Cinderella Story or Is it? Ch 9 Pg 38 5/5 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
superb update
loved it
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
plz dear give regular updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
I will tell you story of my life. After putting an alarm at 5 and sleeping till ten, waking up at regular intervals and deciding to wake up later, in one such interval i grabbed my mobile on which i was sleeping and logged into IF. Saw this was updated, started reading and voila! I lost my sleep at a point. Traffic. Directions. Are you seriously stalking me? Lol! Twll you what i was told that 99% of population you'd interact with in B'lore would know any of the languages you know. But by twist of fate i got into auto of that 1% who also didn't know directions and ended up showing me length n breadth of B'lore before my brain cells Woke up and asked me to call the place i need to go. U know what this place is btw. So anyway after we dramatically entering the place in last moment he gives me a lecture in his language which i hardly understand. His lecture says how we shud write down address in a piece of paper and all. I am screaming i've it in my mobile. He doesnt understand. Then he charges 30 extra bucks. For his speech or stupidity i dont know. Ya anyway I empathize with Geet. U know it's been 4 days n even i was missing my Butterscotch and my untidy room but by twist of fate i cudnt even keep a sad doggy face for it is bloody valentines day and the last thing i want is teasings. Ah D, thanks for giving me a chance to vent out. Btw as I said I loved this ishtyle of yours. And this update had me laughing so many times. And i quite agree with Geet about moustache part. And hey, which man really reads romance that too fan fcition? I've brother n he is averse to reading, romance toh dur ki baat hain. I'd never be Able to stomach the fact had I been in G's place. Eww.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
I have not gone to banglore.. But I have heard that People don't talk hindi much there..either English or Kannad.. BTW Geet is really emotional due to parent's & bro's memory.. She was behaving like kid.. But finally Maneet meet that too early..?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
valentine pe pehli mulakhat :-)
ooo baby geet is missing her home.
Driver talks were awesome. Jhakas English. Aise hi baat karten yahan.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Awesome update...loved it alot
loved the first meets😉
waiting for next..continue soon
thankx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
That's awesome! I don't know about Bangalore but after reading your description of a metropolitan city... I'm surely going to fall in love with Delhi, once again! No matter how impossible it might seem to fall in love with a place like Delhi..wait..I'm already in love with this place na! So I totally loved it!
I think the cab driver interactions are most interesting portions of everybody's travelling experiences! The moment you step out of Delhi airport na...All the prepaid service wale cabs you would find will be of Baba Adam ka zamaana...Ambassadors, Omni (which usually remind me of dangerous kidnappings btw!) and all such cars..you could even imagine the tires going in a different direction while driving! 👍🏼 So once..I asked that bhaiyya that why don't they replace the cars? He told that yes they were loans being provided and then he joked that he was thinking of buying a Swift Dezire as it was the most happening car these days. 👏 He then told how the bank manager who was about to provide loan to him got transferred and how his whole plan got postponed.
He kept talking about his father who told him to study but he didn't study and even left the job his father got for him with recommendation because he felt that was limiting him. He talked about his son, his classes..He talked more than me! Just imagine! 😆
I blah...blah..ed way too much!
Hey what is the word Bangalorians use as a replacement for 'bhaiyya' ! I'm sure it isn't 'boss' as I guess is in the case of Mumbai! Don't tell me it's anna! 🤣
P.S. Geet was short of 20 bucks? I was once short of 500 rupees! Such an embarrassing situation it was! 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
WHAT A LOVELY STORY
LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE
SO MAAN AND GEET HAVE MET
BUT WHY WAS HE SO BOORISH
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Hi sheesh...
Happy valentine's day to you too...!!!!
I am in love with this "Story"...
mum is asking me to make coffee so rest of the comment later...i want to say alot of things right now and you can blame my mother if i forgot many of them when i would be here again to edit this post...
till then love ya and this chubby cheeked geet...!!!!

Finally...I am here to say the "Rest"...!!!
Chapter two was a big big dose of nostalgia for me..I was immediately reminded of my initial days in hostel..."
She missed the flush of her commode. "
You know once i had said to a friend of mine that I miss tiles of my bathroom in hostel..She did not understand ofcourse but I understood geet very well by this line..Her family can visit her in the hostel but her "home and room" would never come there..!!! I must admit,Hostel actually taught me importance of "home"..It made me realize "home" is something beyond bricks and cement...!!!!

Now coming to geet's chubby cheeks..I have also suffered {still suffering} from this chubbiness..Let me share something with you..I was travelling with my younger brother in a DTC{Delhi transport corporation} bus..Given the wonderful condition of the bus as well as roads,it was more like a "bumpy jumpy ride"..I was busy enjoying my bumpy jumpy ride when i saw my brother looking at my face quite intently..I raised my eyebrows in a manner of asking what???{Roaring engine of bus wouldn't have let him hear by the way if i had asked him in words}.He said,your cheeks are so chubby that they jump along with bus every time..I was embarrassed beyond limits..All i could do was covering my cheeks with my hands after giving an awkward smile to him.."

She had to only inhale to bloat like a balloon. Her stomach lining was made of highly stretchable elastic material.
I can't agree more with geet..as i always say.."Logon ko ghee khaya and dudh piya hua nahi lagta aur mujhe hawa khai aur pani piya bhi lagta hai"..Geet just stole my "desi" words, i guess and gave them a wonderful make over to produce the above lines...😆

You might have guessed till now that geet in your story is my carbon copy..just like her,chocolate is my "salvation"..Sometimes i wonder,when i would be on my death bed, i would ask my children to put few drops of melted chocolate in my mouth instead of "gangajal"...😆
I had always believed that chocolate is one of the "best" things created my God and end of this chapter had strengthen my belief..Chocolate has made our geet,meet "maan" for the first time...😃
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter...!!!!!😊
PS- l loved the line where geet said.."This guy could look good in a garbage bag. "😆..

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
maan bhi introvert hai kya?????
boys and romantic novel are little far fetched leave alone fiction..
my brother teases me about ff stories ab to usne maan ki pose bana kar mujhe chup karwana suru kar diya hai..
bahut majaak udata hai MSK ka mera nalayak bhai😔 that also with his famous shaktimaan type wali pose with diologue geet chup...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Nice story, it reminds me my first few days in medical collage. I was like a cry baby, new place, new roommates, anatomy,physiology were very tough initially, n lot of exams, it took almost 1 year to get used to all these, loved ur concept a lot, pls update soon.

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