bandishein mohabbat#4 LAST PART+EPI pg/134 may11th - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago
she has changed...no more the same geet...
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Nice part ... Maan ko apne kiye ki saza theek de rahi ha Geet
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come back dear
waiting for update
missing this ff
happy new year dear
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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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PART 45:


Maan sat on the bed checking out few files of office when geet watched him busy with the papers, maan she called out. The way geet called him felt so nice, reminding him the night when they consummated for the very first time. Maan just looked at her expecting she will tell him something but got a shock when he heard her say... will you make love to me now?? Suddenly those flashes of him forcefully making wild love to her flashed infront again clouding him with an envelope of guilt


She blinked her eyes but in no time the evil grin came back. Its just the mood swing which was taking a toll more over the fact of maan realizing his mistake was hitting her hard. It cant be!! He can never regret it was just his lust that overtook... even if arjun did use aniee what was her mistake in all that?? What he did to her is something immoral, something inhuman. Maan understood the smirk on geet's face. He is the one who has to support her, he is the one who has to make her believe that he will not touch her ot anymore. His love which changed into hatred and then revenge is love again, a love which is unbounded. But for gee tots all about the bandishein she put, no the situations, the conditions which were put on her mohabbat on the love she trusted.


Maan caressed geet's face which seemed to have millions of questions lingering, I did not get you here for my desires or pleasures geet, I will not touch you anymore bus ek akhri baar mera yakeen karo iske baad ill not ask you for anything. Iss halat mein main tumhe akela nahi chod sakta, I deserve every bit of your hatrednes. You made me believe in love, you made me realize how selfless love is. And I was the one who crushed your innocence I will give my life for you...Mr. khurana aapko lagta hai main aapki inn baton par yakeen karongi? I told you already I am not a fool anymore you better get that and I know my way out, mujhe yaha nahi rehna I will leave the house, she said it out of the blue. Geet is planning to leave him that wat the thing lingering in her mind since the time she came to the mansion since the first day


How can you go away?? I wont let you do it he replied firmly, instead with a confidence but he failed understanding that she is saying all true it was his mind telling that she can never. Geet laid on the bed switching off the light. She decided earlier she will escape tonight not matter what she will not stay back anymore.


It was mid night geet looked at maan for one last time, she didn't know whether by going against her mother is right or not but she cant stay with maan anymore, its just getting difficult every passing second for her to stay back, to see him around her round the clock. She got up and made way outside.


Nobody knew what was running in geet's mind. Everybody were in deep sleep. She managed escaping out the mansion, the garden surrounding it was filled with thick bushes. Geet slowly walked tip toeing towards the light which indicated her that it is the way to road. She covered her face with the saree pallo and walked with extreme care looking straight and then a shrill voice from behind GEET!! her steps froze with the name god she is caught, her body began to sweat profusely and lips started to tremble with the fear engulfing her around it was an animalistic voice very very known voice. Geet turned to find a similar face, and her world seemed to crash. What was she thinking off when she was stepping out?? how could she?? That's the only thing lingered in her mind


Veerji!! She said taking steps back as brij started to inch closer... haan main hoon geet I was searching for you since long time and finally you are here how dare you even try to betray us with the marriage thing tujhe kya laga ill leave you?? Tune jo kiya uske baad main tujhe chod bhi kaise sakta hoon?? Geet still walked back fearing about the life inside her, she is already dead within ...Its only the child's life that is making her to still live on the earth otherwise she would have been buried long back.


Veerji aap mujhe maar nahi sakte nahi ... she said pressing the pallo close to her mouth which made brij to laugh


What makes you feel that I will leave you geet?? Its high time that you die you have already tattered handa's name with this child inside you breathing but not anymore, before the world gets to know this ill kill youhe replied with a dangerous tone as those words got registered in geet's mind she began to run not knowing where aimlessly.


The darkness of the woods were not letting geet to get a clear view of the things but she will have to do it, brij did not want to give up. He will take geet's life by hook or by crook. Geet hit her leg on the stone and was about to fall she held the tree for support, her throat was going dry with the amount of breath she is taking in, her her muscles started to ache and her stomach was hurting so much with the pain. She herself put the life of her unborn baby at stake. She hid herself behind the bush trying to catch the air sitting down cleaning her sweaty face.


After few seconds she felt someone holding her by arm and pulling out, kaha bhag rahi hai geet?? rajji ne toh sirf pyar kiya aur tu?? Tune toh kisi najaayaz bache ko paal rahi hai andar... saying this he was about to take the sword that fell down when geet took a stone from aside and hit it hard on brij's back. He flinched and fell down, she hit him with her leg and again started to run, but this time back towards the mansion. Its only maan who can save her now, she looked back while running, brij got up she gulped hard and suddenly hit herself into a rigid structure. She looked up,...Maan woh veerji... He is trying to kill my...my baby maan please save me she pleaded and finally fainted down. Maan just picked her up and the security behind him held brij. Its only because of them maan found geet, thanks that he aleast did something like that. He would have strangled brij then and there but he didnt want to do that coz right now geet needed treatment more than that his love and care.


@EARLY MORNING:

Geet got up all of a sudden as those dark images of brij came infront of her. Maan sat beside her brushing her hand, holding her close


Shhh geet chup ho jao kuch nahi hua hamare bache ko woh thik hai you got to take rest please he whispered in her ear, but geet was still not normal the blow she got last night, the fear that crept her last night was something fatal. She has already attempted for suicide and now again her brother tried to kill her child. She feared that brij will come and kill her for sure, maan understood that until and unless brij doesn't get punished geet will not come out of the depression she was facing. He already decided he will punish brij for the deeds he did but who will punish for whatever he did to geet?? how he wished he would have killed brij with his own hands


Brij was finally given a death sentence for the honor killing he did to his own sister and then the murder attempt he did on geet after a week. Maan used all his power to get the case work fast and it did work out this thing only made geet to come back, when the news reached her ears she did come out of the shell. It's the only news that made her mouth to open!! She sits quietly caressing her tummy madly talking to her child. Though maan wanted to spend time with his child and geet he did want her to feel uncomfortable with anything. Geet too started to feel the regret, the guilt in his eyes, and now that she is alive its only cause of maan!! hadnt he saved her she would have been ... but who knows things will go better from now on

Precap: chotu ko bhooll gaye sab?? Krathi and karthi too coming back girls

sorry about the precap girls maine change kar liya something else came into my mind now peej leave your comments peej


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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brij gts bt he desrvs,geet strtd mltng gud going harika👏

me ist😳🥳
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yipee chotu back waiting for the fun now
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

gosh for a sec i was scared
but laterhappy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part
Geet is safe...me happy
Chotu n kids are back...me waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update

Brij got punished n Geet is recovering

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