together' while both maan and dadima rushed to her as maan rubbed her back to stop her coughing while dadima hold a glass of water for her to drink both got worried for her seeing her state'


After few minutes geet stopped coughing but she was still sneezing like anything when dadima said'


Dadima: maan u take care of geet and take her in the room upstairs I will make khada for her it will help her ok'


When maan nodded and scope geet in his arms taking her in the room while geet hold him from neck with one hand while her other hand cover her nose because of continues sneezing'


As dadima makes her way to KM to make khada for geet as she doesn't know where maan had kept everything in here 'and she can't even ask him now as geet needs him right now '.


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Edited by kkiddoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

rone ke koi baath nahi...chalo update do

dedi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
he he ..pasta...poor Maan...dadimaa doesn't leave chance to tease him...
now what happened to Geet...
both alone again
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update ...👏
poor Maan & Daadi is confused that happen to Geet now ...
waiting 4 nexy part ...
continue soon ...
Add me 4 PM ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
loved the kitchen romance of maaneet😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
dadi is always a drama queen..
n geets mood swings..
atlast maan made pasta for both
loved dadis teasings
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
dadima teasing maan ...poor maan wanted to hide himself...
what happened to geet suddenly...
loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
ye geet bhi na.dadi ma bhi kam nahi hay.lol emotional blackmail 😆😆.maan make pasta too cute 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 23
awesome...
Geet and Daadima are too good...
poor Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏
awesoem yaar
loved it

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