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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Soch rhi hun Res kr dun, phr socha nhi karun, phr dubara se socha agar Res kr dungi to comment jaldi de paungi 😆 Hope is baar res kr k jaldi edit kr dun, warna Avi phr se ghussa karegi mujhpe Mayyam to sweetheart hai, Wo to kuch kahegi nhi comment karun na karun lekin Avi xurur daante, aur shayad Aashu bhi 😆

Edited by Koolsmile - 12 years ago

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

dekh lo sab log me UNRESERVING 😆

Gossip n ladies, janam janam ka rishta 😆
This absolutely happens, someone intrudes in between girly talks n then he/she gets teased k tumhe kya hai ? 😆 😆
When a "Girl" cums in ur lyf, she's alwayz different from Mother n Sisters, 😆 as if they r from different planets 😆
Mummas ko bete ki har dost apni hone wali bahu jaisi hi lagti hai 🤣
N Why do I feel its Geet , the chatter box wid another chatter box, Maan's mom 😆
Maths 😕
Khair, handwriting defines the personality 😉
Baaten widout hesitation, project hi sahi, baat to baat hai 😉
Progressing 😉
Geet seriously makes him nervous 😆
All confidence just flies away 😆
So they did compliment each other for speeches they gave 😃
Even em content wid their day's progression 😳
The chatter box is opening up 😆
She's defo the one 😉
Friends 🤣
J 😆
Fan aha 😉
I can certainly feel wat Maan wud b feeling about them being just class fellows
Back to the square one
Things I know about Geet 😆
He has become Geets Diary 😆
First fall 😳
Though not usual , preventing from fall by holding sideways but then it was first 😳
Pink n white 😳
Mayyam No SBV ? 😆
White shirt ,suits him 😳
Wonder , wat doesn't suit him ? 😳

The first thing that came in my mind glancing the chapter is, It is long n strong 😆
It all seemed so natural Mayyam 👏
Thanx for starting to write for us 😃
🤗

Here goes my idiotic comment 😆
Bless yew when u read this 🤣

Edited by Koolsmile - 12 years ago

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Sorry girls! Fifteen minutes at most.

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

THAP THAP THAP.

4 minutes.. or i am gone for now.!!

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

Your wait is over! Posted! 😊

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

superb update

loved it

waiting for next part dear

cont soon

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

simply superb.loved it
keep writing
continue soon

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Superb update

So finally they are getting comfortable around each other

😊

But Grrr Ayush😡

Kabab mein haddi

Maan trying to take an initiative of keeping their talks going😳

So the deadly duo did strike and

completed their task on time

and completed it with finesse👍🏼

Party

Continue soon

😃

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

I want to write a lot of things but I can't as I have alot of things {specially domestic chores} waiting for my attention dear..

In short...I totally loved it..

Finally they have opened up little...Aayush's attention to geet would definitely going to help maan to voice out his feelings someday,i guess..😆Jealousy is a strong emotion after all...

I missed,geet's monologue very much..😕I desperately want to know her reactions about all the events..specially about ayush..😃

and I think, I know very well that new friend of maan's mother...

and i also know in last chapter,To whom geet was in hurry to meet...😃

love you dear...!!!

Thank you so much for long chapter...😊

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago