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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.



Happy Easter Onir doc🤗

Thank you Maggie noodles... 🤗
A very happy B'day to you... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

When the clock struck 12, dread began to grow in me. I could sense that he had forgotten something, something very important and it frightened me for both of them. As the expectations she exuded came out across the screen, I grew tenser because I could already see in my head and feel in my heart the emotional fall out that would happen later in that day. It's such a "funny" coincidence that I'd been speaking to myself of the dangers of expectations. If I remember correctly, I said "Expectation is the death of a heart." The disappointment is the slow poison of the disease "Exspectatio". Your depictions of the moments before the catalyst, and the vividness with which you wrote it was done fantastically.I felt every moment, and lived every second. Thank you for another phenomenal reading experience.


P.S. The foreshadowing executed throughout the chapters so far was very nicely done.

Kittya I so love your comments. I'm always spell bound by your depth analysis. You picked up the point that was very subtly put there. But you still took that in account & explained it so well.. 😊
You commented the first but it took me time to reply to your comment... sorry was held up and wanted to reply all before i updated the next...
Thanks for being here... hopefully I will be able to do justice to the foreshadowing... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

maan forgot their anniversary..
poor geet tried so hard..

Originally posted by: itzzdmg

What had happened between these two? Kya bhul Gaye the maan that it ruined ur relation'

Originally posted by: sonnal_17

what did he forget her birthday or their anniversary...no men can be rally stupid sometimes...work is important but you can wish her once...that's not much expected...husbands tend to take their wives granted after wedding...so girls don't let them do that with you

thx for the amazing update waiting for the storm'

Yes Maan did forget something very important... You will know soon. 😊

Thanks for being here... 🤗
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing.loved it,

Originally posted by: preeti.1

amezing up ...

maaan always busy in work waiting for next

Thanks ... 😊
Next one hopefully tonight or else tomorrow... 😊
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

superb update

what did maan forget which leads their relation to this point??

Originally posted by: sdlife19

superb update

he is so busy tat he does not even knw wats happening with his family

and wat did he forget

Thanks ... you will know soon. Hoping to update tonight or else tomorrow... 😊
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

MAAN WAS SO BUSY AND PREOCCUPIED THAT I BET HE FORGOT THEIR ANNIVERSARY

AND SHE DROPPED SO MANY HINTS AND GOT A MAKE OVER TOO
MEN SHOULD GET THEIR PRIORITIES RIGHT

Thanks... for being here.
You're on the right track... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

wait what actually happened
am guessing it was their wedding anniversary or something
and dont think he remembers it
but there is something else that must have happened
no way would just him forgetting their anniversary would have caused this what ever this is
hope you clarify and soon what happened
cant wait to know more

Thanks for being here... 😃
Hopefully all your queries will be answered in the next part... which I'm planning to update tonight or tomorrow... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

hii..!!


i really dont know what to comment and how to comment but you are doing a wonderful work.,!! :D

i love your descriptive writing a lot.!! they way describe whole surrounding..!! getting a reference from every damn thing present around him..!! it just leaves me in awe.!! :)

i am still waiting for the reason.. of this mishap..

and am waiting eagerly.


Sweety... 🤗
You being here means a lot... after all you were one of the few who pulled me into writing this... So If you liked it t means maine kisi ko toh khush kiya mujh se demand karne ke baad... 😃
The reason you will know in next part somewhat... Hopefully. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

maan seems to be very concerned about family well being that he even forgets his family needs him the most

Yes he has messed up things... you will know soon. 😊
Thanks... 😊
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

nice one...maan is a very troubled soul...he wants to spend tym for his family and he s not being able to do the same i feel bad for him anxious to read what went wrong now...thanx a loot for the PM

Yes he is troubled ... but how much he is at fault or is worth the guilt you will know soon... 😊
Thanks for being here...

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