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Originally posted by: mishtikhurana
Prolounge , "He walked into the room after two years shutting the doors behind him squeezing his eyes tightly. He did not want to relive the scene downstairs and yet it floated into his eyelids. She was being carried in his twin brother's hands. The next scene of Daadima hugging her and blessing Dev and kissing his forehead. All three faces beaming with radiant smiles. ... Today he was suffocated in here." and then the song selection 'pyar managa hai tumhi se...' I have full sympathy with Devil and wanna hug him. Koi baat nahi maan, geet nahi hai ti kya hua...mein bethungi na tumhare pass.Chapter 1, "....He rubbed his cheek fondly as he remembered the day he had proposed..." of course in dramatic and romantic way, the song 'Tumhi dekho na' is perfect to portray DEV's feelings. "...Tumhara Hoon Main Aur Tum Meri, Yeh Din Mein Hui Kaisi ChaandanTumhara Hoon Main Aur Tum Meri, Yeh Din Mein Hui Kaisi Chaandani..." soft, sentimental,romantic and melodious music with heart touching lyrics perfect to giver romantic feel. Perfect song selection AVI.Chapter 2, What an emotional update. Love the mother-son bonding. And how dadi understood Maan's pain (after loss of his parent's) but couldn't pin point the reason. Love the song selection 'beqarar dil' to portray Maan' state and the last part of the song is really too sad and heart breaking.The pain which change calm and innocent boy into DD.Chapter 3, Love the way Dev invaded in Nt's Dream and selection of song 'dil kyon yeh mera'....after reading chap 1 and 3, looks like the spark of love at first sight from both side. and then scary and enless night mares. "... There could be no man like Dev Khurana in her life, he was way out of her league. Time to stop the pipe dreams and face her reality. ..." and getting ready for the office with strong-faced. Eve-teasing is highly criticized by every-one and every-where but still no-one try to take first step, only be mute-specter, unless its related to their own female-family member. Love the way Nt's confronted the man and her reaction toward whole scenario ...but BECHARA DEV...ha ha ha 🤣"...With his one cheek slightly pink and with a shocked and outraged expression on his face there he stood, the person she has slapped on his first day in her group. Dev Khurana.🤣Savitri Khurana in all her glamour and poise introduced the two, "Naintara meet my grandson and your team leader, Dev Khurana. Dev beta this is Miss Naintara Kapoor. She will be on your team."⭐️ What an introChapter 4, Love the way, Jhalli Geet gave her intro and endless talking to Maan and and thrilled that he will return today after two years. Love letter na sahi Diary to padh li... Hmmm...I am also curious to know how she turned Daadima's part time PA, as dadima said in chap 2 "... it was more like she dragged Geet into her life." Love the way you describe geet's emotions happy, insecure, shy, excited, nervous hopehappy- "This has to be one of the happiest days of my life. " waiting for her shehri babu..."At last Tara di had gone to tell her Mama and Mami about Dev today and her SMS says that she can't reach Dev but to tell him that they agreed to meet Daadima and Devji tomorrow. I am so glad for them. This day is getting better and better." happy for dev-tarainsecure - "Will the two years away from me have changed your feelings for me? Could it be that some English girl would have taken your heart away? I hear they are very beautiful and smart, where as I am just a simple village girl. "..."where as I am a part time PA working for your grandmother in the evenings and some weekends. Have we grown apart? I am scared as well as happy."...pride -""You have made so much progress where as I have just done my MBA in our college. You are running all of the London division"..."hope- " hopefully your jhalli.."scared "To be completely honest, I confess I am a little scared also Maan. Will the two years away from me have changed your feelings for me?'excitement,shy, nervous - " As I write down the message to give to Daadima, my joy is overflowing out of every pore and cell of my body."..."I stumble and I fumble along the way as I try to hide my face and find a corner to conceal my excitement."..."In my nervousness, I want to race home and hide myself from all eyes. I fear that if I look at you, my eyes will not look away. It's been ages seeing your face and I long to see you now. My heart is singing a tune hearing the news. " perfect song selected to portray geet's emotions."My heart is leaping out of my chest as I try to steal a glance at you. "love - As always I am blown away by how stunning and handsome you are. Is the veil of love through which my eyes are looking at you deceiving me or have you become more handsome than before, taller, more dashing? I take in the broad shoulders covered by the pale blue shirt as Daadima does your tilak and aarti, the fluttering long lashes, the perfection of your mouth and nose and your angular jaw which is covered by stubble. I can see those eyes that speak to me more than you ever do, the eyes that I love. She runs her hands through your dark hair and opens up her arms. I shut my eyes and clutch my veil to my heart, opening my eyes again to watch your hands enfold her in your embrace.""I rush home and hide under the covers so that I don't reveal my heart to you. Kyun? You are the boy. You are supposed to say it first, hai na "...AAWWW...Love the crazy-shy GG❤️☺️lekin teaser de ker tumne Geet ke armano ka metti pleed ker diya...bechari 😭🥺
Abhi update padha nahi tum ne. Padh lo, phir daantna.
I can't believe you re-read it. mujhe toh apni writing pehli baar bhi acchi nahi lagti...
Thanks for this wonderful analysis.
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