Res ... 😊
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Finally I am able to comment on this part. Awesome part. Though not much on M-G ... But I don't mind at all as the story has me gripped ... And loved to see these two Pari and Maan bonding ... Two people who are equally fierce and impulsive at loggerheads because of a girl who will be important to both. One already has Geet as an integral part of her life while another will have Geet in his life very soon hopefully... 😳
I so love Pari for her courage, guts & attitude of care a damn other than her loved ones. I have started admiring her character so much .. 😉 Maan on the other hand will never sudhrofy ..😡... .. He is still prejudiced but liked how you showed his shell of assumptions and judging on the spur of moment blinded by own insecurities is somewhere cracking bit by bit... 👏 His attempts on saying sorry or to say failed trials amused me... I was feeling like to tell him try harder as apologizing is not as easy as accusing baselessly ... Khotta kahi ka... But handsome hot Khotta kahi... 😳 ... Pari's team also were swooning over him... Now won't blame them...can I? 😆 😉
Pari's line about Kali mirch ... Had me on splits... He deserves such behaviour for his horrible words ...
I love vada pav ... Its like a lifeline here in Mumbai ... Pari trying to save the vada pav was so like me... O can never let anything happen to the vada pav... 😃 The obituary line... 🤣 I like these small one liners/worders you add... They'reso much resemblance of your character ... 😉 how humorous and witty thinker you are...
The coffee logic was too good... I remembered my undergrad days when while studying I used to make pneumonics of symptoms of diseases to recollect them in exams... I used to come up with most interesting ways of it complete contrasting to the real ones spending more time on it than actual studying ... But they did help a lot... 😆
Maan is still testing her... Kya kare iska... Gadha Khotta kahi ka ... He hurt her again... Pari will definitely kill him... And when she tortures him for it I will be in the audience cheering for Pari... 😊 😃
waiting for more..
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But I guess he will see her true self post this faltu not needed testing of his
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