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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: gargi12
aww
Nyc one shot
Cho cute...
Really loved it

Hehe... Thank u gargi...!!!

Hope u enjoyed ur Day...!!

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Ritzz ,

so beautiful one . just loved the flow of story and poems tho mashallah . U write so beautifully .

Hum us mohabbat ki dastan hai

jahan maut ne bhi raah badal li,

Zindegi me aaj lamhe khaas aagaye

Hum ko do jism aur ek jaan bana diye .

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: hermoso
Ritzz ,
so beautiful one . just loved the flow of story and poems tho mashallah . U write so beautifully .

Hum us mohabbat ki dastan hai

jahan maut ne bhi raah badal li,

Zindegi me aaj lamhe khaas aagaye

Hum ko do jism aur ek jaan bana diye .

OMG anu... The lines were superb yaar...!!!

Really Thank u sooo much...!!!

I m glad u loved it yaar...!!!

Thank u sooo much...!!!

It really means a lot...!!!

Hugsss...

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

OMG anu... The lines were superb yaar...!!!

Really Thank u sooo much...!!!

I m glad u loved it yaar...!!!

Thank u sooo much...!!!

It really means a lot...!!!

Hugsss...

Thank u Ritzz , and warm hug to u too 🤗Bookmarked ur writeup ,going to read .

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: hermoso
Thank u Ritzz , and warm hug to u too 🤗Bookmarked ur writeup ,going to read .

Thank u again...!!! Thats soo sweet of you...!!!

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QuintessentialI

@QuintessentialI

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Beautiful yet it brought tears in my eyes 😭

👏

I'm sooo happy you gave a happy ending 😃 ⭐️

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Awesome one MBD!!
That was so emotional yet sweet and cute!!
Awww Rohan is a darling!! the way he called her princess was so so cute!
OMGGG Geet had brain tumour! Poor Girl!
She left maan :o :o And saying sorry!
OMG accident bhi ho gaya:(
Awww their intro was awesome!! Uffo sach mai kitna bolti ho tum Geet :P :P
He he arey waah! Friendship proposal haaayyyeee! Awww Maan really moved by her sweet gesture! Cho chweet
he he Maan scared to reveal his identity!! LOL Geet was panicking so much and blabbering

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

sir sir
loved how Maan assured her he is the same Maan :D
awww falling in love!
oh no confession se pehle yeh sab ho gaya!
Poor Maan punishing himself
Poor Geet so adamant not ready for surgery
Awww Glad Maan now knew the truth! Awww haayyyee what a confession and proposal
Finally surgery!! omg geet not waking
awww that was so emotional of Maan trying to wake her up n she did.
And Happily Lived Ever after!!
glad u gave it a happy ending otherwise i would have been upset whole day :P :P

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Muaahhhzzz That was too Good
Love you
But yeh kya sab ka naam hai mera nahi sob sob pout pout!!
Ummm Daal mai zaroor kuch kaala hai;)

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Divz

@dazzlingdivz

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Haawww... Me pouting.. huh...
Not fair mein apple lagti hu tujhe..???
GB... ??? Grrhhh... I love you...😳
Ha agla OS jaldi milega...

or nahi to kya ab jab itne shone shone faces bnaaoge to apple ni lgoge to or kya ??

and

please next please 😃