MG SS: A Path To Reach You..!! Part 13: Pg 141

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Hello my lovely maaneetians, remember me?

Okay for those who don't I am the writer of the following One Shots

My first OS: I Am In Love.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2694794/mg-os-i-am-in-love-updated-epilogue-pg-58

My second OS: Marriage, Friendship, Love

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2884561/mg-os-marriage-friendship-love

My third OS: Only For You

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3101408/maan-geet-os-only-for-you-note-pg7

Okay I prefer writing OS's but this time, I thought I'll try something a little different so I am going for a SS with this concept, not really sure how many parts its gonna have.

I hope you all will like this SS as much as you have liked my OS's.

Banner credit goes to none other than.. I, Me and Myself..!!! lol I know it's not good, but made it in 30mins so considering the time, I think I have done a great job.

A Path To Reach You...Cuz I'm Hopelessly In Love.

I want to say a big thank you to Abby aka Abreshmina aka (AbbyluvsMaan) & my partner Tani aka Tanya aka (..tanya..) for suggesting the names of this SS, I loved both your suggestions, so I combined them together.

Waheeda.

😊

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Raj (shocked and happy): WHAT..!!!! The Great Maan Singh Khurana is asking about a girl..!!!!

Priya came in to the hall hearing Raj scream, and was surprised seeing him literally jumping around Maan like a 5 year old.

Raj: Priya did you hear that?

Priya (confused): what happened? Why are you acting like this Yash?

Raj: Priya, Maan has just asked me about a girl.. A GIRL Priya..!!!! A girl..!!!!!

Maan felt like strangling Raj to death, but the guy just recently got married and he decided to leave Raj alone and hear all this because he could not really do anything to his best buddy.

Maan: listen Raj..

Raj: noo, I wish I could capture this moment, hang on let me just grab my phone and record all this..

Maan (self talk): Oh my god, where have I trapped myself.. but right now Raj is the only person who can help me.

Maan: Raj listen to me now otherwise I'm off.. (Maan starts to exit slowly, knowing that Raj will definitely stop this childish act).

Raj: okay Maan stop, i'll help you out..promise

Maan smirks and turns around to face Raj and Priya, after telling them his problem which he has been facing since their marriage.. Raj was on top of the world and Priya could not be happier. She rushed off to her room and grabbed their wedding dvd and rushed back to the hall where the two men were waiting impatiently.

Priya: okay Maan, just point out to us which girl, there were many girls at the wedding, I can't remember who was wearing what.. Priya lave to the kitchen to prepare some snacks for them.

Maan felt a little embarrassed because he describe what that 'girl' was wearing at Raj and Priya's wedding, which was totally not Maan, he did not even look at a girl, let alone remember what she was wearing. Raj and Maan turned their attention to the tv screen, and Maan watched it with full concentration as he did not want to miss seeing that 'girl'.

Maan: there she is, look there..

Raj: which one dude, there's so many girls.

Maan: Raj are you blind, she's right there you idiot in wearing that white suit.

Raj: ohh that's Geet... (surprised) ek minute... tumhe Geet se pyaar ho gaya Maan?

Maan (dreamily): Geet, her name is as beautiful as her.

Raj: kya?

Maan (changing the subject): umm nothing

Raj: Maan, that's Geet, Priya's best friend.

Raj turns to see Maan dazed once again so he decides to help Priya who was coming towards them with a tray full of snacks and coffee.

Raj: Priya you won't believe this but Maan has fallen in love.

Priya: oh really, who is that lucky girl?

Maan feeling a little odd, as he did not know how to react, he never felt like this before.. so he decided to remain quiet and hear more about Geet from Priya.

Raj: your gonna be surprised..

Priya: really jaldi batao Raj

Raj: hahaha aur koi nahi, balki tumhari best friend Geet se.. Maan loves Geet..!!!

Maan loved hearing their names together.. Maan Geet.. it sounded so heavenly to him, it made his heart beats faster and a smile formed on his lips.

Raj: Priya tumne suna, my best buddy has fallen in love with your best friend, aint that amazing..

Priya stood there a little surprised, she did not know how to react, on one hand she was happy but on the other hand there was hesitation. Raj noticed this and..

Raj: Priya, what happened? You are not happy with this news?

