MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
poor guru...
didn't want him to die so soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great updates👏
So emotional..😭😭
Maaneet in so much pain😭
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
heart touching and emotional updates
nice one
poor geet
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read part-11 and 12,and tears arnt stopping,yaar.

Felt so bad,sad,hurt to see GURU dead.I know he had to die to unite Maaneet but still feeling pain.

The family is grief stricken even Adi.

Fabulous writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thats a real sad situation in their family...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb

Amazing dear

Liked a lot dear

Continue soon

Waiting⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
i have read it 1 go
it fabulous👏
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Posted: 12 years ago











H2 - 13




Dubai


Sec : sir u flights tickets are ready , early morning flight

Rahul : hmmm ok

Rahul(st) : MAAN SINGH KHURANA im cuming to bury te last seed of khurana's blood

He came to India , his mens welcome and he went to his mansion


KM, MORNING

Maan came for his breakfast , Anni was sitting there alone

Maan : Anni were is Dadi and

Anni : Dadi took Geet to her new school

Maan : school?

Anni : yes bhai, Geet wants to work in charity school

Maan : hmmm, ok r u ready we will go to ur college

Anni got excited : really bhai u r cuming with me

Maan glare at her

Anni : thanku and she kiss him on his cheeks and went to get ready

Maan smiles at her

Maan (st) : I have to give security to Geet and Anni,


Maan called for some one and arranged security for Geet and Anni


Maan went to drop Anni in her college and went inside to finish all te formalities, Dadi finish all most all te formalities, Maan just signed te papers and took Anni to her class, he kiss her forehead


Anni got tears in her eyes : Bhai u know Guru bhai too will do te same

Maan saw her , Anni hugs him and started to cry

Anni : I miss him

Maan caress her hair : its ok Anni he will be with us , and kiss her hair

Maan wipes her eyes : ok now stop crying and go to ur class


Anni nodes her head and and went to her class , Maan saw her Anni settled and wnet to his kc


Charity school,


Dadi took Geet , te Prinicipal welcomes them

Prini: hello Savetri ji how are u

Dadi : im fine, and she is Geet my Bahu

Prini : oh god Maan got married

Dadi smiled sadly : yes

Geet standing they with her head down

Prini saw Geet , and her dress

Prini : hare beta why u not wearing any symbol of newly married, white dress and no bindi wat happen



Geet saw Dadi and had tears

Dadi sense : Geet go inside and see te students

Geet nodeed her head and went inside

Prini : wat happen

Dadi : suganya Geet wants to work here

Prini : why

Dadi started to narrate te incident as Prinici was her trustable friend

Prini : oh god tis girl went through so much, ok don't worry savetri I will look after her

Dadi : thanku

Prini : ok cum inside


Geet went inside and saw te students who were drawing, suddenly she felt a tug and look down , a small boy holding her duppatta



Geet bend down to him

Kid : didi u look so beautiful like angel

Geet smiles at him and took him in her arms, and started to talk with him






Dadi who was watching tis felt happy, seeing Geet smiling,

Dadi (st) : After Guru's death , Geet is smiling , i decided wat Geet needs ,i will bring Geet and Maan close at any cost. Geet to live her life as normal and she will be perfect for Maan





Kid : my name is Vicky wat is ur name

Geet smiles at him : Geet

Ayush : nice name didi

Geet : hmm u too look like a prince

Kid : really and kiss her on her cheeks

Geet shocked and then she too kiss him on his cheek

Dadi was checking te details and Geet was playing with kids and mingling with them forgetting her sorrows

Dadi : ok Geet cum we will go

Geet : hmmm

Prini : Geet from 2mor u can join her , at 9 sharp

Geet : hmm ok madam

Prini : u can call me aunty, me and ur Dadi are friends

Geet : ok aunty

Geet bid all te kids

Ayush : Didi u will cum 2mor naa

Geet : sure

Dadi and Geet went to KM

KC,

Maan enter his cabin, after finishing his meetings

Adi knock his cabin door

Maan : cum in

Adi gave te file

Adi : sir a imp news

Maan saw him: wat

Adi : Rahul in India

Maan smirks : oh wen

Adi : today early morning flight

Maan : hmm ok Adi

Adi went out

Maan (st): so Mr.Rahul Khanna was so eager to meet ur HELL




Evening KM,


Geet and Dadi having they tea

Maan and Ani came inside

Dadi : Anni

Anni came and sat beside her

Dadi : how is ur day in ur college

Anni : so nice , u know Dadi I got two friends , Sameera and Priya

Dadi : hmm

Anni look at Geet : Geet how is day

Geet : hmm good

Anni miss her old Geet back

Anni started her first day in her college and her friends

Geet silently got up from there and went to her room lock herself

Maan saw her getting up but didt say anything

Anni saw Geet was not there


Anni : Dadi wen we will get our old Geet back, for distracting her im doing evberything but she, she is not like tis Dadi, she wont be able to be quiet even for a sec, but now Guru Bhai took his Geet with him, she started to cry and Dadi too


Geet came to her and sat on te window looking outside and lost in her thought

NEXT DAY,


Geet got up and came down for breakfast , Maan and Ani left already

Dadi : hare Geet cum we will have breakfast

Geet and Dadi having they breakfast

Dadi : Geet driver wil drop u and pick u at evening

Geet : Dadi I want to ask one thing

Dadi caress her cheeks : don't ask permission Geet tis is ur house , u can do wat ever u want

Geet : Dadi I want to go by my self not in car pls Dadi

Dadi : but u don't know places here Geet

Geet : pls Dadi I want to like tis

Dadi thought tat Geet need some time , so she agrees


Dadi : Geet one request pls don't wear white atleast some colour dress , pls Geet for me


Geet nodes her head , went to her room and changed into simple pink salwar


Geet bid goodbye and left . she went to bus stop , took a bus and reached te orphan

KHANNA MANSION,

Rahul enter his mansion,

Rahul : were is sameera

Sameera : here im Daddy


Sameera is Rahul ki beti , who is 19 years old studying in te same college were Anni joined. She is very good person, who don't know Rahul ki dark life. She thinks a father is business man and staying in Dubai . she is very helpful person. Rahul loves his daughter so much and hide from his illegal business and media


Sameera came running and hugs her father

Sam : I miss ur dad

Rahul : me too child and kiss on her forehead

Rahul : where were u yesterday

Sam : actually dad I was I my friends house as I felt alone here , but u didt say u r cuming dad

Rahul : I want to give surprise for u dear

Sam : thanku dad

Rahul : ok cum now we have breakfast together

Sam : ok dad

Rahul : ok dera u go I will cum

Rahul to his sec : wat happen to te appointment , I ask to fix meeting with Maan

Sec : sir for next 2 months he is not free sir

Rahul shouted at him : wat

Sec : sorry sir but

Rahul : ok I will see tat

KC,

Adi : Sir Rahul is trying to get a appointment from

Maan smirks : hmm let him try


Maan (st) : Rahul u can try but wen I want to meet u, then only u can see me










PRECAP : MAAN MEETING RAHUL

next part- 14, pg52


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Part
geet is still in her shell
dadi decided to bring maaneet close
rahul trying to meet maan
waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update

Maan arranging security for both Aniee n Geet

Rahul is in India n want to meet Maan

Aniee is friend with Sameera, n Sameera unaware of her dad business

Geet is still under her shell
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago

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