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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
maan is in revenge
he will make vikram beg..
poor geet wen will shhe get out of this trauma
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Posted: 12 years ago
Veer is right... Man should first think abt Geet.. He can punish Vikram rightly at right time.. Crying by seeing Geet's condition.😭 Awsome part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
really emotional
geet come out the shock
oh god plzz save maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭😭😭hope geet recover soon..wonderfu and l emotional update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 33
awww so painful ...feeling bad for Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update di
aww poor maaneet
feeling bad for them
now maan vowed to destroy vikram
hope hs anger wont do any loss in their life
waitng for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is the next part of Venomous Desire...hope u like it...do hit the like button and comment...


https://srirmg.wordpress.com/2013/04/12/venomous-desire-th3-part-35/







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Maan saw towards Geet who was cutely sitting stroking the hair of doll and cutely talking to it as if it is her baby.Unknowingly Maan's eyes welled up seeing Geet like that and tears poured down from his wide eyes which was captured by Veer and asked,"Dekha..uski ek jhalak se tumhaarein aankhon mein aasoon aa raha hai toh tum usse akela chodkar badle ki aag ke peeche bhaagna chaahte ho..bataavo Maan!"Maan was in total anger and when Veer said those last words Maan's mind changed..till now he was in anger..his helplessness made him stubborn to revenge on them but today Veer's words made his rational mind to open and his mind started working and he thought,"Agar mein kaanoon ko apne haath mein nahin le sakta directly lekin indirectly toh le sakta hoon..lekin Veer se chipkar'am sorry Veer mujhe tumhaari har kahi huyi baatein samajh mein aati hai and i got ur hint Veer'so dont worry i wont abandon Geet and ur views too!"Maan composed and said,"Veer..tumne meri aankhen kholdi'mein badla nahin loonga mein sirf Geet ke baare mein sochunga!"Veer was totally happy and hugged Maan tightly smiling widely.Maan saw Geet who was cutely sitting insdie the car and was talking to the doll.Maan patted Veer's back but determined to destroy Vikram's life.Maan had been caught with the venomous desire of destroying Vikram's life and whoever who destroyed his Geet's life.

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PART 35



Both Maan & Veer sat inside the car while Maan saw towards Geet who was stroking her doll lovingly and she dint even glance towards her.Maan felt hurted seeing her like this and his determination of destroying Vikram's & Sameera's was getting more strong.Veer observed this but seeing Maan's expression and the promise he gave to him dint make him suspicious.Maan drove the car towards KM.Maan said stopping the car in the courtyard of KM,"Geet..hum ghar pahunch gaye!"Geet said seeing around her,"Ghar pahunch gaye..chalo baby hum aapko apna kamra dekhaate hai aapko achcha lagega..aur aaj se hum dono wahi soyenge'papa ko tang karenge raat ko aur uske baad papa humesha humaari baath maanenge kyun baby!"


















Geet grinning giving full dimple smile which Maan noticed it and his eyes welled up!"Maaneet got down from the car and walked towards the KM and stood in front of the front door.Maan was about to go inside when Geet stopped him,"Rukiya na pehle aarti karne do humaari..pehli baar humaara bachcha ghar ke ander chal raha hai..humaari aarti toh karni chaahiye na!Nakul kaka!"Maan was abt to stop her when Nakul came running towards the door and said,"Bitiya kaise ho aap?Humein sun kar bahut bura laga ki aapka bachcha is duniya mein nahin hai!"For Geet slapped Nakul.Nakul was shocked and saw Geet spitting fire on him.Nakul asked politely,"Humse koi bhool huyi hai kya bitiya?"

Geet said angrily,"Haan'aap zinda bachcha ko kaise maar daala apne shabdon se'!"She flashed her doll on Nakul's face and said,"Yeh dekhiye..humaara bachcha zinda hai aur aap kehrahe hai usse mara huva..kyun?"Nakul was shocked seeing Geet saying a mere doll as her baby.Nakul try to convince,"Lekin bitiya'yeh toh sirf ek gudiya hai..aur aap isse apne bachcha kyun keh rahi hai?"Geet once again said angrily,"Chup..bilkul chup yeh mera bachcha hai aur aap isse gudiya kehrahe hai'Maan mujhe nahin rehna yahan!"And she walked past Nakul not giving a glance to him.



















First time Nakul was shocked and saw Geet's retreating back'Geet never behaved with him like that.she was always polite with him..but today she slapped him and argued too.Maan was only the silent spectator and his heart cried seeing his Geet like that and he too walked past Nakul not able to answer his questioning eyes.












