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PART 17 ..continued ...

Entering thr maan was shocked to see geet taking even more of alcohol 'marching towards them maan snatched the whiskey bottle from her hand ..

Maan : stop it geet 'enough ..pehle hi kam problem hai jo tum aur talli hujao '

Geet : ahhh 'maan tang mat karoo meri bottle do mujhe peena hai who juice '.

Maan : juice ..?? ya right geet u better just shut up

Maria : patrick u too 'stop drinking its enough for now 'see u also made the poor girl drunk ..

Patrick : maria darling before scolding me ..ask this man who is he to her 'he is taking advantage of her state ..

Maan (Shocked) : what ..!! what the hell r u saying ..

Maria : relax son ..relax he is drunk let me enquire ..
Patrick what non-sense r u talking

Patrick : no maria 'no non-sense ..this girl told me he is nothing much than a friend ..still he kissed her today ..n also tried that day '

While maan was stopping geet to have any of the alcohol ..listening to this his grip loosened over her hand with shock that geet actually told him that he ..

Maan (angered) : geet ..enough ..tum ne uncle se kya kaha ..

Geet (innocently) : mene kya bola ..kuch bhi nahi ..

Patrick (rushing towards maaneet) : aree tou abb bolo 'yeh tumhara husband nahi hai fir tum ko kiss kaise kar sakta hai '

Geet (after few minutes of embarrassing silen she faked cry with a loud pitch) : aaahhh ..inhoon ne meri 1st kiss chora li 'uahhh '

Maan (held his spinning forehead n than after few minutes placing his hand on geet's shoulder) : geet 'geet plss chup hujao yrr ..i am sorry aaj ke baad kabhi kiss nahi karonga but plss chup hujao ..😛

Geet : nahi pehle aap batao kyun kara mujhe kiss 'mien tou aapki best friend hoon na 'friends kiss nahi karte ..aap ne kyun kari ..

Maan (trying to control his anger) : geet I AM SORRY ..nahi karonga dobara ab plss wapis chalo driver aagaya huga hum ghar chale hain '

Geet (stubborn) : nahi mujhe kahin nahi jaana 'aap pehle apni kiss wapis loo ..

maria stood baffled with a slight smile n patrick was still having his drink ..while maan looked at her jaw dropped down ..n next got hell angry with her stubbornness ..well actuallt it was his drinks making him frustrated ...

Maan (raged) : GEET '!!!

Patrick : han kiss wapis lo ..without marriage chokra chukri kiss nahi karne ko mangta hai 'wapis loo

Maria (coming thr) : Patrick now u just shut up 'son I apologies from his side

Maan (frustrated + drunk) : aunty inko door rakheye mujh se plss aur geet hum abhi wapis jaa rahe hain 'samjhi '(turning towards geet but found her missing 'worried he starts looking for her) 'kahan gayi yeh

Maria : son see the door is open 'she must be outside

Maan (rushing outside) : bye aunty 'geet 'yeh larki bhi na

Coming out of the house maan sighed in relief seeing her playing with the rain water 'the enchanting smile of geet's face n her soothing laughter definitely calmed maan's senses 'n he made his way 2wards her seeing her struggling to stand properly ..

Maan : geet aise yahan kyun aagayi 'who bhi bina bataye ..

Geet (nt sparing a glance) : mien aap se baat nahi kar rahi ..aap ne mujhe danta ..aur mujhe mere sawaal ka jawaab bhi nahi diya ..

Maan (wondering when he scolded her ..n then thought she has over done the alcohol that's coz) : acha theek hai 'I am sorry mene tumhain scold kiya abhi plzz wapis chalo driver humien kaise dhundega 'aur tum bemaar bhi hujaogi aise wet dress mien ..

Geet : nahi nahi 'nahi
Nahi aana aapke saath 'aap gande hu
Aur apne meri 1st kiss bhi chora li .

Maan (as he was also drunk so keeping his words in accountability was nt possible n the stubbornness of geet was testing his patience 'n finally he blasted at her ..grabbing her forearm he jerked her 2wards his hard frame) : enough geet 'tum tou aise keh rahi hoo jaise mene tumhain zabardasti kiss kiya '
Iss tarha tou mien bhi boloon tum ne bhi meri 1st kiss chura li ..
Abb kya ..hugaya natak khatam chalo abb ..

Geet (but she ran away clumsily on the wet road screaming) : nahi aaongi aapke saath Casanova Singh Khurana kahin ke ..baat bhi mat karna aap mujh se

Maan : ufff ..geet roku ..ruk jao geet ..

Covering a bit of a distance geet collapsed with a drunken man ..who himself was not able to stand even when geet tried helping him ..
N maan reached thr only to see geet's hand in some1 else hand '

Maan (J as well as angered he marched towards her n separated thr hold with jerk) : kya kar rahi ho yeh tum ..pagal hugayi hu ..aur kuan hai yeh ..

