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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

Mariam, I did an IF search on you to check the spelling for your name and ended up stumbling upon the reason why you asked if this is my first. I'm going to step away from the internet before I become even more big headed😆

P.S. I'm only slightly embarrassed...the rest of it is all big headed arrogance 😆



My name's spellings vary from person to person but you used the one I prefer. 😛

And 'that' acted as a catalyst for me to ask the question. I had actually replied on that thread before I asked you. Just asked you because it wasn't only me who felt you're not an amateur writer. So my compliment still holds true! 😉

Being a 'little' arrogant is good , you know. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! What a dream! Nightmare is the right word perhaps! His restlessness was described so well I could actually feel it myself! Now his subconcious is telling him to do something, about his life..? Let's see what's next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Could the beast that's chasing him be the unresolved issue that lies between him & Geet like a dark cloud over their heads... a lot of symbolism and foreboding there, let's hope Maan becomes Sai Baba Maan the Philosopher and can somehow dissect his dream, that is if he really wants to...

I can't believe you've never posted anything before Zarin, your writing is really gripping! You have a way with words that just pull you into the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
The dream... I think ...ws a colage ...wth difrnt objct b it root... The tree... Beast...hs runing...hs fall...depctng hs own conscience... Inner turmoil..restlesnes...desperation... Want...need...
A compellng update...

love


SANJH
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maiden name wala point abi dekha...Ummm... U r corrct...maidn name s our rght...bt fr me it appears changng into ur huby's surname s a submisn to nt nly hm bt also hs family... I m an Indian n so i strngly beleive in family systm...n besides i hv always believed...aftr mariage huby's family bcms our family... V go to hubys house... N so aftr bcmng membr of hs family...it doesn't appear wrng to adopt thr surname...u mst hv heard KANYADAN or GVNG AWAY D BRIDE...thru dse two customs in dr own relign a father gve hs daughter to hr huby ... In ds way,our fathers nly change our maiden name.. thrby changng our identity... Its fortunate or unfortunate...dnt want to go dr...cz dn our feminine instincts wuld strt blaming our forefathers... Nw GEET... f9 she strt al hr busines...hr profesn in HANDA name...she doesnt wnt to chnge it ..ok its hr rght...bt doesnt its MAAN's rght too tht KHURANA also shuld b added in hs wife's name...Mariage s an institution whch binds two people as one... Evn LAW considrs dm as one n nt two difrnt people...in mariage dr s no place fr individual identity n cz of my abv view i found GEET wrng here...It gve so gudy feelng debatng here...Dse chote pakets gve mre to think n interpret.Love SANJH
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Posted: 12 years ago

😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome


His foot caught on a root that lay on the floor and he traced its winding path with his eyes. It looked angry, as if it had lashed out in a sudden burst of violence, only to find that it had lost the ability to pick itself up again. Hesitant of what to do, he approached the trunk of a proud tree - the origin of the lame root. Gingerly, he raised his long fingers and touched the coarse, bruised bark. He stroked its length, finding himself fascinated by its grooves and imperfections.

Both root and tree had suffered...!!!

You are one of the best writers on this forum..👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
again double post..😆
so sorry
internet probs
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Posted: 12 years ago
I feel too dumb to comment on something so tremendous right now. May be I would wait to read other comments and would add all of them to say something smart and witty😆
Edited by Cloud9. - 12 years ago

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