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Take a look at this, Z. A feather to your hat! 😊

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3391762&PID=73956493&#73956493

Mariam...I'm left speechless with all the love today so please accept a rare but sincere hug instead 🤗

Shika, not quite an update. But I fell asleep once I came home, which derailed (or slightly delayed) the earlier plans anyway.

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Mariam...I'm left speechless with all the love today so please accept a rare but sincere hug instead 🤗

Shika, not quite an update. But I fell asleep once I came home, which derailed (or slightly delayed) the earlier plans anyway.

A rare hug? Does that mean you're not a touchy feely person? 😃
Never mind! 🤗

Not generally 😆
No, I will plunder on and see how far I get :)

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Not generally😆
No, I will plunder on and see how far I get :)

😆

Originally posted by: had2bu

Beautiful portrayal of contrasts.

Someone on the cusp of something new and together and the other crushed and alone. No amount of alcohol takes away the sting of having your dreams broken like that.

Excellent writing. The characters stay with you and someone like me thinks of all the things that they can now face together. Do save my brains and update soon.

Thanks for the update Zarin.

Reminded me of the words from a beautiful ghazal by Jagjit Singh

tum masarrt kaa kaho yaa isse gam kaa rishtaa
kehte hain pyaar kaa rishtaa hain janam kaa rishtaa
hai janam kaa jo ye rishtaa to badalataa kyon hai?

Avi 🤗 Thank you for being here.

Beautiful, beautiful ghazal. While I was listening to it, I was reminded of one of my favourite lines from 'Oh My God': Fariyaad toh sab karte hai. Koi usse karta hai, koi uski karta hai,

Originally posted by: ddgcmgfan

Hello Zarin...might I say you are a truly gifted (don't get me wrong, it is meant as a compliment)!!!😊 This story is very close to my heart coz I feel for Geet. I partially understand what she is going through since I too left behind a flourishing career to follow my husband (Of course, i am not entirely sure thats what happened yet). But from the story so far I understand her need to "find" herself again. I hope she doesn't loose too much in the process😭.

Zarin, your Geet is very brave to start off on this journey, not many can take this step. However,doing things the way you always have is not going to yield a new result, you sometimes have to try something different. But being a hopeless romantic I do hope Maan and Geet find each other and that this journey is just a "means to a beautiful end"!😳 i am not sure I am making any sense 😕. Anyway, kudos to you 👏. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!

Wow. You know, I read your comment while sitting on the bus today and spent the rest of the journey staring out of the window thinking 'what have I done?'. Today, for the first time since starting this story, I actually feel a little scared. It's suddenly dawning on me that I have created something over which I have no control and given that the story is so bound to reality and that I have nothing short of the best of readers, there is no room for mistakes.

"However,doing things the way you always have is not going to yield a new result, you sometimes have to try something different."

You are right and this is something I am going to keep reminding myself of in the future.

Thank you very, very much for joining us and welcome 🤗

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