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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Both updates were fabbb Sobia...
hhhaaayyyeee...ssooo finally Geet gonna confesss her feelings for Maan on his b'day..
Maan is going to India woh bhi Geet ke bagair...what r u planning to do Sobia...plzzz kuchh bhi ho Maaneet ke beech koi misunderstanding mat paida karna..



trust me yrr ...ending tou happy hi hogi ..😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

SORRY ME GOT LATE
AB KYA KARU ISS KHARAUS PADHAI KE WAJAH SE

BOTH THE UPDATES WERE
AWESOME😃
SWEET😊
THORA ROMANTIC❤️
TORA SADDY V😭
BUT BEST U M BEST
THA G
thank u soo much hai gi ...😳


AB KYA HO GAYA MAANU KE BADY KE DIN
YEH TWIST TOH BADA HI MAST H
ME THINKING
THINKING

lolzz ..keep thinking ...😉

KYA GEET APNI FEELINGS MAAN KO BATA PAYEGI
YA PAHLE MAAN GEET KO KEH DEGA KI
WOH LONDON JAEGI😲
GEET KA REACTION
ND ALLL

AB CHORO ME KU JADA SOCHU
YEH TOH SOBI KA KAM H😃😆

exactly ..

😃😡WAITING FOR NEXT😊


thank u for liking my work n all ur appreciation dearo ...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

waiting for update..pls cont soon..


updating now ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

waiting for it nd

aapki maths paper jaldi comp. ho jae



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Posted: 12 years ago



updating in 1 hour ...😳
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet





Sana mosi aap bhi reading FIL ..😲😲

mujhe pata hi nahi ..



woh mai silent reader thi na ishiliye 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Brown-Eyes



woh mai silent reader thi na ishiliye 😔


😲😲

chalo me posting in 10 min ...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


😲😲

chalo me posting in 10 min ...😳

Me bhi WAITINGGG
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi all,
hw r u ..?
hope u all had a grt new years night
here i am to give u all ur new year gift ...
as usual mien late hoon ...but curse my coaching n my studies not me pluueejjj

hopefully u will like the update ...
with TALLI MAANEET ...😆
enjoy ..n plzz do leave ur reviews for me plzz

Thank u all for ur appreciation ..thank u soo much

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so this one for all those who were waiting for FIL ..n to a friend Nisha ..she was all the while praying for me to get rid of my exams with good marks ..
thanks a ton for ur support each n every reader who encouraged me during last month ..even without getting any update from me ..thank u ...😃

n
HAPPY NEW YEAR
2013



Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

FRIENDS IN LOVE


credit of this banner goes to my darling moni mosi ...writer of Is It Love ,,,😳
luv ya mosi ji ...really a beautiful one ..🤗
PART 17


maan sat at the French window '.gazing the moon remembering THE MOST beautiful night of his life ..those blissful moment of cheer happiness when everything was just soo simple yet perfect in every way '.the flashes of geet's smiley face came in fron of him n lost him self in the memories of that night ..

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flashback ..

It was going all fine '.geet had insisted him to go to the disc n as usual he couldn't deny her not at least on the happiest day of her life '.after all it was her right to celebrate the success of her 1st project with him '.he wonder how can he agree to her crazy demand every time ..
Sitting on the bar ..He smiled shrugging off the thoughts knowing he will never be able to say a NO to his jangli billi for her smile means the world to him 'n next some girls came to his side 'n he sighed knowing another despo bimbo around him but then a sudden smirk appeared on his face with a naughty idea popping in his mind seeing the jealousy flicking in geet's eye who was till now lost dancing with Vicky 'n now The Casanova Singh Khurana was in full form flirting with that girl though he was least bothered of what she was saying but that angry red face of his Jangli Billi worth it all 'but next the most un-expected thing happened geet came thr like a storm n pushed that girl off maan as she was almost leaning on him '

Geet : What ..bolo kya bolna hai abhi tou bari zuban chal rahi thi '

Girl : listen u get off my way n hit on some other guy got that I am with him ..

The tipsy movement of geet made it clear for maan that she got drunk but his devil mind still could not drag his body to stop her 'n he sat thr watching the hot conversation b/w two girl ..

