Waiting For You#5 (Thread 6 link @ Page 147) - Page 62

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

ham 3... main lily and singh ... performing for mona dear...

Originally posted by: singh24

koi hamaari jhakaas photo tho lo...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

18 to go ... phir main rockers ban jaaoongi... am going to rock in gf!!

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

koi hamaari jhakaas photo tho lo...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

mona hamari dil ki baat ko samajh... jaldi se kuch aisa kar ki maaneet ek saath ho... aur dev and brij reh jaaye chakki peesing and peesing main

Part 46

Geet was still not in state of speak anything. The violence she had almost forgotten since the time had left this place came back once again to steal her peace in world of terror. The words Brij had uttered were still lingering in her mind. She was feeling like an electrified current had touched her body in force. Her eyes were not tried even once to blink in revelt.

"Geet! ''

Rano shook her but Geet was numb. Rano again tried, this time little forcefully on which Geet responded. She stared Rano with vacuumed eyes. Rano horrified seeing her like this. No matter she had not a single support from anyone but Geet was her biggest need of life. She would need to become valiant for her. But for now, agreeing on Brij command was the only option they had.

They reached their farmhouse in night. Geet with her mother settled in their room. Still Geet was as same as she had been. It was killing Rano to the core, she cried on her fate as why she could not carve some fortune-lines on her daughter's palms. Unwillingly she went to kitchen for starting household.

It was dinner time when rano went to call everyone for meal but Geet denied. Rano with broken heart came back and served dinner to both men.

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It was about 10 at night when Rano comes to give milk to Brij. He was not in room. Rano searched for him everywhere but could not get his whereabouts. With slow moves she was returning back when something caught her sight. She looked everywhere as if Brij might be there but he was not around. In a flash she picked that little thing, hides in her cloth and rushed to Geet.

"Geet!!''

She called while closing door in hurry and rushed to bed where Geet was sitting.

"Geet beta take this''

Geet looked what Rano was hiding. She stared Rano confused as where did she find it.

"It was in Brij room. Now don't waste time Geet just call your home''

Rano said while handing over Brij's cell phone to Geet.

With thudding heart she dialed Maan number but it came switched off. It made her more fearful but with keeping her stability again dialed mansion landline. Nakul picked it up after few rings which felt her like ages.

"Hello Nakul!!''

"Geet madam?''

"How is Maan?'' the very first question Geet asked. Nakul thought that she did know about Maan accident and so, was asking this question. For not distressing her more he told Maan is fine now.

Listening this few words Geet's whole died world started living again. She could not hold her happiness inside and it started coming out through eyes. She cuts the call give phone back to Rano as they had heard Brij footsteps outsides. Hurridily Rano kept phone back in his room along with milk glass and came back to Geet.

"What happened Geet? Is Maan alright?''

Geet nodded smiling. Her face was showing its relaxation in way of increasing glow. She happily said ''Maa''

"Haa Geet''

"I'm feeling hungry!''

She knew that Rano had not too, eaten anything yet. With light heart they did their dinner together, while Geet was thoroughly missing getting fed by her Maan.

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Madhav with Savitri Devi came to Dev who was sitting all alone in same room. She handed over a bag to Dev.

"What's this Dadima?'

'Dev I have already told you don't call me Dadi. You've lost this right'

He took bag and opened it. He shocked to see it was full of money.

"Don't be confuse dev. These all you wanted I'm giving you. This money.. is that everything for which you fell so low!! Then now you should be happy that you got for what you had been planning your cheap games and that too, without any hustle!''

"Dadima please listen to me once…''

"No I will not hear anything from you Dev and why should I!!! Tell Dev why should I hear you when you did not think us your own , not even for once!! If you can try to take life of your own brother why would not you try to kill me for this property, hence you will get everything at once''

"Dadi please I did not try to kill Bro I don't know anything when it happened. And dadi how can I think to take your life.. its not true Dadima''

"Leave Dev I make you free from all burdens of my family but always remember the money you are going to spend, every single coin is gained by my Maan. If today you are here, able to think your dirty plans against him, he was there only behind you when you did not even know meaning of it!! He was there when you had needed your collage fees after your parents' death!! He was there when you wanted to go abroad for study but could not due to your poor marks. Your marks were so less that not any good Indian collage was ready to take you then Maan had convinced them with his gentility and reputation to let you study further. He always had wished to give you all freedom so that you would not loose your juvenility in burden of responsibilities like he did. The day in Hoshiyaarpur you had got missing he went there to search for you, without thinkingof his life but ashamed on you Dev, that today he was to lose his life just because of you. Go Dev I don't want to see your face again…

Dev was stunned. He had nothing to comment back..

