maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: PariNain

that was very gud nisho
i never read escorted Business
but your poem is just wow
so deep meaning ur words have
so nice
u r improving very gud

finally 😊

your highness get time for me😃

thanxxx alot

chalo kuch to improvment hui meri writing mai😆😆

did start reading from last part😕

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neha gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

KAUNSE AALE MAI

AAGRA KE BARELI

dike, na to agra na barely...
mahra aala to baraut me hai...

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

@ neha : arre tu to badi patar patar bole se

thodi lagam laga aaoni jeeb ke

choriya ne itna bolna nahi chahiye

samjhi

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: neha5058

dike, na to agra na barely...
mahra aala to baraut me hai...

tu ek kaam kar

maare ghar aaja

mera bateu saari time kahe ja hai

ki mane usska ghar

paagal khaana banaa diya😆😆

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neha gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
@ neha : arre tu to badi patar patar bole se
thodi lagam laga aaoni jeeb ke
choriya ne itna bolna nahi chahiye
samjhi

dike, bhagwan ne yo muh bona khatar hi pakdaya hai to bolu kyu na, pehle to mainey iska jawab do...
ar chhori na bolengi to ke chhore bolenge???

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neha gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

tu ek kaam kar

maare ghar aaja

mera bateu saari time kahe ja hai
ki mane usska ghar
paagal khaana banaa diya😆😆

theek se...
hehehe

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: neha5058

theek se...
hehehe

chal mai thaare jiju ne kahu su

uski saali aan lag rahi ahi

woh bhi9 raazi ho jaayega

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: neha5058

dike, bhagwan ne yo muh bona khatar hi pakdaya hai to bolu kyu na, pehle to mainey iska jawab do...
ar chhori na bolengi to ke chhore bolenge???

tere te kine kah diya

muh bol ke liye se

yu to khaana khaan ke liye diya tha raam ne

samjhi tu