Geet : u bimbo despo ..u r with him n tell me how come n from when 'just look at u aisa lagta hai poori dunya ki poverty tum par aakar khatam huyi hai ..
Rukko yahin rook tum '(she tried to get something out from her jeans pocket but due to her drunken state she was taking time while maan n that girl stood curious as to what she is upto ..n nxt she held that girl's hand forcefully n shoved some money on her hand saying '

Geet : yeh loo aur apne liye kuch kapre kharid leena yeh rumaal tumhari jaisi giant lady elephant ko poore nahi hote ..😆

Maan was sitting thr having a 44o volt smile n took his drink from the bar counter n started sipping it lost in his angry jangli billi standing thr fighting just like she use to do in hostel but the only difference was that time it was due to her insecurities that he may leave her coz of sam's poisonous words n now it was pure result of her possessiveness'something which he can cherish his whole life 'lost in his thoughts he never bothered checking he was having a solid alcohol which obviously was affecting his senses but the nxt second he immediately stood up watching that girl raising her hand against geet 'be4 he could have taken a step the girl was lying flat on the ground as geet had thrown her folding her hand back 'he doubted if geet had fractured her hand or not '😲 😆

Geet : kut** ..Kam*** ..bloody Bit** ..aayi bari mujhe fashion sense sikhane wali dobara agar meri saamne aayi ya fir mere Maan 😳 ki taraf dekha bhi na tou ankhein bhi haath ki tarha tor for doungi samjhi idiot bones factory ..

Maan was dumfounded with what happened in the matter of minutes n next bouncers came thr to handle the situation n maan immediately took geet out of thr approach leaving the disc right away ..

But this wasn't going to be easy 'Jangli Billi was in full form n he sighed knowing the night is too long n here she is too wild to handle n cherry on top he is feeling tipsy with that votca ..but still tried to be firm but with a sudden jerk by geet he fell on the nearly parked car in the parking lot of the restaurant ...



Geet (coming dangerously close to him) : don't 'don't u dare Mr. Casanova Singh Khurana 'aap mere paas bhi mat aana buhat ghussa hoon mien aapse samjhe aap ..

Maan was losing his sanity with her around wasn't her tight fitted jeans n chilli red top enough to make him loose his senses that he drank that drink he thought ..then after leaving a long breath out he said ..

Maan (stressing his words trying nt to sound tipsy) : geet listen ..we need to go tumhain jo bhi bolna hai ghar chal kar bolna now sit in the car ..

But she was high 'she never takes hard drinks frequently n now he guessed she had more than her capacity n was not at all in her senses but his worry was this place parking lot of a disc was defo nt a good place to be in specially in such state whr both were drunk ..but was it easy to handle the great Geet Rai Chaudhry ..

Geet : nhi ..mujhe nhi jana aapke saath aap '.(she was enraged but her drinks were nt letting her stand properly so she tripped but be4 she could touch the ground maan grabbed her coming in front but next she pushed him away with a jerk) 'door rahu aap aur jao un chipkaliyoon ke paas ..jao

N next Vicky came thr running panting interrupting thr talks ..

Vicky : wohoo bro whr have u been poore disc mien dhundh raha tha aur geet tum bhi kahan ghayab hugayi achanak ..

But looking at her he guessed she was drunk ..he lowered his head cursing him self to have removed his eye from her n turned 2wards his Big bro only to get the shock of his eyes smelling alcohol from him '

Vicky : bro aap bhi '

Maan : Vicky relax I am fine just had a single large one 'but she is high n i really can't risk staying here for long ..

Vicky : than y r u standing here ..go take her with u ..

Maan : do u think she will agree to me ..

Vicky : abb yeh tou uss larki ke saath flirt karne se pehle sochna tha bhai ..😆

Maan : Vicky shut up 'n just help me with her warna I am sure aaj raat hum dono Delhi ke kisi police station mien guzarne wale hain ..

Vicky (controlling his smile) : okiee ill try bhai but u see ur Jangli Billi is a tough task to handle '😆

But a single glare from MSK was enough to get Vicky on work ..but socho Bare miyan nhi mana paye tou chotte miyan kiya manayeinge '😆
It almost 15 min n Vicky was trying to get geet in the car but she was adamant not to go with Maan 'n then some guys came thr eyeing her lustfully n now it was enough for maan to tolerate coming towards geet with big step he grabbed geet by her waist n put her on his shoulder as if she is some kind of bag he is carrying so easily but she was wriggling in his hold hitting his back with her tiny fist shouting but be4 anyone could approach them maan shoved her inside the car's passenger seat n Vicky stood thr with jaw dropped down seeing the sight 'n decided to back off though it was risky to let them alone in such a state but still he took the chance n asked maan to go ahead as he can't leave his favorite bike here '

In car ..
(please people drunk n drive is a crime but this is a fiction so take it just as a fiction)
Maan had taken an aloof road to reach KM though it will take double time but with his drunken state this isolated road will be safe 'he was trying his best to drive carefully knowing he is drunk commanding him self not to look at her side knowing he can't help but adore her changing facial expression showing different color every second but geet was high ..but thankfully angry so was sitting with a pouting angry red face still murmuring ..cursing him ... for her she was doing it in her brain silently but it was loud enough for maan to hear n chuckle ..

