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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
u touch my heart
i feel very bad for geet
sameera ki to...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Omg yeh sb kya ho gya...:(:( i cant see my bubly geetu lyk this..:'(
n poor maan hw much he cried fr geetu whn he saw her in that cndition ,..i dont knw hw maan will able to make her undrstand that their baby is no more...i wsh jaldi se sb thk ho jaye..
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very emotional n painful part
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part 33
nice part...
poor Geet...
OMG why is she reacting like this?
this is scary...
bring her out of this depression...
shes so into the baby that shes not able to differentiate the real baby and the doll...
cont soon dear...
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So painful update.. Maneet are so broken..😭 Very emotional part..Awesomely written.👏
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it so painful to read my cute Angel Geet pain,i want to kill samera
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geets conditn is vry pitiful... poor maan hw'll he handle her. .:(
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Here is the next part of Venomous Desire...hope u like it..do hit the like button and comment...


https://srirmg.wordpress.com/2013/04/06/venomous-desire-th3-updated-part-34/






RECAP

After sometime or so Geet took off her curve and saw the doll is sleeping which was her imagination and she cutely lifted on her shoulder and burped it and slowly started singing lullaby to it.Geet thought that doll as her baby and was showering her love on that non-living thing.Maan saw this scene and collapsed on the nearby wall cant able to resist his pain.Veer kept his hand on Maan's shoulder and said,"Be strong Maan..agar ab tum himmat haaroge toh Geet ko kaun sambhaalega!"Maan said crying,"Abhi mere paas himmat hi nahin hai Veer'.aisa lagta hai ki mein Geet ko kabhi waapis nahin laa sakta..meri Geet ko!"Veer said,"Aisa mat socho yaar'yeh samjho ki samay tumhe yeh naya challenge diya hai..isse poora karna hai tumhe..Geet ko sambhaalna hai usse tumhaare pyaar mein Qaid karna hai tabhi woh achche ho sakti hai..do u remember what doc said u have to shower ur love then only she will be cured'trust me Maan yeh sab kuch sirf minto mein guzar jaayega!"













Maan wiped his tears and nodded to Veer while Veer said giving a small smile,"Tumhaari Geet intezaar kar rahi hai..chalo aasoon pochlo aur naye challenge ka saamna karo!"Maan nodded wiping his leaking tears once again and went inside the ward where Geet still was singing lullaby to the doll and Maan said,"Geet'ghar chale!"Geet nodded obediently and cutely walked outside holding the doll carefully.

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PART 34

Maan walked forward while geet was walking slowly talking to her baby urf doll.Geet said cutely stroking its fake hair,"Hum ghar jaake bahut masti karenge..aapke papa ko bhi aaj ghar par hi rakhlenge..aur bahut tang karenge'.bahut tang kiya hai unhone mujhe toh hum dono team banaa lenge..kyun mera bachcha?"Geet felt as if her baby urf doll smiling and she cutely gave a full dimple smile.Maan admired that smile as he was listening his innocent wifey's words to that doll.




















Maan's heart lurched seeing his Geet like that and his eyes welled up seeing her talking to the doll in babyish tone.For a sometime he stopped near the reception to sign some papers when Geet cutely was seeing around her.On that time the doll's hand struck to a lady's sari pallu and it dragged making Geet scream,"Mera bachcha!"The lady dint know abt this and she walked faster forward when the doll's hand once again struck into the plant which was there.Geet immediately ran behind it slowly took her doll urf bachcha but a truck was coming back to unload the metal pieces as the hospital some parts was in under construction.















Maan saw this and shouted,"Gggeeettt!"As the metal pieces was abt to pierce Geet's head on that time he kicked it towards the opposite side where Geet was getting up and her head was under it.Geet slowly got up holding the doll securely when Maan had kicked the metal pieces from his leg and was panting badly.Maan got angry and immediately ran and started beating the driver catching him.Becoz the driver too got panic seeing a girl from his rear view mirror and Maan was so angry.






















Maan started beating him out of anger and shouted,"Dekh nahin sakte''ek ladki khadi hai tumhaare truck ke peeche aur tum apne hi dhun mein truck chalaa rahe ho'!"Poor truck driver dint know that Geet was standing as he had seen when he was getting to the truck.Maan beated him black and blue'all the frustration,pain everything he suffered till today came on truck driver and the truck driver fainted due to the beatings.Maan still was beating him when Adi & Veer stopped him.
























But Geet was in her lala land only.She dint even know what was going on as she was slowly stroking the doll and was calming it in her imagination.Geet came towards Maan and asked innocently,"Kya huva..aap ruk kyun gaye..chalo bahut dhoop hai aur baby ko zyaada der tak dhoop mein nahin rehna chaahiye'chalo na Maan!"Geet said that and walked towards their car innocently where Maan saw her retreating back and collapsed on the ground with helplessness.





















Geet said before sitting inside their car,"Chalo na Maan..humaare baby utaavloon ho raha hai humaare ghar ko dekhne ke liye jaldi chalo!"Geet sat inside while Veer patted Maan's back who saw tears welled up while Adi saw the truck driver coming round and Maan said to Adi sternly,"Uski ilaaj ka paisa mere account se dilaado!"And he walked feeling stern and Veer got the idea that he had come to his original avatar.
















