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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo

The last three chapters were quite a rush to read - an adrenaline rush. Some revelations, some questions. Some answers and more questions. I don't think I can put it all down here but yes, at the moment, I'm very curious about the playboy Dev Khurana who had grown accustomed to living a life of luxury but who finally stood up for the legacy his surname demanded, the Dev Khurana who readily agreed to help his brother and the one who is afraid of heights yet he jumped off a cliff to save a life.

I'm glad I could finally catch up with it! Now I'll be waiting for more chapters without any guilt. 😆



So glad you're here again, M! Missed you here. Liking Dev yet? I think I am.
Don't talk to me about guilt - I can't even look you, Avi or Shika in the eye!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




is he Dev who jumped into the river...

who was the woman who fell before him...

whose singing he was hearing...

I want to read and understand this story but I am not able to beacuse somewhere u indicate man and woman as him/her without name...and that is making difficult for me to understand...please yaar I am and may be most of ur readers don't have that much of literary knowledge so I request u to write some clearly...what is happening and with whom...

where are Maan and Geet...

what happened after Maan came to darjeeling for work purpose...




Yes, Dev is the one who jumped. We don't know who the woman is, nor whose singing he heard. We do know that he heard the singing before when he was sleeping in the airport.

I do see how I've confused you and I'm sorry for that. Truth be told, using he/she keeps my thought process intact and mentioning names tends to break that flow. I do leave clues in the chapters to make it clear who the characters are and usually, the scenes are a continuation of each other. The ambiguity makes us all think more, I think. I can't promise I'll use names everywhere but I'll make a greater effort to make it clear who the characters are.

Maan and Geet were in the chapter with the portrait - two chapters ago, I think. Geet woke up at night and sat before Maan, who was drawing a sketch of her.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: flowers4u

A interesting chapter ...continue soon



Originally posted by: goldenmoon

last 2 update
awesome...
interesting parts...



Thank you! I'm glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



So glad you're here again, M! Missed you here. Liking Dev yet? I think I am.
Don't talk to me about guilt - I can't even look you, Avi or Shika in the eye!


Oh yes, of course! Liking Dev already!

Don't feel guilty for me because I'm almost in the same place as you. It's been ages since I commented on Avi's or Shika's story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting...its all very mysterious to be honest...i do get confused as to who the story revolves around maan/geet or dev...i do get the gist of it.
hoping to see more of maan and geet?!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rizwanaq

interesting...its all very mysterious to be honest...i do get confused as to who the story revolves around maan/geet or dev...i do get the gist of it.

hoping to see more of maan and geet?!



So far the story has been almost entirely based on Geet and Maan. Dev is a recent addition but yes, he is just as important a character as Geet, Maan or Heer. I would say that the story revolves around all of them.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



Yes, Dev is the one who jumped. We don't know who the woman is, nor whose singing he heard. We do know that he heard the singing before when he was sleeping in the airport.

I do see how I've confused you and I'm sorry for that. Truth be told, using he/she keeps my thought process intact and mentioning names tends to break that flow. I do leave clues in the chapters to make it clear who the characters are and usually, the scenes are a continuation of each other. The ambiguity makes us all think more, I think. I can't promise I'll use names everywhere but I'll make a greater effort to make it clear who the characters are.

Maan and Geet were in the chapter with the portrait - two chapters ago, I think. Geet woke up at night and sat before Maan, who was drawing a sketch of her.



so that was Maan and Geet...I really didn't understand that part also...u must have dropped clues but it is really very difficult for me to understand...I am not that much into complex stories...
ok now I will do one thing...I will ask u what I don't understand...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
We did it, folks! Gehraiyan's second thread has arrived :)

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Posted: 7 years ago
REVIVING The thread in Process~Keeping it alive by comments!!

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