Geet : dusht '.danav '.ek no. ke Casanova hain ..dekha dekha than a aapne babaji kaise uss chipkali ke saath flirt kar rahe thay '.aur meri taraf dekha bhi nhi 'idiot Sado Singh 'kitna baar bola mene dance karne ko but nhi inko tou apni image pyari hai ..mien bol rahi hoon .. ek din na inn ki saari hostel ki pic Times of India ko bhej doongi fir dekhti hoon inki the grt MSK ki image ka kiya hota hai 'waise tou bara bol rahe thay ke nhi disc nhi jaate KM mien celebrate karte hian aur abb ..abb dekho ek mauqa nhi chorte kisi larki ke saath flirt karne ka '.pata nhi KC ke logoon ka dimag kharab hai jo inn ko '.INKO strict bolte hain 'ek no. ke flirt hain 'Playboy Casanova Singh Khurana 'mien tou baat bhi nhi karne wali inn se 'kuch nhi boloon gi ..

Maan sitting thr looking at her ever soo beautiful form 'her silky straight hairs settled on one shoulder with few loose strands flicking on her face her almond hazels drowsy 'that sweet yet irresistible pout on her angry red face n those innumerable expressions changing every second 'his heart doing summersault urging him to remove those hairs rested on her face soo authoritatively 'n her non stop talks helping him either n finally he bowed in front of his heart n glanced back at her turning his head to sideways 'n stopped the car with a sudden jerk locking her eyes with his '.came close to her while she was still in her own world cursing him when her breath stopped mid way as his hot breath were fanning her shoulders n some slight sweat beats appeared on her forehead even in that a/c car as well with his words ..n he ever so softly removed those hairs strands from her face cupping her face in his large manly palm 'n spoke in a husky tone in a mere whisper '

Maan : bas karo geet aise expression banaogi tou hw am I suppose to control my self '😲 😳😳

Maan said it without thinking much 'as the drinks were showing its effect but same goes for her ..it is said when a person is drunk he can't lie or fake this implies for them as well 'she was saying all what she thought at that time n he did what his heart wanted him to do 'but non was aware of what this will lead them too ..

Geet : kyun abhi mere chehre se bhi aapko problem hai ..han hugi hi na aapko tou uss chipkali se pyaar hai na 'mien kya lagti hoon aapki ..

He glanced back at her with red angry eyes 'which made geet stop in her place frozen 'his eyes spitting fire scared her n she buried herself more in the seat but her heart missed a beat n nxt sec. all she could conclude was he is all over her leaning on her sliding back her seat n was hell angry 'she gulped her saliva to help her drying throat with his hot breath falling on her face '.n nxt his hoarse voice made her numb to all her surrounding ..

Maan : u really think I love that girl ..u really feel that U r nothing to me ..😲

His painful angered eyes kept her captivated 'just can't able to tore the eye look ..n she kept looking at him with her duo shape hazels with a pouting face ..

Geet : tou fir kyun flirt kar rahe thay uss chipkali ke saath ..

Maan (with a naughty glint in his eyes yet a serious face) : tum jealous huyi thi ..?

Geet (with cute angry face) : han tou mujhe boora laga aap uss se aise baat kaise kar sakte hu 'aap tou MERE best friend hu na 😡'tou fir aap uss bimbo se kaise flirt kar sakte hu 'aap buhat bore hu 'aurabb mien aapki best friend bhi nhi rahi na 'iss hi liye aap uss chipkali ke paas gaye ..