Geet went inside and started crying,"Sab log mere dushman ban gaye hai sab log kehte hai ki mera bachcha is duniya mein nahin raha hai lekin mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki mein uski aawaaz sun rahi hoon?"Maan saw her state and dint even had strength to face he ran inside his study leaving Geet alone.Veer followed him and kept his hand and said,"Maan..tu kuch bhi karein..tu usse jitna bhi avoide karein tumhe toh usse pyaar se cure karna hi hoga'nahin toh bahut der ho jaayegi'!"



















Maan hugged Veer tightly and started crying.He cried his heart out and Veer just rubbed his back in soothing way.Veer let Maan to cry'he wanted that Maan spit out his pain..that pain which he was swallowing becoz of his ego.Veer sat on the couch while Maan kept his head on his lap and cried and cried'he was feeling helpless'he was feeling frustrated'Veer said softly when Maan tried to control hi cry,"Maan'aaj tumhaara dard baahar laavo'behne de yeh gham ki aasoon'kal se tumhe apne aapko tayaar bhi toh karna hai nayi jung ladne ke liye Geet ke saath'.usse theek karne ke liye'usse ladni hogi'aaj apne aapko mat rok!"Maan lifted his head and saw Veer's eyes which had immense love and confidence and his precious pearls poured down.















Maan cried and cried and cried whole night..his misery was pouring down and his heart was lightening up and just like he slept on Veer's lap.Veer saw Maan sleeping on his lap and made him to sleep on the couch lifting him and tucked him in the blanket.Veer stroked his head lovingly and went outside and entered Maaneet's room there Geet was also sleeping just like Maan and she was feeling restless not feeling Maan's warmth.Veer went to Maan's cupboard and took his unused shirt and kept it inside Geet's palm.























Geet felt relief and more snuggled to his shirt and Veer slowly made her lie on the bed correctly and kept her doll beside her and tucked her in blanket.Nakul saw Veer correcting the blanket of Geet and making her comfortable giving Maan's shirt.Veer looked up to see Nakul standing and asked,"Nakul kaka aap yahan kya kar rahe hai?"Nakul asked,"Veer beta..Geet bitiya ko kya huva hai woh aisa bartaav kyun kar rahi thi jab woh ghar aaye tab?"Veer sighed and said,"Mein aapko samjaahta hoon chaliye Geet ko sone deejiye!"And he closed Maanet's room door giving one last pitiable glance towards Geet.





















Veer explained everything to Nakul and Nakul was so sad seeing Geet like this and even Maan too feeling helpless.Veer said to Nakul to keep an eye on both and give info abt them to him.Veer dint wanted problems once again in Maaneet's life and Maan would concentrate on Geet's health.Nakul agreed with Veer while he too vowed that he wont let anything happen to Maaneet to himself.Next morning Maan opened his eyes to see Nakul holding his black coffee with a pleasant smile.Maan took the coffee and sipped it to feel a different taste.He missed his jaan's cooking and then asked,"Nakul kaka Geet se kaho na ki mujhe black coffee banaaye aur Macaroni Pasta banaaye!"





















Nakul said politely,"Maan baba..aap bhool rahe hai ki Geet bitiya ki tabiyat theek nahin hai!"Maan was hurted and got up to see his jaan towards his room.There slept Geet peacefully smiling cutely snuggling to his shirt.Maan noticed to his shirt while Nakul said,"Kal raat Geet bitiya aapke bagay sone ki koshish kar rahi thi lekin Veer bete ne unhe woh shirt diya tha!"Maan nodded to Nakul and said,"Nakul doc ne ek diet chart diya hai Geet ke liye..ussi tarah khaana ban ni chaahiye!"Nakul nodded and went from there taking the diet chart.Maan saw Geet still sleeping and came closer.Geet felt Maan around her and slowly kept her palm on his cheek.



























Geet was in deep sleep still she knew where 's Maan and Maan wanted to make her to live in present world.Maan felt her soft palm on his cheeks and he hissed with pleasure.Though he was in misery..though she wasnt well'still the truth cant be denied that they both are husband & wife..and they both feel the desire towering up inside them.Maan kept his palm on her palm and said,"Waapis aajaavo jaan..apne Maan ke paas'mein tumhe aise nahin dekh sakta'mein vinti karta hoon ki waapis aajaavo!"Geet felt some restlessness in her sleep and she turned that side while she felt a tear drop fell on her back.Geet felt restless after that and she tried to open her eyes but the drowsieness made her so weak and she slept back.
















Maan kissed her forehead seeing her restlesness and pecked her petal lips and took the towel to have shower.When Maan came on that tiem Geet was awake and was seeing around her but still she held the doll which was given by the doc.Maan anger towered and he came forward and threw the doll to the floor and said,"Kitni baar kaha hai ki yeh tumhaara bachcha nahin'meri baa kyun nahin sunti!"Geet said seeing the ground with shock,"Mera bachcha!"Geet turned towards Maan and before she would speak she felt dizzy and fainted for which Maan cocooned her inside his arms and he got conscious and wiped his sweat.
















