MG Love???Revenge??? link to thread2 pg 1

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PROLOUGE

It was the wedding night the most awaited day for Handas. They wanted their only daughter get to get married to settle with Rahul and after convincing her for ages she agreed for the alliance. Yes!!! Geet agreed to ger married but did she do it willingly? It was a question only geet can answer . Here in her room she was getting ready looking heavenly in her wedding attire, she stood in front of the mirror. How much she awaited this day. How much she wanted to get married and the day has finally arrived. Alas!!! Her dreams were crushed the day she realised she was just used as pawn by Maan to ruin her brother arjun. She knew her brother can never stoop low, but maan cud never believe the truth she spoke. All she wanted was maan nothing else but destiny had something in else in the store. She looked at her hands which were adorned with mehendi. She wished the name of maan on the hand but it was rahul. Tears clouded her eyes she wiped them away. Soon her eyes refilled... she hated crying she wiped them away again. She couldn't take it anymore, she had to control. She had to look like a happy bride she shud pretend to be the most happiest girl to the world atleast to MAAN!!! Yes she has to be happy. She again checked her make up now. It seemed fine. Just then someone sneaked into the room. She knew who it was. She closed her eyes frustratingly, how much she was telling him that she doesn't want him in her life she wants to move on in life away from him. But Maan is Maan he knows she still loves him. The moment Maan tried approaching geet, she started running away from him bt Maan anticipated it and held her wrist tightly and stopped her

Maan: kaha tak bhagogi geet? Kab tak bhagogi? You know u cant escape from me . I am ur shadow. Stop this drama of marriage. Lets go from here.

Geet: I hate this shadow. It just took away my sanity from me. Don't dare touch me. I am already a filth. You tainted me with ur touch.

Maan: GEET!!!

Suddenly Geet had a sensation of throwing up. Maan left her wrist, taking the oppurtunity Geet ran to the bathroom and started throwing up,, Locking the door behind. Maan got worred he started banging the door asking geet to open it, bt geet had to manage now. Its time for her to reach the mandap

Maan: Geet are u fine? Open the door misty plz

Geet: Mr.khurana aapko meri chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hai aap plz jaayiye I beg of u. I cant take this anymore. You have already ruined me bt plz spare my family. If u do anything they'll be shattered. Its my marriage. Please leave, I request you plz'..

Hearing her plea maan left and geet came out of the bathroom setting herself

Heer: Geet open the door babe. Mandap mein nahi jaana?

Geet: I am coming Heer di just a min

Geet opened the door

Heer: kyun aise kar rahi hai geet? Maan ko ek mauka do plz bechara yehi hai tera wait kar raha hai aisi family ke liye tu apna pyar ko kyun kurbaan kar rahi hai?

Prem: nahi heer isse ab sirf apni nafrat aur apni badle se matlab hai. Don't plead her its just a waste of time

Geet's throat chocked with the words of prem bt yes wateva he said now was true she did not say a word. She composed herself and started walking ' heer led geet to the mandap. Rahul was waiting desperately for Geet. And here she is!!! Descending down from the steps looking ravishing. Soon the, rituals started and marriage took place with rahul filling the maan of geet and tieing the mangalsutra around her neck. Maan was burning from inside watching all this drama. This was the least he expected. He thought geet would atleast back up from the marriage at the last moment, but nothing of such sort happened. He was left shattered. He couldn't do anything coz he promised himself that he had already humiliated her bt not her family. He turned around and left. Geet watched him going and an unknown pain engulfed her bt also she was satisfied watching him helpless


OK THIS IS HARIKA

plz do tell me how is the prolouge i know many of u wud be angry on geet? or may be not? coz u dont know as to y she married rahul bt i promise there is a reason for her doing it trust me this story is all about love and revenge and i also promise ill not disappoint u as the story progresses ull love it and ya it has a happy ending so plz hit the like bottom if u liked it and criticisim is most welcome if u like it ill continue 😛


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.lovemaaneet. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it plz update soon cant understand this geet neither maan😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant Prologue dear..nicely written..👏
loved the concept.
its really interesting...
felt bad for both...
waiting for ur updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

Brilliant Prologue dear..nicely written..👏
loved the concept.
its really interesting...
felt bad for both...
waiting for ur updates...

thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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will again give an update tomorrow only if ppl like it will wait for the response 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept harika..plz pm me when u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i read the prolouge again this line has a meaning?
Suddenly Geet had a sensation of throwing up
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept dear
do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely concept
as u have made geet married taht rahul plz dont let that rahul touch geet ist a request

and add pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: radha.nandini

i read the prolouge again this line has a meaning?

Suddenly Geet had a sensation of throwing up


that means she is pregnant with maan's child

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