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Posted: 12 years ago
NT

Umm so that was nt beautiful & gorgeous
Had u not posted that pic
I was assuming maan & dev to be identical twin
Her past seems painful & hurting

T scene from t bus is so typical
Loved it slap 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet
Oh my my
T jhali geet 😆
Umm so dev was fooling around with geet & our maan has become so senti 😉
See that's wat happens when u dont tell wat ur heart feel at t right time

So we have these beautiful people with us & t sweet locket that binds them

Geets monologue was so so cute
Actually her talk to her maan was so typical geet
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Wow just started ...
Wat a breath taking scene u opened with
So many questions in just those lines

Painful

T room t floors
T song just brilliant

You started reading it...
I am so excited to have you read it.
Hope you enjoy it at least a little... after all I have enjoyed a lot of your work for so long now...
Thanks for being here..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Savithri Devi
Intense t songs last part oh lord so meaningful words
T way explained t pain in his heart was similar to t pain he felt when he lost his parents
How close they were maan & his mom
Had tears in my eyes
Sweet scene of teenage boy with his parents
Playing piano
Dancing with his mom oh my my imagining maan in that place really beautiful a gift indeed
But t effect was so deep have tears thinking abt that moment now in past
So heart aching
Don't do this to me
Loved how u showed 2 maans face wise but still fall t maan maan
I don't know if that made sense
Just amazing avi

I love that song a lot...
Glad that it touched you!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

NT

Umm so that was nt beautiful & gorgeous
Had u not posted that pic
I was assuming maan & dev to be identical twin
Her past seems painful & hurting

T scene from t bus is so typical
Loved it slap 😆

Slaps are for Dev...
1st day at work and slapping the boss...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Geet
Oh my my
T jhali geet 😆
Umm so dev was fooling around with geet & our maan has become so senti 😉
See that's wat happens when u dont tell wat ur heart feel at t right time

So we have these beautiful people with us & t sweet locket that binds them

Geets monologue was so so cute
Actually her talk to her maan was so typical geet

Yes! He never opened up to her. It was almost an unspoken acceptance..
I am thrilled that you are catching up so fast..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you! Welcome to my story..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Avi,

Just loving the start and the choice of songs. Wow. Thank you for introducing me to this one.

Edit

Finished chapter 4 and I almost killed you for this brain twister. I was reading and rereading trying to figure our who did dev get engaged to and who is speaking. 😆
Edited by serialwatcher16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16


Avi,

Just loving the start and the choice of songs. Wow. Thank you for introducing me to this one.

Edit

Finished chapter 4 and I almost killed you for this brain twister. I was reading and rereading trying to figure our who did dev get engaged to and who is speaking. 😆

I think a lot of the readers felt that way😆
Glad you are liking it Usha😃

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