If Only You Saw Me (1) - Page 29

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Kahan dhas rahi ho?! Aur kyun?

Originally posted by: mayyo13

And that is what I call a true writer. Someone who can take a single sentence from another text and elaborate on it so beautifully! You have written down what I didn't, what I couldn't! I love these lines! I now down to you for writing them! 👏

When you say that you'll be scared to talk to the girl, I know what you mean but I'll be on the other end of the line. You know, such people might seem the hardest to talk to but once you get in their good books, they're always going to be there for you. 😊{I know it dear thats why i wrote she would be as honest as her diary...Honesty is what we seek in a relation first...😊}

Yes, I have read Obsession and that's what introduced both of us officially, remember? I had sent you a PM after reading a little of it.{yes,i remember about pm but i thought i was after "beauty"..anyways i was stalking you a way before that on sarita's thread...😆}Of course I've noticed the influence and importance of poetry in it. But I didn't think that you liked poetry this much.. I'm glad you like the two stanzas that I've inserted in here. I had actually written them way before I wrote anything from this story and since they were somewhat related to this chapter, I put them here. And I don't write 'poetry' poetry but a stanza here an there sometimes. If in the future story, I get inspiration to write a stanza, I surely will. 😳

As you say, Geet isn't as oblivious to him but she is t as observant either! MSK is definitely going to have to do something to win her heart! 😆

Thank you Palin, for this wonderful feedback which I had to read countless number of times to think of what to reply!{haww..you found it hard to reply me..common yaar you have replied to Zarin's,sheesh's comments before me..maine toh sidha sadha sa comment diya hai..😆} Love you too! 🤗

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Are you sure you are talking about me? 😆

Thanks for the compliments.I will try to curb my crazy side and be a good girl so I don't spoil your impression of me. 😉

I find it easier to become a writer. One just writes and finds a set of people who will be willing to read it. No offence to other writers. This is what I feel about writing.

But to be a priced commentator and reader who is being blackmailed into writing. I wonder who needs to be scared of who here.😆.

And stop thinking about expectations please. I find it is the most bothersome thing ever. I am trying hard to get out of its clutches.

Just write whatever you fancy. And I am sure it will be good.

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

super late..let me finish SOl n get back

muaxxx

Originally posted by: sweetkj

apne bed me hi..

and because man people are analyzing things to microscopic level.!!

and i think you guys havewrittenway more in analyzing and replying than the original update was..

marvelous.

Originally posted by: yappingduck

a very interesting read... loving it

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

awww

that last line made me smile...

sometimes cheesy is the best way

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Well.. Even I'm amazed at how minutely observant many people around here are!
Yes. Analysing says a lot more than the original update because explanations and elaborations are all done through that..

And don't you feel small in front of these analyses! Your comment means as much to me as all the other over here! 🤗