If Only You Saw Me (2) - Page 81

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I'm still surprised because I can never match faces to personas! 😆

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Are we res-ing for what I think we're res-ing for?😃

You know I would stop calling this a story now, because this looks more like someone's life and as if we all are chanced on someone's journal. Many a time we expect cliches and stereotype the stories and the reactions of leads and this story is just like a breath of fresh air amongst all the madness around us.
The simple touch of hands, feeling uncomfortable and pulling it away, catching the ladder while other getting on it were just an examples how natural and un-stereotypical you made this story.
This guy makes me smile at him, and he is someone I actually find cute. Trust me I generally don't like guys who are calm and sensitive since I find those characteristics quite girly
However I have to admit this man is an exception. His sulking, his understanding, his wishing quietly of wanting to know more, his slight fear that they might fall back into those known strangers category after sharing a sweet bond for a week, everything dished out so perfectly that I could also feel my heart beat anxiously wondering if that special friend Geet mentions is Ayush, but of course, there's another rational part of my brain screams to me that the special friend is someone else…someone who's a mother figure 😆

Oh yeah I do think Maan's mother mentioning the talkative girl wasn't just a random scene rather it holds some importance, and something which would be of our liking.

The simple act of holding on the upper arm, and the slight color on her cheeks makes me pray feverishly that what I am expecting indeed is true and she's not unaffected by him. And the last scene only makes my heart go dhak dhak dhak dhak…

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Oh trust me we do it all the time. Me and my sister write out of IF, more serious stuff, just for each other and we do this all the time, get faces for the characters. 😆

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Sister and I do that. By the time we're done, everyone around us is walking around with a hilarious but ultimately tragic back story 😆

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

😆 Did that to a Desi show once. Was leading up to it all and sure enough, the girl started crying a few minutes later!

By the way, lady, I've caught up with you! And oh boy...