Maan was lost in her changing expression 'gazing every curve of her angelic appearance 'her frowning faces adding that cuteness in her innocence yet that possessiveness sweep him off the ground of reality 'but her last words n that loud fake crying sounds made him furious as he thought she is actually angry meaning those words '.n the drinks were now actually taking toll on thr senses '

Maan (placing his long fingers on her smooth petal like lips ) : CHUP BILKUL CHUP 😳'geet tumhain sachi mien aisa lagta hai 'mere liye meri Jangli billi se barh kar aur kuan hu sakta hai 'meri friend ..meri partner ..meri life sab tum hi tou hu geet ..har khushi har gham humesha tumse hi ban'ta 'jab larne ka mann kiya tou bhi tum se larai karli aur jab kisi saathi ki zarorat pari tab bhi tumhari tasveer se baat kar liya karta tha tou fir tumhain aisa kyun lagta hai ke mien kisi aur ko pyaar kar sakta hoon .. bolo geet kyun lagta hai aisa tumhain ke mere dil mien koi aur wohh jaga bana sakta hai ..

The intensity of his eyes '.the possessive yet gentle hold of his on her just made her unaware to her own self 'as if lost in the depth of his eyes trying to search something in them 'wanting to bury herself in his warmth 'wishing this moment to last till eternity 'gazing at him with her duo shape hazels full of confusions 'the cluster of emotions forming in them making them immune to thr surrounding 'minutes past or may be hours they didn't knew ..captivated in each others gaze they were still in the same posture with geet eyes giving up n maan's turning dark with his own urges feeling the love of his life soo close ..her warm steady breaths falling on his face heating up his every cell 'urging him to feel those slightly parted lips with his' 'lowering on her he was studying her face 'wanting to remove that confuse look 'making her assure of his love '.eager to listen to her confession 'drowning in her beauty ..he was about to place his M-shaped lips on hers when a loud horn from back made him come back from his trance 🤢 n geet jumped with a sudden sound n tried got up but resulted in making him fall on her completely '

Maaneet were all startled with this sudden horror kind off a voice thinking of some stormy voice or thundering cloud 'thr drinks were making them nuts ' but then a old uncle came by thr side n knocked thr window '.

Uncel (uneasy disgusted looks) : beta gi 'will u mind romancing each other bye the side of the road '😛

Maan was still all over geet 'both seeing him as if some alien is standing thr in front of them 'n then moving towards his seat behind the steering wheel he realized what actually was happening here 'saying a quick sorry to that person he started igniting the engine mentally slapping himself '

Maan (st) : stupid ..idiot jerk 'maan khurana get a hold '(leaving a big sigh) 'pagal hugaya hoon mien 'yeh larki khud tou talli hai aur mujhe bhi poora drugged kar degi '.god y the hell u have to make her soo damn beautiful ' pata nhi aaj ki raat aur kiya kiya huga '.upar se mujhe bhi aaj hi votca peni thi '.(taking heavy breath trying to avoid her presence he started the car )



While geet still trying to fix her vision '.n then asked maan with utmost cuteness '

Geet : maan 'wohh 'wohh uncle ne aisa kyun bola ke we can romance bye the side of the road '

Here maan closed his eyes as tightly as he could with her question ..getting embarrassed with the flashed of thr close proximity '.n then with her next set of words all he wanted to do was to bang his head some whr '.

Geet (shaking his shoulder) : bolona 'hum tou jhagra kar rahe thay na 'tou unhoon ne aisa kyun bola ke hum romance karein 'chi chi babaji 'friends kaise ek dosre ke saath romance kar sakte hain '.

Me wondering aise jhagra karna hai tou roz karo ...😆

How much more she will embarrass him he thought '.

Maan (st) : geet plzz plzzz abhi ka abhi faint hujao '.mien KM mien tumhain carry karna afford kar sakta hoon but these questions plzzz 'geet ke babaji mujhe iss jangli billi ki innocence se bachalo 'plzzz

He was in his own reveries praying to save him from her ..but she was getting impatient or say wild as her drinks were taking a toll '.n next she started poking him harder ..n shook him by his arms to get his attention ..

