VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 03 - Page 8

loved it dear its awesome to read such a flow ...and u r handling this topic in same way from starting no same grip through out

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

loved it dear its awesome to read such a flow ...and u r handling this topic in same way from starting no same grip through out

thank u dear 😃

emotional update feel bad for Maaeet

iam new reader of this FF love every update.plz i want maan give heard punishment od sam

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https://srirmg.wordpress.com/2013/04/04/venomous-desire-th3-updated-part-33/

RECAP

Maan who was seeing this scene was in verge of tears while he asked firmly to doctor,"Doctor Geet aise kyun behave kar rahi hai?"Doctor said,"Kyunki Geet abhi shock mein hai aur woh bachche khone ka gham usse bardaasht nahin ho raha hai'hum usse observation mein rakhenge aur uske baad kahenge kya huva hai usse!"Doctors observed her and come to the conclusion that she had a big shock in which she has become mental patient.She was missing her baby and was claiming that it is not dead and Maan cant able to see her like that so he tried to convince her but she was in her own land not giving any attention to her world..to her Maan.

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PART 33

Maan came back after meeting doc in his cabin totally defeated and sat beside Geet in her ward.Geet was sleeping just like a small baby and Maan noticed that she was repeatedly rubbing her flat tummy where their baby was breathing'am mean it was in near to death for which doc removed the foetus for Geet's welfare and today Maan was repenting seeing Geet in that condition.He was cursing himself for not reaching there at time and today he was blaming himself for Geet's condition.His eyes were moist when he saw the scene few hours back as Geet was craving for their baby.He had seen his undeveloped foetus.It was a baby girl..his angel who had been killed due to her mother's welfare.Geet was craving for her baby'she was continuously rubbing her flat stomach in her deep sleep for Maan cant able to see and he went to the balcony where he can see the starry sky.

Today he missed his mother so much.After his mother,Geet was the one who cared for him and today she was sleeping lifelessly not having any news abt what happening in the world..what happening with him..what is his turmoils'what is his pain'.Geet never asked abt Maan's turmoil she would understood with his a mere movements only but today she cant able to sense his unhappiness'sadness..and turmoil'Maan was totally shocked seeing the turn of events in his life..first Sameera's entry in his life and then Geet's kidnap..and Geet consuming sleeping pills and their baby dying due to that and then Geet's ill health seeing all this.Now Maan was understanding how much Vikram had tortured her when she was kidnapped and today this was the aftermath effect.

Today he felt helpless cant able to soothe Geet's pain.Maan had decided that he will give another baby to Geet after seeing his undeveloped foetus.But seeing Geet's pain he cant able to soothe her from his love.He thought Geet isnt gonna cure ever.She was craving for a baby and today she lost it as if she has lost her one part of the body.Maan was also feeling like that only and he was in verge of tears.His bit which was cocooned inside Geet's womb was lost somewhere.Somewhere where it cant come back.But we can live with its memory,Maan can live with its memory but not Geet.Geet is in very tender situation.One harsh behaviour with her would loose her completely.Maan was thinking that why fate had taken him to this situation.

Maan turned and saw Geet who was sleeping peacefully holding her stomach just like guarding the baby.He saw trails of tears which had poured down when she heard the news of her baby's death.Maan came forward and slowly wiped those tears.He cant able to see those precious pearls pouring from those almond eyes.Those almond eyes which had only love had lost its color.Today Maan had seen a new Geet who is more innocent'more innocent that when it is exposed to the world then world can crush the flower.Geet was in sedatives as she was giving trouble eating the dinner and doc had given sedatives and had given liquid food from the tube which was injected directly to her blood stream.

Maan was thinking that how much pain the time is giving.Someone says that time heals the pain but they dont know that the time only gives pain and heals it.Maan was praying to Geet's babaji to make her well.She has felt so much pain from her course of life,from her childhood to her tender age and dont give her more pain.Maan was crying and crying and crying seeing Geet's state.On that time a strong hand came on Maan's shoulder'Maan turned and saw it was Veer who saw his friend with all love.Maan saw him and immediately hugged him tightly and said crying,"Veer..mein Geet ko aisi haaltahmein nahin dekh sakta'kuch toh kar yaar..usse theek kardo..please usse theek kardo..mein usse tang nahin karoonga uska saara kaha maanoonga..joru ka ghulam banjaavoonga lekin usse theek kardo'please!"Veer who cant see Maan's state felt helpless too and just patted his back in the soothing way.

