If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 82

Originally posted by: Susegad

Heeelllooo.

MAYYO IS IT WEDNESDAY YET?😃

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Why, yes it is! 😃
Reserved the place to update already. 😳

Originally posted by: Susegad

Kaha?😲

Kasam se, ya phir are you kidding with me.😔

AHHH!! I typed the whole thing in the comment box, hit backspace by mistake and it disappeared.😡
So doing the whole exercise again.

I am like totally like in awe likde of like this like amazing like story.

All those likes are like to show you how much I really really like this story.😆

First of all, when I saw the length of the update, I squealed like a pig and then did a wiggle and a jiggle zhinga lala dance.From this moment on, you can't, just can't go back to writing smaller updates. Aisa karna is to do 'touheen' of the book of rules of fan fiction.😈

I love how to Maan, his mom and Anaya are,'Girls', and then there is Geet. Just her name has thousands of butterflies clamoring in his tummy and thoughts of her surround him all the time.😳

Did I tell you, how much I adore Maan and his mom's relationship, well let me say it again.

Reminds me how I used come back from school and college and follow my mom all around the house sharing my day's events with her. And that smart lady used to hand me things to do as I was chattering away nine to a dozen, and I would be helping her out without even realizing it.By the time I'd realize and start complaining she'd say that was the tax I had to pay for her patience in listening to my chabad chabad.

For a moment I was perturbed when Maan's mon was favoring Anaya, but I loooved the new angle you brought in with the twist you gave to the, 'Geet's special friend' mystery. That was totally unexpectedly awesome, especially a Geet who is so comfortable with his mom, that she literally turns into a chatterbox(and I hope it is Geet) 😉

There is a quote that I think explains the gist of your story.

Once in a while, right in the middle of an ordinary life, love gives us a miracle.

An ordianry setting and an ordianry couple, are experiencing this miracle and reading about them is what is making this story so very extraordinary. The awareness between them, from the light brushing of the hands to the time spent together going to different locations, sharing lunch and shared laughter over shared jokes(I especially loved that one, Simple things that I can easily relate to is weaving the magic for me.😳

Who needs enemies ehwn you have friends like Ayush. Bechara Maan. I am totally loving Ayush, and am hoping Ayush's behaviour will spur him into action.😆

I am in love with this stalker gentleman who worries about falling back into the old habit of 'two classmates who never talk to each other', and blurts out the first excuse that comes to his mind. He is just too adorable in his awkwardness.😳

Then there was the catch and the fall scene with Geet blushing. I want to know desperately what is going through her mind. Maybe next time we get to see her side of the fairytale hmm?😉

And then their eyes met...and then...Mayyo put an full stop and then... I went Ahh!!no, no, no not yet. Pleeeaase!!

Every update is like inhaling in a gulp fo fresh air. It leaves me pretty pleased with the world in general. It satisfies me and yet leaves me craving for more.

Waitng eagerly for my next fix.

Love you sweetie, you're the best.❤️

Originally posted by: TheBrat

it is 3 already. Thap thap thap!