Geet : maan 'maan bolo na ..kyun bola unhoon ne aisa 'bolo

Maan came out of his la la land n saw her shaking him '

Maan (hesitant avoiding looking at her) : umm ..wohh geet ..actually coz .. umm han 'who he just misunderstood us 'tum seat belt sahi karlo ..we'll move now '

While geet with a innocent baby face obliged quietly 'n maan started the car thanking god for stopping her questions 'droving off the lonely streets of Delhi 'the soothing silence prevailed in the car 'n maan looked at her only to see her sleeping with a contended smile on her face 'a smile touched his face with that glow of happiness on her face 'but soon a truck in full speed zoomed in front of his car n after few minutes he opened his eyes with a aching head 'n the whole incident flash in front of his eye the way truck appeared in front of his car n dodged it ending up colliding with a tree '
But the very next second fear took over him 'n he glanced at geet's direction 'where she was still struggling to gain her conscious ..she wasn't hurt at all thanks to the seat belt ..but still the sudden jerk to the car 'n the fact she was under effect of alcohol '

Freeing himself from the seat belt he bend on her taking her face in his palm worried sick he tried to again her attention 'while she was mumbling something under her breath 'confused maan ..

Maan : geet 'geet plss utho 'open ur eyes damit ..tum theek hu na ..geet ..

Making his way out of the car 'taking a water bottle from the back seat he sprinkled water droplets on her face 'n that worked n she gained her conscious 'adjusting her view ..

Geet : maan ..what happened ..wohh achanak se truck saamne kaise ..

Maan (worried ..he instantly hugged her) : thank god tum theek hu 'thank god geet 'agar tumhain kuch hujata tou mien kya karta ..

Geet (after getting over the shock of his sudden hug'reciprocated) :mien 'mien theek hoon maan 'I am fine ..but abb hum ghar kaise jaenge '

Maan (parting with the hug) : don't worry mien abhi Vicky ko call karta hoon who dosri car bhej deega '

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In KM
On call

Vicky : WHATT 'bro aap theek ho ..Geet theek hai ..kuch huya tou nahi na ..

Maan : nahi all fine ..dont worry ..bas geet thori ziada talli hai aur car ki boori halat hugayi hai '

Vicky : sorry bro mujhe aap dono ko chor kar nahi aana chahiye tha 'aap drunk thay fir bhi ..i am sorry ..

Maan : its okie ..waise bhi drunk n drive ka crime mene kiya hai so tou sorry mat bol n han dobara agar mujhe aur geet ko ek saath kahin bhejne ka plan hu tou plss kuch acha try karna 'kyun iss Jangli Billi ke saath romance bhi thrill hi huga ..😆

Vicky (smiling) : mien aata hoon car lekar ..but u both plss be careful 'mausam kharab hai n wohh area bhi '

Maan : Vicky mien tumhara bara bhai hoon tum mere nahi abb jaldi car lekar aao ..

End of call '

Vicky : shit man ..mujhe bro ko nahi bhejna chahiye tha akele ..agar kuch hujata tou 'idiot duffer Vicky ..!!

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Sitting in the car 'with closed eyes still the effect of alcohol was thr ..maan was avoiding looking at her fearing he may loose his control yet again n her trail of queries will start again 'while geet was immune to her surrounding resting her head at the head of the seat 'n suddenly started singing a funny mimic song ..

Geet : hum tum ek car mien band hu 'aur accident hujaye 'maan teri ghusse ke dar se yeh bhi darr jaye 'ho hum tum kahin ko jaa rahe thay par ..😆

ME : acha gi ..i really don't know such mimic works ..just gave it a try ..hope does it well enough ..if not sorry ...

Maan (frustrated with the flashes of her beautiful face coming in front of his eyes urging her to feel those petal like lips ) : geet plss stop it n keep quite ..

Geet (but she was tou all talli 'n saw a slight drizzle was started ..so molded the song's last few words) : aur barish aajaye '.😳

Listening her words maan opened his eyes 'only to see geet going out of the car 'drenching in the slight drizzling rain 'n made his way 2wards her ..

Maan : geet stop it 'n lets go back to car ..now its not safe here chalo abhi

Geet (under effect of alcohol n slight high pitch voice) : uff ho maan kitne boaring hugaye hu aap 'see kitna acha mausam hai '(twirling around spreading her hand enjoying the slight chill surrounding her) ..



