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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kkiddoo






Thank u so much guys who all liked and commented it really means a lot to me that's why dedicating this update to all those who had been with me this journey till now...thank u so much guys luv u all 🤗



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arpitaji



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 25




Guys i am really very very sad seeing my likes decreasing to half earlier i use to get at least 52-53 likes and now it has decreased to 26 directly 50% to what i used to get 😭...don't know what to say but i just wanna ask r u guys no more interested in my work because i know i am continueing after long now when i am back i think its too late and u guys r no more interested in it so plz tell me if its that so i will not expect any more likes and comments from u and complete this story soon...😭really very sad with likes and comment sorry to say but i am really very hurt guys very very upset still i am updating but only for my those readers who had liked and commented and we're still waiting for my updates...thank u so much guys luv u all for being so sweet 🤗


Dev was driving the car with meera sleeping on the passenger seat it was long they started for Hoshiarpur'meera slept tired lost in her thoughts she didn't even realize when her eyes closed breaking her chain of thoughts and giving her mind some peace for sometime too tired from the mental stress she was in from last 2 days'. while dev was lost in his thoughts driving thinking about all that happened in his life after he got married with nayantara marriage he thought and a self mocking smile came on his lips mocking himself for doing a mistake which lead him in a life of only guilt and shame today he is a person who can't even look at himself in the mirror ,can't make an eye contact with himself only let alone anyone else '. He was completely lost in his own world as he raced his car towards his destination completely oblivious to his surroundings. It was too late when he saw the truck coming right at him... he turned the steering wheel completely in order to avoid the approaching death but alas BOOM... the car was totally shattered as the glass pieces pierced the passengers, blood smeared across the road...




The truck driver come out with his bleeding head and injured elbow to see that the car is in worst condition and the petrol is coming out of it means any minute the car can blast his breath stuck in his throat seeing the scene in front of him '..the car door was open from both front seats and the persons inside came out and he saw that one was a young woman whose back was facing him she too had come out of the car after a lot of struggling and was holding her hand trying to stable herself and other was a young men while the men was injured very badly and had fainted on the spot ''



The truck driver comes to his senses when he heard the young woman's loud voice'.



Meera come out of the car and after stabilizing herself and adjusting her eyes sight she started seeing around her not getting any thing that had happened as she was sleeping when the accident happened she was looking all around her when her gaze fell on dev body and the sight in front shock her to the corer' and a shocking shriek come out of her mouth '



Meera: Dev'



Realizing the situation in front of them meera run to dev side of the car while the driver also come there and they both tried to took dev out of the car but it was really difficult for them as both hands were injured and dev was quite heavy ..When the driver said '.



Driver: beta we have to pull him out of here anyhow that too quickly this car may blast any minute see the petrol is coming out like anything'''.



Hearing this meera whole world collapse in front of her but she just shook herself hard and again started pulling dev with the help of that truck driver with her full concentration on him only keeping her mind away from any bad or negative thoughts'.



After a lot of struggle they anyhow pulled dev out when the car just blasted to their utter shock while meera who had blocked her mind for few minutes come out of it hearing the blast and shriek in shock as she got scared hearing the blast sound''..



Meera: ahhh'



And the next second she fainted right beside dev'leaving the worried truck driver who come to her side and tried to wake her but all his efforts were gone in vain as meera did not respond to his calls at all'



And he looked around in a vain attempt once again to see if he can find anyone there who could help them in this situation but there was no one around the road was deserted as it was after noon and the weather was quite hot too he thought to move a lil ahead to see if there is any way and moved a little ahead 'he had just taken a few steps when he saw a person coming on his bike and he started moving his hand in air lifting them up above head moving them to and fro '.and much to his relief the biker did stop his bike and removing his helmet he asked the person what the matter and he explained him everything that happened '.pointing to the spot where dev and meera were lying '.



Seeing it the biker come down from his bike and both run towards them and seeing the faces of the people lying there give a shock to the biker'.

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precap:new entry ;)

prev: Part 24 Next:Part 26




guess who is the new entry guys...will update next part soon till then keep liking and commenting guys will be eagerly waiting for it sorry for mistakes guys hope u enjoy the update 😉


Edited by kkiddoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Ab yeh new entry kiski hai

Mere Maaneet kahan hai 😡

Dev... hmm waise he deserved what he got but were was he headed 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Nice . Love it
Hope dev n meera are fine
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: arpitaji

Ab yeh new entry kiski hai

Mere Maaneet kahan hai 😡

Dev... hmm waise he deserved what he got but were was he headed 😕

suchu suchu who is new entry 😆

they were here in last part and now they will be here in next part 😉

grhh u forgot he was going to hoshiarpur 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shah10

Nice . Love it
Hope dev n meera are fine

So happy u liked it thank u dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kkiddoo

suchu suchu who is new entry 😆


they were here in last part and now they will be here in next part 😉

grhh u forgot he was going to hoshiarpur 😡



oops 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update dear

now who is dis new person???

did he knew dev & meera?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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