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Originally posted by: palindrome

First of all "Shashtaang Dandwat pranam" to you Zarin...!!!I This chapter was beyond "perfection",beyond "awesomeness",beyond"excellence",beyond "brilliance",beyond "every adjective that my heart and brain are screaming but my fingers are not able to type because of my poor vocab"...😕...You yourself had set a "standard" for your writing in previous chapters and with this chapter you have gone beyond your own standard...Kudos...👏👏👏.. I think till the end of "Gehraiyan",I won't think myself worthy enough to comment on your work..!!!!

Since I came across "Geharaiyan",I have always wondered,"what went "Wrong" between Maneet???" but after reading this chapter,I want to scream out loud,"Why this "wrong" happened with maaneet??"...Why????"..It was a painful chapter..When geet was yelling in her cell phone,Her words were so simple yet impactful that It felt like she was holding Maan from his collars and saying all that at his face...{I wish she had done this...}

!!She was seeking the solace in "alcohol" to forget everything for once when she accepted to play the game..She knew very well she was not going to tell any truth..she actually wanted to get drunk...but it made her blurt out everything she was hiding in herself for a long time..Would she feel light after this night???or It would increase her pain more???

She called him "Maanav" once...,why???Am i missing smething????😕

She threw her phone..I hope she would be able to fix it later,when alcohol would have left her system...If it would not get fixed soon,chances of maan finding geet seems more bleak to me...!!!!

Waiting for maan to hear this special voicemail...😃or check his drawer...

ps-Hope your exams went well...😊

Palin, it's not me but actually your comments, views, insights and inferences that make this story what it is. Without everyone on this thread, 'Gehraiyan' is just an amalgamation of words. It belongs just as much to you all as it does me.

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

And the QoC proves why she owns the title once again. The bolded part...nothing but the truth there. As I said to Sheesh, the smallest things usually set off the people who keep things suppressed. And the part about 'routines'...I just write it, you guys bring the meaning. 😊

It makes me a little sad that the Seths and
Rainas usually turn into Maans and Geets. I've seen it happen myself;
you don't notice these things until you see them at the beginning and
then much later after the transformation. It's scary. So if a little
variety with the routine can at least stop some of it from happening, I'm all for it.

'Why is reality so far from dreams?' I feel kind of awful for setting off that thought but in all ugly honesty, I thrive on pain and writing about pain. Zarin the Dream Crusher 😆

Yup, they're done. I am freee 😃 First one was harder than I thought it would be but last one was much better than I could have hoped for. Thank you, Maiyya Mai!

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Ah, in that case, please do extend my heartiest apologies to your vertebral column 😉

By the way, nice expression on the display picture 😉 Why so quizzical?

Originally posted by: mayyo13

You know, you girls might have given me this title but I'm way far from being a QoC. Because if you look at it my way, my comments are nothing but a convoluted way of me trying to express how I felt about a particular chapter. 😆
And Gehraiyan is one story where I'm always a little afraid to comment since it's all about 'gehraiyan' and I usually don't go much deeper into things. Yes, this thread is definitely like a Sach Ka Saamna! 😆
Zarin the Dream Crusher, I'm not a very happy go lucky girl either so I won't hold it against you for thriving on pain! 😃
Maiyya Mai? Is it something like the maai on TV? 😕

Originally posted by: palindrome

Actually i am thinking "what to write" in next update of my story...Suffering from block these days...Dimag ne bakwas karna band kar diya hai...😆

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Oh no! Kuch toh karo! Palin ki bakwas ke bina zindagi adhoori hai!

I was going to start reading Obsession but I think I read somewhere that it's not exam season material so I decided I'd start reading Life Partner after exams. Expect double bakwas from me when I catch up 😃

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Palin, it's not me but actually your comments, views, insights and inferences that make this story what it is. Without everyone on this thread, 'Gehraiyan' is just an amalgamation of words. It belongs just as much to you all as it does me.{ofcourse it does but I am "maasi" and you are "mother"of "Gehraiyan"..!!!😊}

And if the comments you've written so far have been 'unworthy', I am truly in awe of your brain - I would like to know what you deem worthy in that case.

I know, it's a little ironic, isn't it? Geet got drunk to forget the truth but ended up revealing the biggest one of all - that of her heart. Raina complained that Geet didn't share a single truth but ended up learning more about her than she would ever dare ask.

'Maanav' was just a drunken play on his name. Maan-av.

Oh no, what did I do? 😳 I hope there aren't any expectations attached to the letter because I haven't got much planned.

I was satisfied overall and even more happy that they're over! Thanks to you all for berating me and telling me to study 😃

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Mariam, I think Palin is right!I don't even know what the 'Mai' was all about, the names just come naturally 😆What's the maai on TV?