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Posted: 12 years ago

😃 You know it and sing it...res waaa

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Phew! That was a long update Mariam. But Maan's adventures were enjoyable. He is just so sweet and cuddly.

Ayush, well I could strangle in a cute way. He is also line maraoing Geet. Cannot blame him. She is just so awesome and self contained. Maan buckle up your gear and just go for it baby. You don't wait for Geet to refuse him! Give Ayush some competition now. Mama's boy nahi tikega bhai.

Geet oopsy, she is a little intimidating now. If I were a guy I would be scared to approach her too just like Maan. People who are so independent are hard to impress too. Maan is ticking off boxes in his head on Geet's qualities, that was cute. 😆

Ananya part at the beginning was so awesome. Such a friend is so imaginable. She is the tomboy. She is always around and every guy thinks she is one of them. Poor her. Does she secretly like Maan? 😉

One more question, is this a true story? 😆 It feels like one. It has that feeling of daily humdrum and yet is sweet and gentle. It is so pleasant to read. I can imagine myself in that college. Why cannot folks who spend mega bucks to make crap on TV make something nice and feel good like this? It is not the same story, but this story gives me a deja vu. Of watching a serial on Zee (back in the times when serials were awesome and actually had a storyline.) called 'Tithliya'. It was a story of four girlfriends going to college. Nothing fancy. Just college politics and nothing over the top. It was such an enjoyable watch. This story is like that.

A story that looks deceptively simple written by an insightful person. Lo Behold! A new success formula. 😆


Why am i yapping so much by the way? May be because this story has a journal feel to it and I feel free to add my own views to it. Thanks for throwing me back to the good old times.

Peoples who are fond of serials, have you watched the old serials that used to come on Zee like 'Banegi Apni Baat', 'Shaanti', 'Astitva', 'Alp viram' and of course 'Hum Paanch' etc? They were great with real storylines. I have not watchedthe entire hoopla but as long as i was watching them they were good. They are much better than hero pretending for 250 episodes to love the heroine(Oh ya I hear that is the twist in one of the currently running serials. Believe it or not!).

Ok I have yapped enough. Signing off. Catch you later.



Edited by glassdoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey thanks for the pm..and the update was awesome...love this character of maan...
but i hope anya and ayush doesnt further create any prob btween them...
and i just have a feeling that this girl about whom his mother is talking is no other than geet...lets just wait and see who she is...
pls continue soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
big update..
i wanted to beat ayush ..😆
is the girl maan's mom talking about is geet???
nice update...
awesome job mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update..finally maaneet communicate...maan "J"😆..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment editwa 😆 on page 114
Edited by Koolsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was so beautiful update . lovely one

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Posted: 12 years ago
tht ws so sweeettt...it was like i was wtnessng all this myself...now wht reason will brng them close now...eagerly waitn for next dose!!! thnk u for d update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited on pg 115 Mariam dear 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
great!!!

mariyum you are just awesome.

first of all i would like to say about the length of update.. it was long enough.. nice..!!


so finally they have a bit of awkwardness gone.. it is great to see them behave as at least normal classmates.. there regular hello hi.. and tiny-miny eyelocks..!! it was soothing to see there relaxed stature when they were with each other..!! and i think maan's mom is talking about geet only..!! finding her in some shop.. and here you bring our chirpy geet into existence..!! and what is with this Ayush man.. is he doing all this delibrately?? making maan feel jealous or is he actually inclined towards geet.!!
i think he knows abt maan and geet..!! about maan;s feeling for geet.!!

waiting for next part.

thap thap thap.!! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ... 👏
Continue soon ... 😛

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