bandishein mohabbat#4 LAST PART+EPI pg/134 may11th

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Wat happens wen love turns to hatred and then revenge??

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PART 41:

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bache ko duniya mein laake usse har din maarne se toh acha hai usse duniya mein naa hi lao!! Think of it geet ill leave the house and come to u we will stay far away bt abort this child TERI MAA!!! TERA BACHA!! U are concerned for ur unborn baby and I am worried for the future of my 18 year old girl who has faced so much of pain for no reason who is going to spoil whole of life for loving a beast!!!


Geet held her stomach tightly thinking about the time she spent with maan, how selflessly she gave into him. He is indeed a beast who has taken away everything and gave pain in return. THE SEED OF LOVE?? NO SEED OF HATRED!!


For him it might be anything but for geet its her love!!! The love for maan, still she cant forget the fact that he loved her, its only the revenge that made him do such brutal act with her. It was late night, rano was sleeping but for geet, sleep was far away. She went to her mom, kissed her forehead how cud u break my pride so rudely?? so brutally??


She backed off immediately, I am sorry mama I know I broke the trust u had on me but... she ran away towards the kitchen held it in her hand firmly, closed eyes shut as the knife pierced into the skin of the wrist slitting it away and then the hand went to her stomach, all geet could do was to cry for letting her baby die because of her!!


I am sorry beta mujhe maaf kardo, jo baatein mama ne kaha woh galat nahi hai but I cant let someone say things which are unacceptable. I cant give you father!! Maine apni maa ka sarr jhuka diya aur ab jo woh chahti hai main nahi karsakti I cant abort you never usse pehle I will take my life!! Tumhare saath tumhari maa ki bhi maut hogi!!!


With that geet was about to faint on the floor when someone held her in strong arms, picking up... geet what did you do?? How could you?? God dammit please don't close your eyes!!!


After an hr,

Aadi: maan sir rahul was till now in US abhi kolkatta mein land hua uska flight and he is in the hospital, geet ko hospital mein admit kiya gaya!!


The phone line went dead!! Maan was too shocked to say anything, he arranged a charted flight and left for kolkatta

@HOSPITAL:

Doctor: nothing to worry she is out of danger blood loss hua hai time peh tum logon ne unhe yaha le aaye warna pata nahi kya ho jaata she might have had a miscarriage. We have given her blood but take care of her she is very weak. Aap unka khayal rakhiye ga the doctor advised


Rahul turned towards rano, kaisi maa hai aap?? I know you might have said something to her ab tak uski dimaag mein aisi baat nahi aayi just to save her baby she married me how could you?? Being a mom how could you let your daughter do something like this to herself?? She was in pain and you were sleeping?? Itni bhi kya neend aunty?? The moment you called me to ask for geet's address I have booked my flight ticket I know aisa kuch hoga, aap please geet ko apni haal peh chodke wapas chale jaye warna woh phir se kuch karegi jayiye


Rano: I didn't know rahul geet aisa karegi I want to meet her for once let me... no aunty abhi hosh mein aayi hai usse aap nahi milengi saying this rahul entered the room to see geet, she was staring at him with tears, my baby is safe rahul the only thing that was in her mind


Rahul: why are you worried for the baby now?? Uss waqt kya hua jab khud ko maarne waali thi?? You have been strong till now ab kya hua??


Geet: divorce papers ready rakho I want to move away somewhere mama se bhi dur kahi aur jaana hai mujhe geet said as rahul sat beside her, caressing her hair


Rahul: thik hai magar you will get my financial support jaha bhi jao, geet nodded for yes just then rano entered the room with tears in her eyes


Rano: I am sorry geet mujhe maaf karde beta pata nahi aisi baatein maine kaha se kar diya I am really sorry. I am going back to HP tu apna khayal rakh aur apne bache ka bhi par main wapas aaongi kuch time tujhe akela chod rahi hoon bus with that said she left while geet caught the final glimse of her mama


Rahul: waise geet now you need to take even more care of yourself, you have lost so much of blood and for your kid it wont be safe ... tum mere liye aaye yaha??


Rahul: kya karon?? Aana pada yaar friend hoon tumhara pata hai arjun was with me in US. Rati is recovering all because of your brother issi liye uski behen ke liye main yaha aagaya he said hugging geet closer


Geet: tum yaha kab tak ho?? ... I guess for a day uske baad mujhe wapas jaana hai kuch aur kaam baaki hai waha


The pair of eyes which were watching rahul and geet burned in jealousy. Maan just stomped inside unable to take it anymore, while geet looked up to find maan ever in anger


Geet: maan... haan maan chalo mere saath with that said maan went towards geet holding her hand...meri patni ko iss tarah lejaane ka haq tumhe nahi hai Mr. maan singh khurana and it will be better you stay in your limits


Maan: oh so now you came to know of your so called wife's condition. Maanta hoon u have admitted her in the hospital lekin what were you doing in US leaving her alone in a place which is a city outskirt??


Rahul: I don't feel the necessity to explain you anything and it would be better if you leave us alone he decalred


Maan: nahi jaonga I want to speak to geet please excuse me...Mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni maan leave


Maan: tumne kaha aur maine kar diya band karo yeh natak I tod you already you are mine aur mujhe koi fark nahi padta ki tumhari shaadi ho gayi ya nahi you will always remain mine get that straight into your head


Geet: rahul suna abhi abhi Mr. maan singh khurana ne kya kaha?? Maanlon kya?? You will remain my loyally wedded husband and maan!!! maan will still live with me!! He will give me everything afterall he is not like my brother use and throw after getting satisfied


u want to know wats in my mind right?? Toh suno I am going to marry parineeta for daadi lekin tum bhi mere saath rahogi aise hi. Tumhe jo chahiye woh milega mujhse anything u want. I promise tumhe kisi bhi cheez ki kami nahi hogi akhir main tumhare bhai ke jaise toh nahi ban sakta na ki use and throw after getting satisfied

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UFF GEET N BABY R SAFE..
MAAN CAME ...GOOD GEET GAVE HIM RIGHT ANSWERS
WAITING FOR MORE CONTINUE SOON
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