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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely concept harika continue soon plz pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHARACTERS

MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Gurmeet Choudhary


GEET MEHRA
Drashti Dhami


RAHUL MEHRA
Ashish Kapoor


SAMEERA KAPOOR
Priyal Gor at CID Bravery Awards


PREM JUNEJA
Harshad as Prem from show Kis Desh Mein Hai Mera Dil



HEER GUPTA
Additi Gupta as Pihu

ARJUN HANDA
Arjun Bijlani

RATI MEHRA
Rati Pandey
Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

lovely concept

as u have made geet married taht rahul plz dont let that rahul touch geet ist a request

and add pm me whenever u update

dont worry geet has a reason to get married and abt rahul u will know dear will again update tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079


that means she is pregnant with maan's child

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice cs..waiting for an update now
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Originally posted by: maneetlover1

nice concept harika..plz pm me when u update...

sure dear will pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one but gee married rahul😡..not liking but throwing up show som hope
wtng for the updts
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PART 1:

Soon the rituals of bidaai started Geet sat in the car with Rahul holding her hand she was crying badly she cudnt take the pain of being separated from Rano her mother. She was the only person geet wud always miss she had been with her all the while through thin and thick she loved geet madly. Geet hugged her mother coming out of the car brij watched both mother and daughter as if they were over acting and he sighed, Rano made geet sit in the car and rahul asked the driver to move on geet watched her mother through the window till she was visible to her' taking her sight for one last time geet hugged herself tightly crying more and more. Rahul cudnt see her and he tried consoling her with his palm resting on her back patting. She was missing arjun, her younger brother so much.. he was not there with her since long as he is in US with Rati and also he was not intrested in watching this dramatic marriage.

Maan started waking aimlessly on the road of HP he was on the verge of breaking down badly he cudnt compose himself he felt as if the ground is slipping from his feet, he wanted to destroy everything he felt his heart wud give up beating anytime it was pitch dark he left his car behind he didn't know where the road was leading to and it started raining as if the sky is also crying along with him

Oo yaara
Yaara
Oo yaara
Ishq ro raha hai palkon pe
Hai rooh bheegi har jagah se
Tu bedardi jaane na

He saw a bridge nearby and sat there crying pouring out his heart he remembered the time spent with geet in the rain her heels broke he carried her in the rain to house in his arms that was the most romantic time of his life he had eva spent

Dil kaanch sa, dil kaanch sa todheya
Dil toote toh jaane na jodheya
Mera dard na tu pehchaane
Bin chot lagey ah jaane
Mera dard na tu pehchaane
Bin chot lagey ah jaane
Ki paaya mol mere ishq da
Dil kaanch sa, dil kaanch sa todheya

He got up and started shouting

Ho ik tujhpe tha bharosa
Tu zubaan se phir gaya
Mujhpe toh aasmaan sa
Koi jaise gir gaya
Tere kadmon mein tha rakha
Maine yeh jahaan
Thukraya tune mujhko
Jaaun main kahan
Meri samajh na kujh bhi aave
Meri jaan chali na jaave
Meri samajh na kujh bhi aave
Meri jaan chali na jaave
Ik tere baad jeena hai sazaa
Dil kaanch sa, dil kaanch sa todheya

Maan: y did u do this to me geet? I agree I had taken things in all wrong way bt I neva expected u to leave me this way where will I go geet? Wat will I do without u? I still want u geet I don't care even if u are married bt mah love for u will always be the way it was come back to me u cant move on this way leaving me back after wateva we shared no!!! neva!!!

He again started walking with no destiny DESTINY?? His destiny is geet nothing else he wanted her in his life no matter wat he will talk to rahul he will try getting her back he thought

Raahon mein chalte chalte
Badla kyun raasta

He thought abt the marriage which had taken his geet away from him which had changed her way seperating her from him


Ik pal mein de gaya tu
Sadiyon ka faasla
Sapno ka mere manzar
Daraaron se bhara
Kuch hai jo mere haathon ki
Lakeeron se gira
Rab wohi yaar milaave
Jo chadh ke kadey na jaave
Rab wohi yaar milaave
Jo chadh ke kadey na jaave
Sajna da aye vichodha hai bura
Dil kaanch sa, dil kaanch sa todheya
Dil toote toh jaane na jodheya
Oo yaara...

