Cinderella Story or Is it? Ch 9 Pg 38 5/5 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh...so they meet 😳 .. Awesome .. Happy Valentines to you too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: glassdoor


Hey Onir Happy Valentine's Day 🤗 Thanks for liking it!

Happy Belated Valentine's Day to you too Sheesh...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I so love this chubby & rollu- pollu Geet. She does face everything life offers head on. Yes she does take some escape from reality but yet she is yet quite in contact with reality... taking all in her stride with a pinch of salt. 👏
She misses her family & Proof so much. Bechari Home sick. 😭
The driver was quite talkative even more than Geet. Don't you think he actually made her roam & travel more than required by his inability to locate the exact place, him being new... thereby increasing the meter & she paid him extra..😉 . But then to think of it, even a well acquainted Taxi driver would sometimes do the same just for some extra money. I loved their convo to some extent. It gives a feeling of belonging & welcome even in an entirely new place. He did made her feel that she isn't alone here & there are many like her whom the city has accepted whole heartedly & giving her a hope of adjusting & somehow a bit of respite form all that apprehension of a whole new city on your own footing...🤗
Her dialouge of ... " Inhale to bloat like a balloon.." & all that teasing & symapthy looks projected towards her... My heart went out to her. Poor girl ... teasings do hurt, though they take it in their stride but yet they do leave some gashes & unpleasant memories that do trouble you now & then.
She is terribly missing her family & her home environment. It does get to you some how, even a busy shcedule & all running around does leave you with a feeling of home sickness. I can relate to it... Was reminded of my undergrad days. The "Messwala.." . I truely & really wonder are they all the same... Even I had one who was same in matters of his Mess & all that sweet talk just for some comfort yet it did come with a price, for all those extra foodstuufs you soemtime felt to have ...😆😆
CHOCOLATE... yumm it does certainly make you feel so good. It some how allows you some time off from your all self wallowing & make you feel so energetic to face all adversities & leaves behind a blissfull & feel good feeling...😃
What an embarassament on falling short of money that to after wiping off the stuff for which you have to pay...😳 Bechari. Her not so Knight did save her... & it laid the path for their first meet. 😆😆😆😆
So she did meet Maan ... the "cute inaccessible nerd..." Hayee.
Waiting for more...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i think its really Cinderella story...read 2 parts together along wth prologue n guessed tht soapstar is only maan...geet alrdy liked him...so dont go wth face ...maan is nt tht which he looks like...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update.

Geet finally in Bangalore. Loved
The feeling u described of a plane
Journey. The taxi ride n d convo was
Intresting. Ahh its a coed hostel. It wil
Be fun.

Already missing home in 4 days. Feeling
Nostalgic. Her POV n feelings were
expressive. Geet tired of Chubby cheeks.

Already made arrangement of
Lots of food. Geet kabhi nahi sudheregi.
Devouring on chocolate to uplift her mood.
Opps she is short of money. First meeting.
Geet checking out Maan, categorizing him.

Loving the flow of story. It has a humor
Mixed in it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww choclate craving and missing home

and what is with maan, was he really helping the girl or doing some favour to her

loved the first meeting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
fantastic update
very well written
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yo! This is Crayon ji's new kalakaari! 👍🏼


Since now glassdoor has two active threads, Crayon is confused as to which one should she use to endorse her stuff? 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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updated my "bak bak" on page 14😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

Hi sheesh...

Happy valentine's day to you too...!!!!
I am in love with this "Story"...
mum is asking me to make coffee so rest of the comment later...i want to say alot of things right now and you can blame my mother if i forgot many of them when i would be here again to edit this post...
till then love ya and this chubby cheeked geet...!!!!

Finally...I am here to say the "Rest"...!!!
Chapter two was a big big dose of nostalgia for me..I was immediately reminded of my initial days in hostel..."
She missed the flush of her commode. "
You know once i had said to a friend of mine that I miss tiles of my bathroom in hostel..She did not understand ofcourse but I understood geet very well by this line..Her family can visit her in the hostel but her "home and room" would never come there..!!! I must admit,Hostel actually taught me importance of "home"..It made me realize "home" is something beyond bricks and cement...!!!!

Now coming to geet's chubby cheeks..I have also suffered {still suffering} from this chubbiness..Let me share something with you..I was travelling with my younger brother in a DTC{Delhi transport corporation} bus..Given the wonderful condition of the bus as well as roads,it was more like a "bumpy jumpy ride"..I was busy enjoying my bumpy jumpy ride when i saw my brother looking at my face quite intently..I raised my eyebrows in a manner of asking what???{Roaring engine of bus wouldn't have let him hear by the way if i had asked him in words}.He said,your cheeks are so chubby that they jump along with bus every time..I was embarrassed beyond limits..All i could do was covering my cheeks with my hands after giving an awkward smile to him.."

She had to only inhale to bloat like a balloon. Her stomach lining was made of highly stretchable elastic material.
I can't agree more with geet..as i always say.."Logon ko ghee khaya and dudh piya hua nahi lagta aur mujhe hawa khai aur pani piya bhi lagta hai"..Geet just stole my "desi" words, i guess and gave them a wonderful make over to produce the above lines...😆

You might have guessed till now that geet in your story is my carbon copy..just like her,chocolate is my "salvation"..Sometimes i wonder,when i would be on my death bed, i would ask my children to put few drops of melted chocolate in my mouth instead of "gangajal"...😆
I had always believed that chocolate is one of the "best" things created my God and end of this chapter had strengthen my belief..Chocolate has made our geet,meet "maan" for the first time...😃
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter...!!!!!😊
PS- l loved the line where geet said.."This guy could look good in a garbage bag. "😆..



I have only one thing to say about the above. Will you marry me Pallu?
Looking at the kind of talent that casually hangs about in this forum I feel like becoming a lesbian Draupadi.

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