But suddenly maan heard some faint voiced of footsteps approaching them n grabbing geet's hand forcefully made her run away from thr 'in a different direction but till then the rain was turned to be a stormy one drenching them completely 'n geet ran away geeting her hand off his hold 'playing with the rain '

While maan kept gazing her angelic form 'n her full dimple smile ..the way she was ..nature ' nothing artificial about her 'a pure soul with utmost beauty still don't know the worth of her golden heart ' she was thr enjoying the rain 'while he was getting aroused seeing her completely drenched in the rain her loose top was now acting as a 2nd skin n her hairs strands settled on her face 'the droplets falling over her face 'making his throat go dry with the urge to lick them off her rosy soft lips '😳

The flashes of the last rain dance came in front of his eyes n the moment of thr un full filled desire 'the interrupted kiss came in front of his eyes making him immune to sanity 'he made his way 2wards her ..n with a jerk pulled her in his hard frame grabbing her petite waist ..crushing her in his embrace 'feeling the soft skin under his palm '

Shocked with the sudden jerk from him ..geet stood thr surprised 'but one look in his deep dark passionate eyes made her sense numb with the passion oozing out of them 'captivated in his arms ..she stood thr mesmerized with his possessive claim over her '

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The music started 'making the rain even more romantic with its mesmerizing melody 'urging the love birds to loose all thr rational feelings in this rain 'n feel 'feel the moment of complete surrender ..

While he was stood awestruck with the angelic beauty of her glowing in the lightning of the clouds ever so beautiful she was looking like a pure epitome of beauty 'the rain drops on her nothing less than dew drops on a rose petal .. he removed the wet loose strands teasing her eye lids ever soo softly tucking it side ways ..cupping her face in his palm ..observing every inch n every curve of her face ..caressing her cheeks with his thumb 'he smiled seeing the color of her face changing to red '😳

They say that thr is nothing more beautiful than love 'we often heard that there nothing right n wrong with 2 people are in love 'still the society has created some boundaries which they never crossed ..but still there is a prime fact where is love thr is no rule 'n when the love reaches it heights thr will be no boundaries to stop them '



N thr they were feeling the most precious moments of thr life 'standing soo close to each other that even thr heart beat was audible to one another .. the warmth of thr heating passion warming them in the cold rainy night 'n the deep intense look of passion in either of thr eyes making them captivated in that very moment '

N bowing in front of thr heart 'they both closed thr distance b/w thr faces .. thr lips touched each other ..n thr bodies were set to fire with the 1st touch of love 'the most magical sensation surrounding thr existence 'the simple touch ..a warming kiss soon turned into a passionate one when maan squeezed her waist plastering her to his length making the bodies collide from head to toe 'n geet surrendered her self in his love n passion ..giving in 'holding his nape tightly ...



he nibbled her lower lips ..getting over hi thirst 'making them aroused to the level of ecstasy 'while she held his shoulder piercing her nails in thr with the overwhelming emotions building in her 'n with a sudden bite from him she opened her self for him to discover the treasure of her 'tasting the most sweetest honey of the world 'he held her nape ..nibbling on her lips as if cherishing some candy 'while she was getting loss of breath n that's when the piano music ended 'n he parted from her ..still resting thr foreheads intact ..panting '

With some giggling sound 'he looked over her shoulder to see an old parsi couple standing thr 'beneath an umbrella 'grinning at them 'n he guessed they saw them kissing 'parting maan stood a bit embarrassed where as geet was trying to stand steady but was about to fall when maan came 2ward n helped her '

Maria : oh what a lovely romantic couple ..

Patrick : see i told u maria darling ..ur music has magic ..see they both confessed just as we did 20 year back ...😃

Maan was trying to make geet steady when he heard the remark frm the old lady 'n his pooped out with the next seconds convo b/w geet n the lady ..

Geet (going 2wards her with a shaking leg) : nahi ..aunty hum na wohh wale couple nahi hain ..hum bas friends hain ..best friends ..hai na maan ..😲

Maan (giving a confused smile to the curios couple) : han ..hum 'hum sirf dost hain aunty 'uncle ..

Patrick (in a drunken state as well) : what ..tum dono couple nahi hai ..

Geet (innocently) : nahi uncle ..

Aunty (shocked n asked immediately ) : tou fir tum dono kiss kyun karta tha ek dosre ko '😕

Maan was all embarrassed in the heavy drizzle not knowing what to say after that 'n geet's talli state wasn't even helping either '

Maan : aunty wohh ..umm

uncel took geet with him inside his small but beautiful house ..n here maan was searching correct words avoiding to look at the elderly lady .. moreover he was drunk so what if he was in his sense still he respected his elders ...seeing his attempts to hid his drunken state n the red hued face ...the lady smiled n asked placing her hand on maan's shoulder ..

Maria (with a teasing smile) : tum iss larki se pyaar karta hai ..

The single sentence that could make the MSK silent 'looking where else he stood thr still thr came the voice of breaking of a glass from the house ..😲
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago

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