"But Dadi sirf ek baar meri baat toh… '''

"Dev one min.. ' Dadi paused him and gestured to her lawyer who had reached there now. He handed over a paper to her.

"From today, you have no right on my family Dev. I evict you from my property!!!!''

She declared…

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Night was sleeping peacefully, was breathing slowly covering all around below , the blanket of mist. It was mute. It was silent. It had nothing which could give any lost stranger a scope of way. Geet was laying, closing her eyes having restless perception inside it. The moments of her happiest days were dancing on the rythem of her heartbeats. She was hugely missing her Maan that nothing could able to distract her concerned mind. Whole day had passed in wait of him thinking he might come to take her back but he, did not.

"Maan where are you?' a drop silently slips from her eyes.

"Geet!!!'' she hears his voice, opened eyes without delay. In shadow of dark his face appeared in sight. She could not believe, leaving her soul laying behind, she runs to him, hugged him tight then tighten it.

"Maan where were you? You know how much I missed you!! I had been waiting you whole day but you did not come. why!!! '' she cried in his arms complaining her heart out. "Where were you??'' Her voice been faded, in choke of powerless whine.

"Geet!!!''

Maan stiffen his hold around her. She felt like her bone would be crushed down any moment but it was soothing. It was so comforting that she could spend her entire life feeling this pain.

After numerous minutes of heartrending cry she raised face to look him. She found him, already staring her intimately which was marking how much elated he was finding her again in his empty arms.

"Were you scared Geet?'' he spoke softly, let her be unified in his presence completely, removing few curls from her forehead, getting the clearer vision of her face.

She nodded, snuggled closer in his embrace like a child.

"Don't be. My Geet is so brave, I know'' Maan said caressing her back keeping chin on her head.

"No, I am not Maan, I'm so weak!!''

"Who said my Geet is weak haan!! Dare you to say this. You know, my Geet is most strong girl I have ever seen''

"How do you know?' she stares in his eyes

"Because my Geet has won my heart, and you know Geet, winning over MSK heart is not less then winning over the toughest task in this world!'

She chuckled..

"Maan I don't want to stay here please take me back to home please''

"Then why are you waiting for !!! come to me Geet!!''

She looked him confused. "How

"close your eyes '' he made her eyes shut covering them with his palm.

"Tell me Geet what you see!'

She smiled. Behind those closed eyes she was seeing her heart wish.

"What are you doing?''

"I'm running Maan. Why are you standing so far, see! How me having to run for catching you' she pouted, lost in her dreams.

He removed his hand made her eyes free. She opened it blinking for few times having smile on lips. She wanted to say she had caught him but he had gone.

"Maan!!'' she called searching him around.

"Maan!!!!'' she called out and found herself all alone again….

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"Savitri ji Maan has got his conscious!!!'' nurse proclaimed…

Precap : "What is this Geet?'' Rano asked seeing toward her fisted hand.

"There is hidden the way of my freedom Maa'' she said with confidence

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aaj mujhe tujhpe gussa aa raha haiii mona... dream ??? woh dream tha???
but precap pathke hi mujhe patha tha ke ye mona tho hame tadpaane ke mood main hai!! iska badla hum zarror lenge mona


rano maata ki jay ho... kam se kam phone laane ka kasht tho kiya unhone...

par kya faayda?????? she didnt even told where she is... nor she asked y maan did not attend her call??

but todays star⭐️ in the update was non other than our very own dadima...i just love her... and am so happy with what she told to dev... maan ke ehsaanon ke tale daba diya hai use... now he will relaise what he has lost by gaining that money...

maan ko aa gaya...yipeee

precap se khush ho loo???? baad main koi twist tho nahi le aayegi na... hope geet finds a way to escape and runs away to maan...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

18 to go ... phir main rockers ban jaaoongi... am going to rock in gf!!