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Posted: 12 years ago


Thinking about what...??😉 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

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singh... update tho padne de uske baad killer ko leke aa
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



kiss ki baarish!!!😆

mona see wid wide eyes😉😆
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Me thud ...🤢 🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago


Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )


@Tusti-Kiran I have replied you on page 82 dear, please check 😊


Part 45

Savitri Devi was sitting on couch in front of Maan's room. She was so distressed with all incidents. It was very hard for her to bear everything at same time and alone. She badly wanted to be Maan beside her to keep his hand on her weak shoulder like; he had done after his parents' death. He was her all strength and now she could not able to manege herself without him presence. Dev.. Always she thought him her baby boy; being youngest in family she always gave him every freedom. Not even for once she stopped him for doing his wish then why he cheated them!! Her tears were not ready to stop.

"savitri ji''

Madhva came and sat beside. He could understand her every monologue.

"What you have decided?'' he asked very calmly

"Punish him Bhaisahab, le jaaiye usee yaha se!!'' she declared without any hindrance. Madhav shocked. How a mother can be this valiant hearted that can see her own son behind bars. Though he knew,Dev got to need worst punishment yet, he was thinking about the situation.

"Savitriji your decicion is completely right. Whatever Dev has done, is not tolerable nor should anyone forgive him. But savitriji this time it will not be right, neither for him nor for any of you. Maan is not in condition that you can tell him. We have already tension that what will tell him when he will ask for Geet and now about Dev, what will you tell him''

"I understand Bhaiya but how can I leave Dev after knowing everything. Do you think Maan will approve it?''

"You did not get me. I am saying for now it won't be good but it doesn't mean we will leave him free. Savitriji if now we make him arrest media will spread this news all over and this will affect on maan health and may be on Geet's life too. And how will you manage everything alone being Maan here Geet in HP and Dev in jail. Therefore, we are not the right person to give him punishment but there should be Maan and Geet agreement also. So till when they are not here you will make Dev pay in your way. Let him understand the vaue of family; let him know that how a relation is much needed thing in life and let him feel punishment himself not only physically but mentally too. Savitriji I have seen Dev since childhood, I know his every nerve. Being in police I can guess his state of mind and nature and I know what would be the best punishment for him. And if he doesn't feel his guilt we will take strict way to imprison him ''

"Jesa aap kahe Bhaiya I can't think anything.My mind is not in my control. I only want my children happiness and their health nothing else'

Saying she came to door where maan was laying behind it. Doctor had shifted him in room from ICU. His health was stable now and he was recovering.

"How is Maan now''

"Doctor said he is out of denger" her dump eyes made way through glass door, looked Maan was lying concussed, was breathing slowly without any feel of what had passed around him.

"Geet ka kuch pata chala''

"My officers are searching her everywhere. You don't worry savitriji she will be found soon!!''

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"Where we are going Brij?'' Rano asked confused.

"We are leaving for our farmhouse Maa, Daarji has some important work there.'' he lied. He had been called by his men that police were asking everywhere about him and so he decided to leave this place.

"Now don't ask anything, do fast!! We have not much time'' he seemed in so much hurry. Geet was shocked. She could not go from here because Maan knew only about this place. He had no idea about Handa's another places and here she was not sure where exactly Brij wanted to take them. She refused..

"I will not go anywhere..''

Brij stopped on place hearing her answering back. Temper of his mind which was already high due to all this hustle rose tremendously. He gave her fatal look

"What did you say!!''

"Veerji I will not leave this place I won't go anywhere away from here'' she tried to make courageous face but it was getting harder when she saw Brij raising steps toward her.

"Geet tu kya bol rahi hai?'' Rano came in between tried to make her undsrstand but Geet was being resoluted. "No Maa I can't leave this place please'' she said lttle loud.

"And why you can't!!!' Brij staring with buring eyes made her wobble on her own legs.

"Veerji.. Please I can't go. Please don't make me leave from here'' she requested but it did not effect him a bit rather increased his anger on highest. How a girl could decline his order on his face, was not at all acceptable for him

"What did you say!!!'' his pricking eyes sieved her all over in terror yet she could not change her decision

"No Veerji I'm not coming with you!!!!'' she shouted in helplessness for the very first time in her life that too before her Veerji..

Oyee!!!!'' Brij squeezed her neck all of a sudden. "Dare you to raise your voice in front of me!!!'' his clench stiffen

Rano shocked. "Brij what are you doing leave her.. Brij!!!''

She tried her best to make his hold loosen but was so fragile in front of her muscly son. Geet was struggling for her breath was strangling but Brij was not ready to leave her.

"Brij leave her!!!!'' finally Rano succeeded to push him made Geet free from his hold. Geet was strangling badly, panting to fill lack of air in lungs.

"Now come fast!! I'm not going to wait for you!!!''

"Chal Geet doesn't deny Beta chal'' Rano dragged her forcefully

"No Maa I can't leave this place. Maan doesn't know about other places he will come here only please don't take me away from here!!!'' she cried.

"Ohh ho!! So you had been waiting for him!!'' Brij laughed.

"Geet he can never come now''

"He will veerji!!''

Rano witnessed gleam in her eyes,, gleam of trust, gleam of faith for Maan. She felt so desolate for her daughter.

Brij approached to her. Geet frightenedly moved back.

"Maan will never come back Geet because I did not leave him in state to do this'''

Geet eyes broaden along with Rano.

"You are lying veerji' she murmured in disbelief..

"Brij smirked.. "Geet.. Your Maan will have become dead as yet!!!!

Veerji!!!!!''

Instinctively her hand rose on him when he held it in mid. She was shivring hearing the word she could not even wanted to hear in her nightmare. Her whole body was on fire. She lost her sense of thinking any right or wrong but reciprocateing on guide of situation which were getting disagreeable.

Brij pushed her forcefully that she fell on bed behind with cringe. He was to hit her again when Rano came in between and stopped him somehow.

"Chal jaldi kar ab!!'' menacing both he left fuming.

Precap : (Same 😛) "Dar lag raha hai Geet'' Maan asked. she nodded, snuggling in his arms like any child, keeping her tearing face on his shoulder.

"If I'm here, still.. ?'' She looked his eyes, tried to read it..


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

ogod dono maa beti ko dadi se kush seekhna chayea

brij ke shubh bol sunkar ro rehi hein rone ke siwa kush aata hei kya??? maan ke saath itne din rhkar bhi geet ne kush nehi seekha 😡😡aur ware s precap???
anyways lovd de updttt...😊
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
isko bolthe hai gussa dilaying update....

brij told them that he killed maan then too 😡😡😡 ...for geet we can atleast think that she is shocked by the news... but what about her mother? brij have one only wrong things to her that too in her presence from childhood... he even got her married against her will... her mom was a mute spectator to all... but atleast now shouldnt she be more strong atleast for her daughter????

dadima is really a strong woman... despite of surrounded by miseries from all around, maan in hospital, geet missing and devs reveltion... still she has the guts to sustain all this and also to fight if required... truly admire her...

precap kyu nahi daala ismain? katti badi waali... ab kal tak wait karna padega...


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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