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@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Res 😆

me first me first !!
Love U for this first U know na why!! Hehehe

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ooppsss pehle Maan k jgha Rohan ko nikaal k jhatka de dia 😆 i was dreaming my Maanu there LoLz but koi na Rohan acha tha so let it be...chall jayega!!

Oopppsss her state was deadly the way she reached there even i was scared for a while to think what the heck has happened but then the tumor thing...aowww and then it banged what must have happened there!!

And then the past

aowww that was aoww so dreamy, aoww usne MSK ko neglect kar dia howw Maan to wahi flat ho gaya hoga and then the budding of new frndship hehehe U know iss baar frndshp day pe main 12 baje kisi ko aise finly lines suna ri thi knees pe 😆 soch lo kiss kamine ki lottery lagi hogi tab 😆 mmuuahh love that part
and then when Maan tell her everything ROFLing i was imaging her doing all that...no wonder she can do that as well...hehehehe i loved that
Oops the way she broke his heart InTeNtiOnAlly ooppss that was not ohh so good!! Aouch mere maanu ko kitna hurt hua hoga but she needed to do that so even she isnt wrong...

Waise iske baad mereko Maan k Tie-chi flashes kyu aa re hai 😆

n now back to prsnt

ooo teri Maan ka gussa...wo kitna bakta hai na gusse main!!

And then the bowler the reality

aowww that was too dreamy to say anything...ao how he came to know and he manged to agree her waise b MSK ko mnaa kon kar sakta hai!!

Aowww ending was stupendous...actually loved their talks and alll just perfecto...mmmuuuahhhzzz to them

and finally

Loveee You Ritzie for such a studendous OS...it was actually the way to test the trust over ur Love and Friendship which we sometimes fail with the fake truths infront of us!!

and Loveee ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ you for dedication of this owsume lovely beautiful OS for me as wel...hayee sighing blushing ☺️

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kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow dear Congo for u r new os dear😊

Beautiful os dear love their friendship 👍🏼

The way they proposed in the hospital 😆

Love the last line where we got to see a lil bit of maan's possessiveness too 😉

Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Itnaa tym nahi lagta formatting main...

Waiting...!!

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mahimaneet

@mahimaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

sab comment res kar rahe hai toh maine bhi karli😉...waise devil kya kar rahi hai itne der se😆

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ edited... yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath...yeh duniya mujhe tumhare thread pe comment karne se rok rahi hai...kal raat bhi itna bada comment likha woh uda gaya n abhi inn IF walo se gadbad kar di posting ke wakt... mummy ab fir likh rahi hu...iss time taking proper precaution

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now time for my comment... first wana tel u that u r one amazing writer...u just have that talent to hook anyone wid ur story...u know u made me cry while reading it...almost while reading half of the story, i was rubbing my tears away...before my mom sees it😭 really loved it a lot...it was simple yet enchanting...it had that charm that innocence in it👏...

the way u started this story was simply amazing...as it hooked me thinking why geet is crying running on road n that to thinking abt maan...i got so scared thinking...tumne start mai hi maaneet ko alag kar diya...ab aage kya hoga

then that rohan's entry made me suspicious...the way he was getting worried for her, then his craving to see her alright...was building this irritation in me thinking yeh rohan geet se pyar toh nahi karta😡...but then u kept him as frnd...n dat wasa relief...

pata hai tum bach gayi...agar sirf frnd na rakhati toh bohat maar khati😆

then the flashback was amazing...this is a part which i loved d most...geet coming to delhi, then her meeting maan...her daringly proposing him for frndship😲...that looked so cute😳...then maan foundedly looking at her...mai wahi samjh gayi ki mera maanu fas gaya geet ke pyar😆

then their budding love n turning into love was beautiful...n finally maan deciding to propose geet...but geet twisting their faith wid her lie...was amazing...

i loved how geet lied controlling her own emotions...just thinking best for maan's future...

n then their parting away...was so painful😭...

pata hai yaha se maine rona start kiya jo ending tak ruka hi nahi...

when they met again was a relief for me...though maan accused her...but he was right on his front...lekin thank god geet behosh ho gayi😆...nahi toh maan ko kabhi pata hi nahi chalata abt the truth...

n then rohan came as a saviour...usne sab secret reveal kar diya...making maan cry with his guilt...

i so much loved how maan proposed her...that was so cute...

then her operation, geet saying she wants to live wid maan for her rest of the days...was so touching...

and lastly her coming back from death bed...just for maan's love...

cant tel u how much i loved it...u simply rocked wid this story...a big hug for u🤗...and this 👏 for ur amazing work...

and lastly bada wala love u for the dedication...

and here finally i end my first ever comment on ur work...

love u lots,

varsha😳

Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Varsha formatting kar ri hai suprise ki n prep ki aaj mereko meri maa se pakka marwaa k rahenge *sob sob*...jaldiii karo Ritzie...mereko or wait nahi hota

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mahimaneet

@mahimaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz
Varsha formatting kar ri hai suprise ki n prep ki aaj mereko meri maa se pakka marwaa k rahenge *sob sob*...jaldiii karo Ritzie...mereko or wait nahi hota

koi nahi divz tu jitna pitegi utna hi ritu ko bhi pit dena😉😆

n ritu mai sirf tera yeh post dekh ke mobile chod ke pc se online aayi...abhi wapas ja rahi hu...will come back after i finish my work...

n iss OS pe lamba wala reply milega mujhase...toh wait kar meri😳

byeee for now...thodi der baad milti hu...

byeee divz...

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Meharbaani baba ji ki...chalo me read kar k aati hu wapis

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

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haila.. inna beautiful sa OS dedicated to me... 😳
haila... meri to kismat khul gai inni achi si GF paake... 😳

It was a beautiful OS Ritzz...
I loved ur element of humour in it...
n it ws also very different...
lyk though it ws a sweet n romantic OS... but it hd bits of humour in it which gave it a different flavour..
GR8!!

Also... i liked hw u didnt shw dat d car ws Maan's.. wudnt hv been a surprise...
so i give u d credit there for dis... 😃

Also... I loved hw Maan himself heard evrythin...
chori chupke kaam lagega... 😆
but Rohan's support ws immense n needed...
friends are really for that...

Beautiful OS Ritzz...
great job..!!
love u.. ❤️

Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago