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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2:

FLASH BACK:

Rano: geet uth ja jaldi beta main tujhe kabse jaga rahi hoon tu hai ki kitna soti rehti hai college ka last day geet for god sake get up

Rano tried waking up geet bt she started cuddling up more and more into the spread finally left with no option rano sent CHOTU to wake her up. Chotu is geet's jaan, her puppy she just goes ga ga with her antics. Chotu came on to the bed, she saw geet is in deep sleep she started licking geet's face badly and she is no where to stop. Finally getting irritated geet dragged chotu into the spread and started sleeping with her bt chotu started licking her hand now and at last geet gave up and sat on the bed rubbing her eyes making chotu seated on her lap.

Geet: chotu tu aaj kal bohut badmaash banta jaa raha hai main tujhse baat nahi karongi

chotu's pic i have given already in the character sketch bt again pasting it here for convinience

Chotu felt bad and she started at geet with world's most innocent look awww!!! How can geet be angry on this perfect creation of god who made this puppy with utmost cutey cutey looks. Geet caressed her and started playing with her rano who was watching all this felt bad for her daughter who was treated no less than a piece of rag in the house. Even though geet hailed from a rich family yet it was a very conservative family she was only 14years when her elder sister raji died(for the world) no murdered(which is truth for the handa family who killed their own daughter) and her fault was that she fell in love' brij killed her ruthlessly bt this family was the most reputated family in HP no one dares to raise their voice against them coz they even use political influnce to get things in their favour this was the thing that happened even in the case of raji since raji's death geet's condition worsened in her house she was allowed to study coz they wanted geet to get married to a reputated family and today was the last day of her college uff!!! She remembered its last day!!! Last day started ringing in her mind soon rano came to geet and took chotu and asked geet to get ready. She freshened up and came back her mother was ready with her breakfast she fed geet with her own hands aahh how much geet likes her mother feeding food. She then started on her scooty and reached her college where her frnds especially meera were waiting eagerly for her arrival.

Meera: kyun jhalli itni jaldi kaise aagayi mujhe toh laga tha ki tu na shaam tak toh pakka aajayegi

Geet: sorry meera kal raat chotu ke saath khelte khelte time ka pata nahi chala I am sorry I woke up late today

Meera: its ok geet chal we have loads of things to do

Geet: things like?

Meera: we have slam books to scribble and then have to pose for tons of photos and then we are even planning for a movie as it is the last day

Geet: are u in ur senses meera? Brij bhai ko pata chala toh who mujhe kacha kha jayenge movie is a big no for me

Meera: no ways geet everybody is going u have to come

Geet: no meer chodo yaar if I get caught u know wat will happen plz don't force me

Meera: ok ok chalo atleast we will join all other frnds

Geet: ok chalo

Soon all the students had a great time in the college for the whole day celebrating their independence their last day at the same time feeling bad for leaving each other its evening now geet had no track that today something will change her life foreva. Its hell late now and she was scared to death of facing her brother, her darji. She left for her house wen her scooty broke down while leaving thankfully it stopped near a garage so she got it repaired and reached home where her brother brij was waiting for geet to come back and the moment she entered the house he started hitting her badly using abusive words its first time eva in her life that she reached home late.. bt brij is an animal with no mercy he hit geet very badly and warned everyone not to feed her for the night and he locked geet in the store room with no lights geet was frightened with wateva has happened she sat down in the room which looked as if the four walls will consume her and she out of fear fainted' her mother stood outside the store room extremely feeling helpless she opened the window of the store room which is now the only source of light and sent chotu inside the store room. Soon chotu was successful in bringing geet to consious state now geet felt relaxed and looked on the neck of chotu her mother sent her some chocklets to eat quickly she untied them and ate them as chotu started watching geet with his tongue out panting and scratching her head uff geet forgot everything for a while and hugged chotu '.. after having the chocklets she dozzed off finally in the morning brij opened the door and dragged her out she got an idea that her punishment hasn't ended yet watching geet in pain chotu started shouting. Brij hates the mere sight of chotu he lifted chotu and was abt to throw her away wen geet stopped him

Geet: bhai plz aapko jo bhi sazaa deni hai mujhe dijiye chotu ko kuch mat karna plz chotu ki punishment bhi main jhel longi plz bhai

Rano reached brij and took chotu away from his hands '' yes rano was the reason for brij not doing anything to chotu somewhere he respected his mother how much eva he was bad and rano knew geet just cant survive without her chotu so she always saves chotu from brij's anger. Darji came to geet and brij left her.

Darji: geet rahul se teri shaadi pakki kardi''.. ek hafte ke andar andar shaadi karwadonga kal jo harkat tune ki hai uske baad main tujhe wapas aisa kuch karne nahi doona samjhi tu? Kal ki muhurat nikli hai saagai ko toh tu tayyar hoja

Geet: par darji''' geet cudnt even complete her sentence

Darji: GEET!!! Teri yeh majaal ki tu mujhe palatke jawab de rahi hai? With this he slapped her tight on her cheek geet who was already on a fatigue due to the last night incidence fell down rano was coming to her rescue wen darji stopped her

Darji: rano teri wajah se geet aise banti jaa rahi hai agar isne agli baar jawab diya toh main bhool jaonga ki yeh meri poti hai'.. now take her to her room I don't want to see this girls face how dare she comes home late bachalan ladki pata nahi kal kya kya gul khilake ghar aayi

Precap: entry of jugnu😉 ' geet's maama 😆


ok i am giving back to back updates i have already updated in the mrng and now again bt now i want to know how many of u are actually intrested in this ff maan's entry will take time like after four to five updates coz now i want u all to know abt geet's life in detail and ya plz check out the character sketches i have so many of them wat to do i updated them on two pages have a look at the prolouge ull find the index for updates plz like and comment and do tell me if i am bad with moi writings if u want updates add me will pm u phew!!! will update soon

previous part: part1


next part:part3

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
nice FF...
plz add me to your PM list..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update yaar harika

well we understood that geet family is very conservative next thing is rahul se shadi pehle se hi pakki to is beech me maan kab mila i mean when she fell in love with him next what enenmy maan have wit arjun lots more to know to geet preg bi he to maaneet love each other before only
Edited by maaneet5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
aww chotu is sooo cuteee waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Both the parts were awesme dear
why did geet go to kolkatta when she married rahul?and she is preggy we al can guess that it's maan's baby
hmm toh past startd nw..aww geet n chotu choo cute..wow geet brave girl u knw y she is takng chotu on bed iam hell scared of dogs n puppys i hav animal phobia..
Nw waitng to knw mre
update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
bloody bas***d family
hate dem to the core

interesting ff continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
awesome update
her family r real bas***ds
i hope in present geet give a nice reply to that bas***d brij and her so called darji
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1...
loved the update dear...
so geet is pregnant..
rahul and sameera helped her for saving her child...loved them...
felt bad for maan...


Part 2...
loved chotu very much..
and brij killed raji..bcoz she loved some one..
now i understood geet state...
so she married rahul to protect her child and also protect maan😕
amazing updates..

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