Geet (in a baby tone) : wohh na mene inko gira diya 'sorry uncle

Uncel : hayee mar gaya 'lutt gaya aii mardala iss larki ne

Maan (offering him his hand to get up) : aaiye hath dejeye plss

Uncel : kyun re chamiya ..kis se bhag rahi thi jo 5 foot ka admi nazar nahi aaya ..

Geet : wohh inn se ..yeh na kabhi bhi mujhe kiss karlete hain 😆'fir mujhe kiss wapis bhi nahi dete 😲😲'ek dum dusht danav hai yeh ..

Maan : geet yeh bakwas baad mien karna pehle chalo yahan se ..😛

N he dragged her towards thr car 'while the drunken man followed thr ..

Uncel : iss ne tumhari chumi li ya tum ne iss ki chumi li ..😳

Maan : dekhye humien aapse koi baat nahi karni ..ap jaiye yahan se ..

While geet was in her own thoughts ..

Uncel : nahi yeh tou galat hai na 'poori baat clear karo warna mujhe raat ko neend kaise aayegi 'raat ko yeh chamiya aur iss ki batien hi yaad ayengi ..

Maan : dekho abhi yahan se jao ..warna humien kya apne aapko bhi bhool '//

Geet (suddenly interrupted) : hum don one kiya tha ..

Maan n Uncel : KYA '??

Geet : wahi kya keh rahe thy aap '
Han ' chummi ..😳 😆

Maan : geet 'just shut up
Aur tum abhi ke abhi jao yahan se ..

Geet : nahi uncel aap rook yahan 'aur pocho iss se inn hoon ne meri chumi kyun li ..

Maan (looking everywhr leaving big sighs to remain clam knowing she is drunk) : geet plss car mien beth jao 'plss I beg of u mishty plss

Uncel : abb larka larki ek dosre ki chummi lein tou iss ka tou ek ich matlab hota hai ..

Geet (curios) : kya hota hai ..??

Uncel : yahi ke in dono ka tanka fit hai ..

Geet & Maan : TANKA '??

Uncel : han jab dosre ko dekh kar dil rajdhani ke speed se chalne lage ..ya fir usko maska marne ke liye full english style ke gentlemen wale kapre pehen kar tyaar hu '
Ya fir uss ke liye kuch bhi kar guzarne ka mann hu '
Tab hi tou hota hai tanka fit '

Now maan had actually lost his temper n stepped ahead to punch him but next set of words from geet 'stopped him ..actually shocked him ..

Geet : han yeh sab tou mere saath huya ..

Maan : geet tum yeh '

Geet : han maan dekho 'aap jab uss din barish mien mere paas aaye thay tou sunaa nahi tha kaise mera dil bullet train ki speed par dharak raha tha ..

Geet was lost looking at him expectantly while maan was remembering the moments with geet in that rain 'her smell ..her feeling enveloping him in a complete different world 'n next geet put his hand on her heart 'coming close to him ..looking straight in his eyes ..

Geet : dekho abhi bhi kitni tezzi se dharak raha hai '

Placing her hand on his heart ..n oblivious his other hand clutched her in his embrace by her waist ..

Geet : aapka bhi dharak raha hai tezz tezz ..

Maan : hmm ..tum jo mere paas hu ..

Geet : uss din office mien mene Indian dress aapke liye pehna tha ..aapko pasand hai na '

Maan : han aur mene wohh Mumbai wali party mien tumhare liye hi black blazer pehna tha ..

Geet (clutching his shoulder with a mist eye) : mien buhat darr gayi thi jab dad ne mujhe kidnap kiya sirf aapke paas aana chahti thi ..

Maan (tightening his grip ) : mien bhi ghabra gaya tha jab tum mili nahi '

Geet : is ka matlab .. Maan : iss ka matlab ..

Uncel (coming in b/w thr faces) : iss ka matlab tum dono ka tanka fit hugaya .. love hugaya ..

Maan & Geet (shocked) : love hugaya '!!

The 2 love bird were standing lost in thr own miseries n the person went away walking in an oblivion direction saying continuously ..

Uncel : tanka fit hugaya .,..love hugaya 'love hugaya ..

After some moment may be when the words of the drunken man actually sunk in thr head ..geet parted from the hug ..n said with ever so confused face ..


Geet : par hum tou friends thay na 'fir humein love kaise hugaya '

Maan : bas hugaya geet ..😳

Geet (looking at him with an unknown shimmer in her eyes) : iss ka matlab mien aapse pyaar ..

Maan (with a clumsy smile) : iss ka matlab hum ek dosre se ..

Geet & Maan : pyaar karte hain '



A contended smile spread on thr faces which grew larger with every pacing second 'n next maan heard the most awaited words of his life '
Geet swinging in the fresh cold breeze after the rain said with a loud voice ..

Geet : mujhe pyaar hugaya maan '(laughter) 'mujhe the ultimate cow boy of the school is in love 'I AM IN LOVE WITH U MAAN '😳😳

The time seemed to be stopped for a second just as his heart stopped listening to her confession 'n he stood thr rooted to see her swinging high .. grinning repeating the same thing over and over again blessing his ears with the most blissful words of his life '

He made his way 2wards her smiling n grabbed her waist ..plastering her to his length 'making them both captivated ..he stood gazing her with his deep dark eyes 'while she lowered her eyes whispering for another time ..