Soon he fainted on the deserted road his driver who was searching for him since long found him unconsious on the road he carried him to the car and understood he had fever so he drove him to the nearest hospital.

RAHULS HOUSE:

Geet and rahul reached his house nobody were there in the house expect a person sameera she came to geet hugged her

Sameera: kaisi hai geet?

Geet: main thik hoon sam bus thoda sa weakness hai

Sameera: yes baby I understand aisi halat mein tujhe rest karna chahiye bt we need to start soon coz rahul has some last minute things to fix by the time he completes his work ill drop u in kolkata and get back to him as u know we have to leave to US geet I feel sorry for not being there bt we have Rati to take care of and also much work there as just now we came out of the financial crisis

Geet: sam u don't need to tell me all this I understand I am also thankful to u both for helping me out its coz of u two that I am out of danger all I want is mah child to be safe and sound geet said this caressing her still flat tummy mah baby is the only reason of mah survival I cant efford to loose this possession of mine and I am glad to have a sister like u who holds no bond by blood still u are concerned abt me thanks sam I was scared that if mah family gets to know abt the child and they harm him bt now I am carefree

Rahul: enuf of this rona dhona its time for u two to start now the flight is ready

Saying this rahul hugged both the women and went to his room to complete his works and soon sam and geet left to kolkata.

HP:

Dr: don't worry he is fine just a normal fever he will be back to consious by morning as I have given the medicine and who are u to the patient

Driver: sir I am his driver.. shaadi mein gaye the saab pata nahi baahar aakar baarish mein bohut bheege toh main kal unko delhi leja sakta hoon saab?

Dr: ya sure nothing to worry

KOLKATA HOUSE:

Both geet and sam entered the house it was a beautiful mansion in the outskirts of kolkata where only few ppl who are aged who are retired from their family bondings lived. And an aged couple welcomed both the women.

Sameera: geet inse milo yeh hai yashoda aur chamanlal yeh dono tumhare caretakers ka kaam karenge thik hai? They'll provide u with everything u need anything bejijhak inse keh dena

Geet: thanks sameera

Geet looked at the couple yashoda caressed her head ' she started crying

Yashoda: nahi beti aisi haalat mein nahi rote tumhe khush rehna hai aur hum dono hai tumhare paas toh rona kis baat ka

Geet hugged her tight the moment geet saw yashoda she cud relate her with rano she was so much missed her motherly warmth and she was on cloud9 finding this lady who so much resembled her mother

Sameera: enuf geet aaj tune bohut roliya ab bas kar aur rest kar mujhe wapas rahul ke paas jaana hai uske baad we have a flight to catch so I am really sorry geet for not being there with u for sometime atleast bt I promise once we get back from US we'll have g8 time. Take this card and car keys they are of ur use na so keep them ill deposit money in ur account weneva u need u can withdraw the money

Geet: yeh sab ki ''..sam did not let her complete her talk

Sameera: chup mujhe behen kehti hai toh meri baat bhi maanni padegi u will remain our responsibility till u give birth to this child and also till this child gets into his fourth year no more discussions on that after all its ur money geet in true terms plz don't take things in wrong way

Both geet and sam hugged each other and sam left back geet loved the house so much

OK will not give precap coz I'll update soon and I am a mad fan of songs and this song from hate story makes me cry so much so I just used it here as the lyrics suit the situation and I have a big list of songs with updates coming on the way I promise ull not get bored of the songs and the updates trust me on that and ya from next update ill be going to flash back and ull know wat has went wrong between maaneet and i have few more characters list will also update all the others in a while so plz like the update and comment soon me waiting for ur response and if u want pms add me will pm u 😊

previous part: PROLOUGE

next part: part2


Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neethuMG

nice one but gee married rahul😡..not liking but throwing up show som hope
wtng for the updts

check the update now dear ull understand things in a better way
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved yashoda part so much plz update soon

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