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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: KC.PM

PJ meaning poor joke. Which I have in abundance 😃
Is it that obvious? 😆 Yes, I do. I really, really do.
Great, looks like we're getting an SS out of you!

I changed the password to the other ID with my eyes closed just in case I'm tempted to log on before the weekend, lol. But I couldn't let this go by without a read, especially after all the threats and 'please please please's you received to continue this!

Oh! I guess I already knew what PJ was. It slipped out of my mind! 😆

Yes. I won't call it an OS anymore because there're obviously going to be more part(s), though I don't know how short this short story will end up! 😳

You changed the password with your eyes closed? Guess it still couldn't keep you from logging in before the weekend! 😆

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever
😊 very beautiful update.
Simply love it 😳

Thank you! 😊

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
That was awesome. It was different and refreshing. I can't wait to see what she has in store for the near future. :)

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! 😳

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Sheesh

@glassdoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Okay. I'm both glad and scared to have you reading this one! Glad because of course you're a very good writer yourself and it's an honour to have you here, and scared because you're a very good writer and I'm not sure if I'll be able to live up to your expectations! 😳

Are you sure you are talking about me? 😆

Thanks for the compliments. I will try to curb my crazy side and be a good girl so I don't spoil your impression of me. 😉

I find it easier to become a writer. One just writes and finds a set of people who will be willing to read it. No offense to other writers. This is what I feel about writing.

But to be a priced commentator and reader who is being blackmailed into writing. I wonder who needs to be scared of who here. 😆.

And stop thinking about expectations please. I find it is the most bothersome thing ever. I am trying hard to get out of its clutches.

Just write whatever you fancy. And I am sure it will be good.

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

a very interesting read... loving it

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mayyo

@mayyo

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: palindrome
It doesn't matter that you're a diary and not a human...
and i love you more because you are a diary not a human..as you would never judge my words and acts...
You can't be fake and I would never need to be "fake" with you...
You would never expect anything from me...
You are "mute" but you can listen to me...
You would let me pour my feelings without making me hesitant even for a single second...
I can be "honest" with you because you would never be "dishonest" with me...!!!!
I don't know why i wrote all this but that one line from your update stirred my heart..😊
Well owner of this diary seemed to be a person,i would be scared to talk with for a minute..😆..Because i know i am the person who could never be her choice to be befriended with,however it would be an honour for me to have her in my friend circle ..She would be "as honest" as "her diary"...
Anyways..If you have read obsession,you might have slight idea about my immense love for "poetry" mayonnaise!!!...You were hiding such a talent from all of us till now..I am so glad shika {and many more} made you write this piece and we came to know about your poetic abilities..Both the poems were awesomest...I lub you alot for adding them..and hope i would get more poetry from you in coming chapter.s.{there is no compulsion by the way.. Do it only if you feel like adding some lines}...
This geet is not completely oblivious to MSK's presence..as she made herself think like those "drooling girls" to write the last four wonderful lines about "his eyes and smile"..{which were not cheesy at all...}...😉😊That seems a good sign...!!!!😆
At last wishing all the best to Mr. MSK..He would have to try very hard to woo this geet...!!!!!👍🏼
Wonderful writing mariam...
love you alottt...🤗

And that is what I call a true writer. Someone who can take a single sentence from another text and elaborate on it so beautifully! You have written down what I didn't, what I couldn't! I love these lines! I now down to you for writing them! 👏

When you say that you'll be scared to talk to the girl, I know what you mean but I'll be on the other end of the line. You know, such people might seem the hardest to talk to but once you get in their good books, they're always going to be there for you. 😊

Yes, I have read Obsession and that's what introduced both of us officially, remember? I had sent you a PM after reading a little of it. Of course I've noticed the influence and importance of poetry in it. But I didn't think that you liked poetry this much.. I'm glad you like the two stanzas that I've inserted in here. I had actually written them way before I wrote anything from this story and since they were somewhat related to this chapter, I put them here. And I don't write 'poetry' poetry but a stanza here an there sometimes. If in the future story, I get inspiration to write a stanza, I surely will. 😳

As you say, Geet isn't as oblivious to him but she is t as observant either! MSK is definitely going to have to do something to win her heart! 😆

Thank you Palin, for this wonderful feedback which I had to read countless number of times to think of what to reply! Love you too! 🤗

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: shabnam22
loved it...

I'm glad you like it! 😳

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

yaar marium..

me toh logo ke comment padh padh ke andar dhasti jaa rahi hu..!!

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: Diva7

my my
it was beautifully written dear... where were u till now hmm

thanks to all d
people who bugged u so much to post it😆

poems r so lovely
...

luvd her narration of
love

now she's stuck wid
"most wanted guy " of her class😆

well indeed his eyes
r worth of gushing😳

luvd d update...plz
do continue😊

Thank you Diva! 😊

I was right here in this forum as a reader but the people you're thanking just wouldn't let me remain only a reader! 😆

I'm glad you like the poems. And yes, his eyes are worth gushing.. 😳