Geet : I love u maan '

While maan smiled ear to ear 'placing a lovable kiss on her forehead ..cupping her face in his palm ..

Maan : I love u too mishty '

Saying he leaned 2ward to capture her petal lips yet again ..



but realized she had lost her conscious ..smiling he adored her for a few second n then lifted her in his arms ..n walked back to the car ..



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Remembering the very 1st time he heard her confession a smile enchanted on his face but soon it vanished with a flight confirmation message from adi ..

Maan (looking at the moon) : I am sorry geet 'mujhe pata hai tumhain buhat dukh huga ..but abhi mere paas aur koi option nahi hai '2 months
2 mahine tumhain London mien hi rehna huga ..😭😭
Tumhari jaan ko khatre mien nahi daal sakta mien geet ..
Plss mujhe maaf kardo '😭😭

Thinking how he will face geet from now onn ..it will be difficult for him as well to do this '.after going through soo much he got his life back after good 6 years n now loosing it yet again was not at all n easy thing to do with his own hands ..but still he have to 'he will have to prepare himself for the upcoming days without geet '.thinking about the same ..he slept on the window itself gazing the moon imagining her laughter 'her smiling face in it '




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hope u all liked it ... i tried my level best to keep it as good as i can ..sorry if i dis-appointed u ..
plss do leave ur reviews .. all criticism welcome ..
but atleast let me know whr i lacked ..
WAITING FOR UR REVIEWS N LIKES ..

Luv Ya
All ... Sobia ..

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Inna badaa update 😲, will read it inside blanky,😉

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Loved the update Sobi bhaii...
just ammaazing one,
Talli maneet were just fab, too adorable yet passionate.
The dialogues and everything were awsmn.
Sacchi ka jangli billi hai Geet yarr, nd Maan bechara khud tipsy hai nd isse smhalne chala

Every scene from pub to their drive to Rain to the end was fantastic.
Ur dialogues are specially fab Sobi di, Loved each.
too hillarious.
Showwiee for late comment and chotu too. 😭
Love you 😃
Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazinggg..Mind blowinggg update...
Ufff...Jealous & Possessive Geet...
"Just look at urself..aisa lagta hai poori duniya ki poverty tum par aa gayi hai.. 😆 ...yeh lo paise aur apne liye kuchh kapde kharid lo Yeh Rumaal tum jaise Giant Elephant ko poora nahi hota..." 🤣 🤣 🤣
Hillarious Sobi...kya dialogue tah yeh Geet ka... 😉


Loved the way Geet showed her right on Maan.Maan toh on cloud nine...
Hhhaaayyyeee...their romance in the rain..& the kiss.. 😳 😳

Hehe...Geet talli hoke toh poori out of control ho gayi..
& she said"Inhone first kiss chura ki...Main kahi nahi jaungi pehle aap apni kiss waapas lo" 😳 🤣 ..seriously yaar Geet ne toh koi chance nahi chhoda Maan ko embarrass karne ka..

OMG...OMG...OMG..Maaneet realized tht they r in love & Geet confessed her feelings...
Hhhaaayyyeee...such a lovely moment.. 😆 😉 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Amazinggg..Mind blowinggg update...
Ufff...Jealous & Possessive Geet...
"Just look at urself..aisa lagta hai poori duniya ki poverty tum par aa gayi hai.. 😆 ...yeh lo paise aur apne liye kuchh kapde kharid lo Yeh Rumaal tum jaise Giant Elephant ko poora nahi hota..." 🤣 🤣 🤣
Hillarious Sobi...kya dialogue tah yeh Geet ka... 😉


Loved the way Geet showed her right on Maan.Maan toh on cloud nine...
Hhhaaayyyeee...their romance in the rain..& the kiss.. 😳 😳

Hehe...Geet talli hoke toh poori out of control ho gayi..
& she said"Inhone first kiss chura ki...Main kahi nahi jaungi pehle aap apni kiss waapas lo" 😳 🤣 ..seriously yaar Geet ne toh koi chance nahi chhoda Maan ko embarrass karne ka..

OMG...OMG...OMG..Maaneet realized tht they r in love & Geet confessed her feelings...
Hhhaaayyyeee...such a lovely moment.. 😆 😉 😊



uff u released my tension yrr ..sachi mien i was soo nervous while posting it ..
pata nahi kaise huga ...
but chalo atleast one detailed comment ...
pheww thanks a ton ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh this was worth the wait. A superb update. Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg geet have confess her love when she was drunk..😳😳😳such cute update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
finally geet confessed her feeling
wonder what would geet do now knowing k maan is going
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

he is aII set t0 g0
but wiII geet agree
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello awesome update love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg geet confessed
loved this update
beautiful dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon
waiting for next part
HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR🤗

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