Veer dint wanted him to become Maan Singh Khurana who is so stern and highly tempered and workaholic man.Veer stopped Maan and said,"Maan..tum apne aapko nahin badloge'chaahe yeh zindagi tumse kuch bhi cheenle..tum nahin badloge..promise me!"Maan dint say anything and gave a small smile but said seeing Veer's concern,"Veer..ghabraavo mat..mein tumhaare liye aur Geet ke liye wahi Maan hoon jo pehle tha..lekin is duniya ke liye mujhe apne aapko badalna hoga'yeh zindagi mujhe bahut kuch sikhaayi hai Veer'mein wahi lauta raha hoon jo mujhe zindagi diya hai'dhoka,farebi,bewafaayi,is baar mujhe mat roko..aaj Geet ki yeh haalath sirf meri laaparwaahi ke wajaise hai'aajse un logon ko nahin chodunga..bahut kuch saha hai mein aur Geet ne un logon ki wajaise ab humaari baari hai'.mujhe apna jawaab dene do Veer'let them know that what type of man is Maan Singh Khurana!"Veer once again kept his hand on his shoulder and said sternly,"Dont take the law in ur hands Maan!"Maan saw the stern tone in Veer's voice which made him to smile and said,"Veer'.agar mein kaanoon ko apne haath mein nahin leta toh un logon ko mein gadde kaise khodu?"




















Veer was shocked and said pressing his hands on his shoulder,"Tum aisa nahin karoge'Maan tum bewakoof ho kya'Geet ko is haalath mein chodkar tum apne badla lene par utar aaye ho?"Maan asked seeing Veer's eyes,"Mujhe nahin pata tha ki army waale itna darpok hote hai!"Veer's anger towered and he slapped Maan angrily.Maan got hard blow and he said ouch feeling Veer's blow and corrected his jaw and gave a sarcastic smile and went from there.






















Veer shouted,"Maan agar tum kaanoon ke khilaaf jaavoge toh mein tumhe aur Geet ko ek hi chath ke neeche rehne nahin doonga..tum bhool rahe ho ki mein bhi uska bhai hoon aur agar mein papa ko boldoon ki Geet ko adopt karein toh tumhe us par koi haq nahin hoga aur tum raho apne badle ko lekar lekin mein apni Geet ko lekar London chala jaavoonga..samjhe..aur tum zindagi bhar usse dekh nahin paavoge!"






















For Maan gave a hard blow to Veer and said spitting fire,"Khabardaar..khabardaar tumne us par haath lagaaya toh..haath kaatke rakh doonga'Geet meri hai sirf meri..aur ek baar bhi tumne usse mere aankhon ke saamne se hataaya toh mein tumhaari pehle khoon kardoonga aur khud ko'samjhe!"Veer asked,"Khud ko kyun?"Maan said angrily,"Kyunki meri aatma mujhe jeene nahin degi mere dost ko khhon karne ke baad'toh behtar hai mein hi mar jaavoon!"














Veer asked,"Toh fir Geet ko akela chodkar kaunsa teri aatma jeena degi tujhe'us badle ki aag ne tujhe andha banaaya hai!Maan achche champion woh hote nahin jo apne mushkil ki ghadi ko chodkar bhaag jaaye..achche champion woh hote hai jo apne gham aur dard ko sehkar fir apne dushman par waar kare aur woh bhi imaandaari se.Maan kabhi socha hai ki Pandav kyun vanvaas gaye kyun woh sab saha jo unke rishtedaaro ne unke saath kiya..kyun bhagwaan ne choda unhe akela jab woh humesha unhi ki gungaan karte the'kyunki woh insan the..woh log maaya mein badhe huye the..aur isiliye woh sab kar baithe woh nahin karna chaahte bhagwaan ke saamne!Maan aisa hi hai duniya yeh poori maaya se banaa huva hai jo dhoka dete hai woh maasoom ka nakaab pehente hai aur jo log maasoom hote hai unhe is duniya se kuchal diya jaata hai jaise ki Geet!Kya tumhe Geet theek hona pasand nahin..kya tumhe aaj bhi Geet ki bimaari nazar nahin aa rahi hai'bataavo Maan!"




















Maan saw towards Geet who was cutely sitting stroking the hair of doll and cutely talking to it as if it is her baby.Unknowingly Maan's eyes welled up seeing Geet like that and tears poured down from his wide eyes which was captured by Veer and asked,"Dekha..uski ek jhalak se tumhaarein aankhon mein aasoon aa raha hai toh tum usse akela chodkar badle ki aag ke peeche bhaagna chaahte ho..bataavo Maan!"



















Maan was in total anger and when Veer said those last words Maan's mind changed..till now he was in anger..his helplessness made him stubborn to revenge on them but today Veer's words made his rational mind to open and his mind started working and he thought,"Agar mein kaanoon ko apne haath mein nahin le sakta directly lekin indirectly toh le sakta hoon..lekin Veer se chipkar'am sorry Veer mujhe tumhaari har kahi huyi baatein samajh mein aati hai and i got ur hint Veer'so dont worry i wont abandon Geet and ur views too!"Maan composed and said,"Veer..tumne meri aankhen kholdi'mein badla nahin loonga mein sirf Geet ke baare mein sochunga!"

















Veer was totally happy and hugged Maan tightly smiling widely.Maan saw Geet who was cutely sitting insdie the car and was talking to the doll.Maan patted Veer's back but determined to destroy Vikram's life.Maan had been caught with the venomous desire of destroying Vikram's life and whoever who destroyed his Geet's life.









Precap-Same.





Note-Kaisa laga yeh update'dont forget to press like and comment I will not come the weekends till May due to my training and am gonna get some free in May starting only till then saayonaara'. will type the VD first and then only am gonna give other FF's ud's when i come home in May


PART 35

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 33
awesome update
emotional..
geet lost in the doll
feeling bad for maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely... really feeling sad 4 maan...😭😭
can feel his pain...😭😭

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