maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 105

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no :17

for ff life partnerby palindrome

from geet point of view

(spelling mistake count karna is not allowed)

rishto ka kaisa yeh pahlou

hai aaj nazar aaya

ke ab toh

ajnabi sa lag raha hai

mujhe mera hi saaya

kehna aasan hai ki

bada gaya hai woh

par woh to badala hi nahi

jo badle hai

woh to mere hi ahsaas hai

mein jaanti thi

ki woh rishte unke liye khaas hai

par kyu

par kyu aaj mujhe

unke liye sabse khaas hone ki

lagi yeh nayi aas hai

yeh sab to mere liye

ajnabi se ahsaas hai

kyu mein itna badal gayi

kya mein sach mein itni nazuk thi ki

rishto ki thodi si tapan se hi pighal gayi

aaj to mujhe

aarav bhi rishto mein mujh se pakka laga

kyoki uss masoom ne

khushi khushi de diya

apne khaas hone ka ahsaa

is nanhi pari ko

jis se bhi jyaada khaas hone ki

abhi hui thi mujhe aas

hey my dear mami

chillexxx

now you have to listen

so please relaxxx

mami batata hu mein

aapko ek sachai

jo yeh rishto mein jalan

aur sabse khaas hone hi aas ki havaa

abhi aap se hai takrai

yeh mujhse ho kar hai aaie

aur

rishto mein sabse khaas hone ki chah

yahi hai rishto ki sachai

yeh baat aur hai ke

aap khud kuud gai iss aag mein

aur mere charo aur

yeh meri pyaari dadi ne hai lagayi

please tell me guys

lines are good aur not

me waiting for your reply

Originally posted by: palindrome

woah there is poem for life partner too...😆

I am bound to like it no matter what...!!!

decent description of geet's turmoil during sad phase of the story..Thank you for writing it dear...😊