Priya turned to look at Maan, who was waiting for her to say something, it was clearly written on his face, she can see the love in his eyes for Geet, but she could not hide this from him, Maan had the right to know about this.

Priya: Maan there is something you should know about Geet.

Maan stood up straight away and Raj looked worriedly at Priya, their happy moment just suddenly turned into tension filled atmosphere.

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Okay guys, this was the prologue to my SS: A Path To Reach You...Cuz I'm Hopelessly In Love.

Please do hit the like button and comment to let me know what you thought, and I'll be updating the 1st update as soon as I know you all like this SS.

And to those who are wanting PM's for the updates of this SS then please kindly send me a buddy request, and you will surely get the PM.

Edited by MaanGeet_GurTi - 12 years ago
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The Khurana:

Savitri Devi Khurana- the head of the house and business after her husband's demise.. the founder of Khurana Constructions, India's most successful construction firm, and a firm which is very popular internationally too.

Maan Singh Khurana- the handsome and dashing bachelor of Delhi.. the top most business tycoon at the mere age of 27years.. all the girls are after him but he has not given them a single glance.. his one and only goal was to make Khurana Construction the world's best construction firm and make sure his family had no problem what so ever.

Dev Singh Khurana- the younger brother of Maan Singh Khurana, supports his brother in all decisions, respects his brother n Dadima a lot.

Naintara D. Khurana- the wife of Dev, and mother of his child and expecting his second child, a very sweet and understanding girl, respects and loves her husband and children, she has immense respect for Dadima and Maan.

Anwesha Singh Khurana- the only sister of the Khurana brothers, she's pampered but not spoilt, lovers her family a lot and her crime partner is her little niece.

Ahana D. Khurana- the sweet 4year old daughter of Dev and Naintara, the princess of the Khurana's.. loves her family a lot.. pampered a lot b her uncle Maan..spoilt by her aunt Anwesha.

The Sharma's:

Gayatri- she is a loving mother and grandmother.

Rajeev- the eldest son of Gayatri, loves his family can do anything for them.

Payal- the wife of Rajeev, and mother of his daughter (Simi),she's very sweet and loves her family.

Prem- the younger son of Gayatri, works in the army.

Geet- a very sweet, caring girl 23year old.. very fast in learning stuff, always ready to help, saves Simi from getting into trouble.

Simi- the naughty and bubbly 6year old of Rajeev and Payal.

Friends:

Raj- the best buddy of Maan Singh Khurana since childhood, they share a very deep and healthy friendship, never hidden anything from the other.

Priya- best friends with Geet for the past 4years, they bonded very well on their very first meeting and since then have become so attached to one another.

Edited by MaanGeet_GurTi - 12 years ago
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Prologue: Page 1

Character Sketch: Page 1

Part 1: Page 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141?pn=17

Part 2: Page 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141?pn=25

Part 3: Page 33

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141?pn=33

Part 4: Page 43

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141?pn=43

Part 5: Page 53

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141?pn=53

Part 6: Page 63

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141?pn=63

Part 7: Page 73

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141?pn=73

Part 8: Page 82

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141?pn=82

Part 9: Page 92

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141

Part 10: Page 104

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141

Part 11: Page 117

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141

Part 12: Page 129

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141

Part 13: Page 141

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3170026/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-part-13-pg-141

Link to THREAD TWO:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3241228/mg-ss-a-path-to-reach-you-2-epilogue-pg-34





Edited by MaanGeet_GurTi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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umm..
Finally.. I hv read d prologue..
Sorry for being late darling...

But boy..!!!
I loved d cliffhanger of the prologue..
Really well shaped
N d suspense built up so thumbs up for dat..!!

Way to go!!!
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 12 years ago
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Waahhiii🤗
Awesome prologue..loved it 😳
as always beautifully written👏
can't wait for d next update😛
Luv ya partner..pls update soon❤️

Edited by ..tanya.. - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: alekhika20

Nice prologue,update soon


thanks, will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww thank u, it means a lot coming frm an awesome writer like urself 😃
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Originally posted by: smallville

Awesome!!!!!!!
Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!


thank u 😊
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Congrats on your new SS Waheeda! 👏 Loved the first part... it looks really interesting! And the title is fab! Continue soon and do continue to PM me! 😳

Love ya xxx

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