If Only You Saw Me (1) - Page 30

Originally posted by: punam2712

so geet wants to know what is so attractive about him

Beautifully written part about her moments spent away from home... she misses them all so much.

Originally posted by: TheBrat

"...You know no matter how many friends I have, you are always special, because you're someone who knows me inside out, who listens without questioning me, without judging me. You're a mirror to my soul, which projects what I actually am.." Extract from diary of TheBrat.😆

Yeah yeah I know what you're thinking. 😆

Great minds think alike and hence am pleasantly surprised to find her thoughts. 😆

Wow! What you wrote is on the same lines of what the girl wrote. Great minds really do think alike. You and her!😃


And I agree with each and every alphabet of hers. Yes, being loved is the greatest gift anyone could ever have. The kind of love doesn't matter really. And that love is something we are surrounded with often but recognize it seldom. As they say we only get to know something when we don't have it with us, a simple thing like having a pillow fight with your sibling becomes a luxury when you are away from them, your family.

So perfectly put! Being loved is a gift..👏


I could almost picture her write her diary sitting in the common room, oblivious of everything, not paying any heed to anything or anyone around her, her stopping writing for a moment when she felt the paranoia of being observed, only to mentally wave of the thoughts and carry on with her work, although quite disturbed now... Oh man I could see all of it in a motion picture.

Well.. I'm surprised to know that I could portray it well enough for you to see it!😳


Although I don't picture DD as Geet. I picture this woman. Don't ask me why. Oh btw in this picture she looks scary but I kind of liked her. Watch the intel ad "Go do something wonderful" to find her.




I recognise this girl. In fact, I found her cute when I first saw the ad. And as for you not picturing DD as Geet, we're both on the same page!😆I mentioned in reply to Zarin's comment that I haven't yet been able to name her Geet..


Moving on, there's something that caught my attention. You showed that it's not that she can't make friends it is that she prefer not to. Often we generalize people into a certain categories based on some preconceived notions. Oh, you write journal, doesn't talk much, have selected friends? Go sit in the group with title Introvert. Do you play sports, talk like there's no tomorrow, come on get a tattoo on your hand saying "I am an extrovert"

When do people understand that not everyone can fall under two distinct categories? We are what we are by circumstances but more than circumstances it is our choice to be what we are.

Very well said, Shika! I absolutely despise this 'custom'. Of looking at every person on the face of this earth with the same glasses! There can never be any distinct category in which two different people can fall. Every person has a reason for being the way they are, mostly it's their choice, like you said.


Last but not the least did I tell you I love this girl so very much? I don't know why the hell have you even thought of people being disappointed or let down or god knows what with this part, but trust me, if the part one was like a prelude, this is where the story actually started for me. Me loving it <3

PS: Did I tell you I wolf whistled when she told about the group having a certain Maan Singh Khurana and another party coming up? I love love love you.😆

I'm glad you like this chapter though I'm still not completely over the nervousness I felt while posting it!😳 And now I'm fretting over what I'm going to do with the certain Maan Singh Khurana and the party!😆

Thank you Shika!🤗

Originally posted by: Onir

Beautifully written part about her moments spent away from home... she misses them all so much.

Oh for her to figure out what's in the smile she will have to notice & then her heart will only know why all of a sudden everything goes dhak -dhak...😉

Very fresh in the way you've presented this one ...😊Waiting to see what's in store for her during the speech the party as well as the team work she will ahve to do with someone special😳

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Mariam,

Thanks for continuing😃

Your comment on love brought back some comments which I heard on the radio last valentine's day. The RJ was going about a market place and asking, so who is your valentine. One boy answered sheepishly that he did nt have a girlfriend. The RJ turned and told him ' you do have a family don't you, you do love them don't you, so why can't they be your valentine, isn't after all valentine's day a day for acknowledging the people you love, so why this conditioning of our minds.'

It was a thought that that RJ put in my mind that day. Conditioning of minds.

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

It was beautiful.. U know i'm just like the geet u described in this update.. =P .. the only difrnc is that i dont have a diary :p and i have friends.. But they are the ones who talk and i just listen most of the tym.. I can be like a chatter box in I.F but in real i'm really a quite and shy person =p ., i loved this geet .. Hehe.. I really enjoyed reading this.. Now waiting to read the next update.. Do cont soon and thnx for the pm.. :D .. Love ya.. Muaahh..