Maan thought of doing so but seeing his harsh beahviour Geet cant able to resist and Maan thanked that it was only dream.Maan dint wanted more complication to Geet and he softly said,"Geet jaan nahaalo breakfast karni hai!"Geet said cutely,"Mere baby ko doodh?"Maan said softly, but lovingly,"Haan jaan humaare bachche ko bhi?"Geet cutely gave full dimple smile and cutely said to her baby,"Dekha papa bure nahin hai sirf unki zubaan kadvi hai aur gussa bahut karte hai!"Maan smiled at her cute antics and she cutely came and asked,"Baby ko nahaani hai'aap mujhe help karenge?"













Maan nodded and poured some hot water to the tub and immediately pushed Geet inside it.Geet cutely pouted and said,"Mere liye nahin baby ke liye!"But Maan gave a teasing smirk,"Par mere liye toh tum choti si bachchi ho!"Geet cutely pouted and started splashing water on the doll while Maan bathed Geet.Geet was busy taking care of her baby doll and Maan was busy taking care of his baby doll.
















Maan started tickling his baby doll and she started giggling,"Maan chodiyena gudgudi ho rahi hai!"Maan tickled more and more and she started laughing loudly cant able to resist and Maan admired her laugh.Geet cutely laughed and Maan lifted her from the tub naked and took her inside their room.Geet saw him lifting her naked and sensed her intentions and she cutely blushed.Geet remember everything but she was in shock due to lose of her baby and she was trying to believe that her baby is alive.But Maan was trying to divert his mind towards him only so that she forgets about the baby or doll which she calls as baby.
















Maan made Geet to wear a White Selwaar where she looked like and angel and he too wore a White see thru shirt in which she went gaga seeing his 6 pack abs and bulging muscles.Maan always loved her laugh which make his mind peace and he cutely pecked her lips giving the intentions what he want from her.Geet cutely blushed but said,"Sharam keejiye Mr.Khurana ek bachcha ka baap bangye hai aap!"For Maan's misery started hearing those words.Then he controlled his cry and said,"Jaan chalo breakfast karte hai!"And he lifted her in his arms while geet cutely held her doll securely.


















Maan saw this and nodded dismissively that she's not gonna leave her baby doll.Maan carried her towards the kitchen and said,"Mujhe black coffee chaahiye tumhaare haathon se banaaya huva'banaavoge na?"Geet cutely nodded seeing his eyes.His eyes were red due to last night crying and Geet asked,"Kya huva aapko aapke aankhen laal kyun hai..kal raat theek se soye nahin kya?"Maan nodded and said sadly,"Mera sar dukh raha hai!"Geet touched his forehead and slowly slowly squeezed it to make him moan in pain.Geet was shocked and said,"Aapke liye mein adrak waali coffee banaati hoon pain bhi kam ho jaayega!"Maan nodded and Geet stood to make Ginger coffee for him while he slowly took her doll to throw it but Geet said immediately Maan tab tak baby ko sambhaalna!"


















Maan banged his palm to his forehead and thought,"Yeh baby ke baare mein bhoolti hi nahin!"Geet prepared Ginger Coffee and served it to Maan and slowly took her baby and sat beside him.Maan saw the doll longingly and started sipping his coffee.Her coffee made his headache to get less pain but his real headache was abt to start.







Precap-Maan made Geet to sit on his lap and said feeding the paratha bite,"Jaan tumhe jeevan aur maran ke baare mein pata hai?"Geet who was listening said,"Maan please ab aage mat bolna ki mera bachcha mar chuka hai!"Maan said,"Haan jaan yahi sach hai!"For Geet's eyes spitted fire but Maan slowly lifted her in his arms keeping the dinner plate aside and took her to the balcony which had starry dark sky.It was full moon that day and full moon gave pleasant smile towards them.






Maan said,"Jaan tum yeh taare dekh rahe ho'inme hum apno ko dhoondte hai'kyunki humaara maan na hai ki jab log marte hai toh woh log aakaash mein taare banjaate hai..woh log humein aur humaare zindagi ke har ek hisse ko dekhte rahenge taare bankar'toh Geet humaara baby bhi ussi taaron ki tarah reh raha hai..humaara baby is duniya mein nahin hai jaan..woh taaron ki duniya mein hai!"First time Maan Singh Khurana who never believed this was trying to convince his jaan by giving examples like star and all.




So guys what will be Geet's answer or reaction..do let me know ur views


NEXT PART 36

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional update
maan is in so much pain
hope geet recover soon get back to normal
i want maan to give a a severe punishment to that sameera & vikram
continue soon
Edited by anjucool - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan in immense pain trying to make geet understand

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