On that time Geet screamed in her dream,"Nahin babaji mere bachche ko mat cheeno'help help kuch karo'.mujhe mera bachcha waapis dedo'.please!"Both Veer and Maan entered to see that Geet was mubbling it in her sleep and her scream made half the hospital awake.Doc came immediately and tried to make her awake but Geet was in deep sleep so he cant able to wake her.On that time he remembered a small doll in his cabin and went and took it and came back while Maan and Veer saw the doc curioisly.Doc gave the doll to Geet's hand and said in her ear,"Ye lo Geet tera bachcha!"Geet opened her almond eyes slightly hearing the word bachcha & see the doll.She took it carefully and snuggled closer and said innocently,"Mera bachcha!"And she cutely went back to sleep snuggling the doll inside her embrace.Maan and Veer saw this scene and understood doc as he just wanted to calm Geet.Maan immediately hugged Veer crying his heart out while Veer just saw Geet with helplessness but patted Maan in soothing way.Doc said to both Maan & Veer,"Am sorry Veer..i have to do it or else she would never sleep the whole night'tomorrow the doll will go far away from her!"

Both Maan & Veer nodded to doc but Maan knew that Geet isnt gonna leave that doll which had given solace to her.Next morning Geet got up and fell something hard and she looked up to see the beautiful doll.For a second she saw the doll blankly but on that time she felt something sensation from her bottom of her heart and she cutely snuggled to it and said unknowingly,"Mera bachcha!"Maan who entered saw Geet loving the doll and said,"Geet usse waapis karni hai!"Geet for a moment was blank and when he tried to take the doll from her on that time Geet scratched her nails on his shoulder and said,"Door raho mere bachche se'mera bachcha so raha hai!"On that time the baby cried from the next ward for Geet glared at Maan from her almond eyes and said,"Dekha rulaadiya na?"She was trying to calm her but on that time the baby which was crying in next ward was calmed.Geet said,"Elle mera bachcha..dada se nahin darna woh bahut pyaar karte hai'kya huva kya baat hai aapko bhook lagi hai?"Maan who stood seeing Geet hid his face to resist his pain on that time he saw that Geet is opening her dress and kept the n****e of her right curve near the mouth of the doll and said,"Isse peelo..peelo'!"As if she felt that the baby is latching she felt too and she saw the doll with content as if the baby was satisfied.

After sometime or so Geet took off her curve and saw the doll is sleeping which was her imagination and she cutely lifted on her shoulder and burped it and slowly started singing lullaby to it.Geet thought that doll as her baby and was showering her love on that non-living thing.Maan saw this scene and collapsed on the nearby wall cant able to resist his pain.Veer kept his hand on Maan's shoulder and said,"Be strong Maan..agar ab tum himmat haaroge toh Geet ko kaun sambhaalega!"Maan said crying,"Abhi mere paas himmat hi nahin hai Veer'.aisa lagta hai ki mein Geet ko kabhi waapis nahin laa sakta..meri Geet ko!"Veer said,"Aisa mat socho yaar'yeh samjho ki samay tumhe yeh naya challenge diya hai..isse poora karna hai tumhe..Geet ko sambhaalna hai usse tumhaare pyaar mein Qaid karna hai tabhi woh achche ho sakti hai..do u remember what doc said u have to shower ur love then only she will be cured'trust me Maan yeh sab kuch sirf minto mein guzar jaayega!"Maan wiped his tears and nodded to Veer while Veer said giving a small smile,"Tumhaari Geet intezaar kar rahi hai..chalo aasoon pochlo aur naye challenge ka saamna karo!"Maan nodded wiping his leaking tears once again and went inside the ward where Geet still was singing lullaby to the doll and Maan said,"Geet'ghar chale!"Geet nodded obediently and cutely walked outside holding the doll carefully.

Precap-same

NEXT PART 34

hey,

kitna cry karoge dr
maan helples seing geet in this cndtn
veer helples to see maan in broken state
dr geet ko jaldi theek kar dena

me feeling sad 4 geet
n more sad 4 maanu
poor maanu how will he hndle geet when he is himself in so much pain bt he have to na
geet hope wo jaldi theek hio jaye
\n who is behind 4 her condition maanu domnt l;eve😡

emotional update poor maneet geet in very emotional state thinking doll as baby soon maan love will cure her