Maaneet OS:Zindagi ke Hasin Lamhe... - Page 10

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

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edited my comment on page 1😊

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

sab comment res kar rahe hai toh maine bhi karli😉...waise devil kya kar rahi hai itne der se😆

❤️ edited... yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath...yeh duniya mujhe tumhare thread pe comment karne se rok rahi hai...kal raat bhi itna bada comment likha woh uda gaya n abhi inn IF walo se gadbad kar di posting ke wakt... mummy ab fir likh rahi hu...iss time taking proper precaution

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now time for my comment... first wana tel u that u r one amazing writer...u just have that talent to hook anyone wid ur story...u know u made me cry while reading it...almost while reading half of the story, i was rubbing my tears away...before my mom sees it😭 really loved it a lot...it was simple yet enchanting...it had that charm that innocence in it👏...

the way u started this story was simply amazing...as it hooked me thinking why geet is crying running on road n that to thinking abt maan...i got so scared thinking...tumne start mai hi maaneet ko alag kar diya...ab aage kya hoga

then that rohan's entry made me suspicious...the way he was getting worried for her, then his craving to see her alright...was building this irritation in me thinking yeh rohan geet se pyar toh nahi karta😡...but then u kept him as frnd...n dat wasa relief...

pata hai tum bach gayi...agar sirf frnd na rakhati toh bohat maar khati😆

then the flashback was amazing...this is a part which i loved d most...geet coming to delhi, then her meeting maan...her daringly proposing him for frndship😲...that looked so cute😳...then maan foundedly looking at her...mai wahi samjh gayi ki mera maanu fas gaya geet ke pyar😆

then their budding love n turning into love was beautiful...n finally maan deciding to propose geet...but geet twisting their faith wid her lie...was amazing...

i loved how geet lied controlling her own emotions...just thinking best for maan's future...

n then their parting away...was so painful😭...

pata hai yaha se maine rona start kiya jo ending tak ruka hi nahi...

when they met again was a relief for me...though maan accused her...but he was right on his front...lekin thank god geet behosh ho gayi😆...nahi toh maan ko kabhi pata hi nahi chalata abt the truth...

n then rohan came as a saviour...usne sab secret reveal kar diya...making maan cry with his guilt...

i so much loved how maan proposed her...that was so cute...

then her operation, geet saying she wants to live wid maan for her rest of the days...was so touching...

and lastly her coming back from death bed...just for maan's love...

cant tel u how much i loved it...u simply rocked wid this story...a big hug for u🤗...and this 👏 for ur amazing work...

and lastly bada wala love u for the dedication...

and here finally i end my first ever comment on ur work...

love u lots,

varsha😳

Originally posted by: maansee

bahut pyaara os tha yaar

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Aww... Thank u sooo Much Di... Luv ya...!!

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Me dead... *thud* *Faint* Inna lamba comment...

And Hehe... Poor u kitni baar comment likhna pada...

And Aww... Sorry to make u cry yaar...

But U know I also had tears in my eyes while writing...

Actually when I wrote first poem tabhi tears came

and then I couldent control my self...

Hehehehe... Poor rohan pehle danta khata hai sabki

And then all praise him at last...

Yup I also loved the part of their friendship only...

Specially geet's proposing for bein friend...

And Thank u sooo much...

Hayeee Aisa comment mile to mein roz OS likhu...

Hehe...

Lots of kissy wissy to you...

And A tight bone crushing hug...

Luv ya sooo much...!!!!

n maine 2 baar bada comment likha jo post nahi hua...fir wapas yeh 3rd time likha hai...darte darte ki kahi yeh bhi na gul ho jaye...

tu khud bhi roti hai n hume bhi rulati hai...very bad...next time i want smthing romantic...only romance n romance shud be there in it

n itna jor se hug kiya tune...ab bones sahi nahi ho rahe...bohat crush kar diya😕😆

love u too...keep rocking wid ur work

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

Haaayyyeee MBD aap triple sweet ho☺️
Ek aap ho jo mujhe sweet bulati hai aur ek wo dono twin partners mujhe devil bulaane ka ek mauka nahi chodte😆
Love you 2..3..4...10

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

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Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Awww... Ro mat.. Luv ya...