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H2 - 12




MORNING,


Sun rays hit Maan who sleeping in Gym, he open his eyes ,and try to get up, but his body ached severly, he got up. While going to his room, he try to see Geet room, he open te door and enter to see Geet sleeping and Anni lying next to her, cuddling like a baby



Maan went near te bed and caress anni, and kissed her head, and before going he look at Geet who sleeping , bearing so much of pain and went to his room





Maan went to wash room and stood under te shower to reduce his pain, physically and mentally.


Maan (st) : now he is married to Geet, wat will be her reaction, till yesterday she was finc of Guru, but now she is my wife. Will she accept tis relation, leave her, will I can accept her, no Guru wat u did to me, how can I accept her thinking she is urs. Wat abt my revenge


Maan thinks : no no I cant change my aim coz of tis marriage, if she wants she can move on, but I promised to Guru, wat im thinking. Wat abt Anni , now she is having only me and Dadi, wat I will do now.


Maan stood under te shower for hours, thinking abt his life took a different path





HERE GEET ROOM

Geet slowly open her eyes, trying to see were she was, feeling some movements Anni too wake up

Anni : Geet u wake up

Geet nodes her head

Anni : how u feeling now Geet

Geet : hmmm , Anni were are we

Dadi : in our house Geet

Geet : our House?

Dadi : hmmm KM DELHI

Geet got up



Dadi : how u feeling Geet

Geet : fine Dadi

Dadi kiss her on her forehead : Geet get ready and cum down, beta, Anni u too get ready

Anni : ji Dadi

Both got ready, and came down

Dadi was shocked to see Geet, te way she dressed Geet wore white dress without anything, even sindoor



Dadi : Geet wat u wearing

Geet : wat happen Dadi


At tat time Maan was sliding down te stairs


Dadi : Geet wat is tis white dress and u didt keep sindoor also, now ur married woman Geet

Geet smiles faintly at her


Anni wants to change te topic : Dadi im so hungry cum we will have our breakfast

Anni : cum Geet we will have our BF

Geet : no Anni u have I will have after wards

Dadi : why beta , cum u r so weak

Tat time Father came

Dadi : Gm Father

Anni too hugs him: GM Father

Father : gm

Get saw Father and hugs him, and started to cry

Father : Geet beta u have to control urself, u should be strong, Guru dont like we he sees u

Geet started to cry loudly : Father Guru left me, he left me

Father : no my child he didt go any were , he will arounds us watching us

Geet looks at him

Father : yes my child, he kissed her forehead

Dadi : cum Father we will have BF

Father : its ok Savetriji


Dadi : pls Father for te sake of Anni and Geet , they will feel light if u be with them


Father : Savetriji ok I will have but today im leaving to Goa


Dadi : why so soon Father


Anni got shocked and hug him : no Father u cant leave us like tis, Guru Bhai also not there , and u too leaving us







Father : Anni see u got ur family here but think there so many of kids waiting for me , wat there will do


Anni listen to him


Father : don't worry I will cum often, and u too can cum wen u want ok


Anni wipes her tears : ok Father


Father : Geet cum here Beta

Geet sat next to Father, Father feeds Geet ,

Father : have it my child


Geet open her mouth, and Father feed Anni too. Maan was watching all tis while having his BF,


Dadi had tears in her eyes, and look at Maan who had a stern look,


After finishing BF


Father : ok Savetriji im leaving


Dadi : ok Father and thanku for protecting my childrens tis much years


Father : they are my childrens too

Father : Maan beta look after them , and god bless u child

Maan nodes his head


Father hugs Anni and Geet and turn to go , wen he notices , Geet till holding his hand and moving along with him

Father : Geet were u cuming

Geet : to our home Father

Every one was so shocked, but Maan expect tis, he is looking at Geet

Father : wat u saying Geet

Geet : im cuming with u Father to our home

Dadi : Geet then who is these,

Geet : no Dadimaa I cant stay here

Dadi : why

Geet : in wat right I will stay here, my Guru left me, I thought to enter tis KM, holding my Guru hand as his dulhan but now and broke down in cries


Dadi too hugged her and stared to cry, Anni hugs Father and started to cry


Father : Savetriji I want to talk to Geet for while

Dadi : sure Father

Father took Geet to next room


Father : Geet , my child listen to me, u cant cum there, now u are married to Maan, tis is ur sasural, and u promised to Guru naa


Geet : promise , I hate him Father I hate him, he know I cant leave without him, but he made me promise sobbing




Father : no my child don't cry

Geet : then wat im to do, he know tat I cant think anyone in his place then how I can accept Maanji in my life

Father : Geet now u don't take any decision, time will change everything, now u have to be support for tis family,

Geet : support im itself struggling to stand how can I support them Father

Father : don't say like tat, I didt brought up u like tis, u stay here, and accept them as ur family, but give time to ur relation with Maan, he is not bad he will understand u. try for some time, if u didt like u ca cum to our home


Geet stares at him

Father : Geet tis is our Guru's last wish, pls child try to fulfill it

Geet wipes her tears : Father Guru broke me into pieces ,and u r saying to join te pieces Father how can i

Father : Geett

Geet : ok Father u all want me live in tis HELL naa then ok I will


Father : Geet now u saying tis is HELL, but u will feel tis as ur HEAVEN wen time changes


Geet hugs Father , and both came out

Father bid and went to Goa


Maan got ready to go to KC

Dadi : Maan were u going

Maan : office and he left


Dadi didt say anything and went to see Anni and Geet


Geet was sitting near te window and looking out, Anni lying in te bed



Dadi : Anni and Geet wat u both doing

Anni wipes her tears : nothing Dadi

Dadi : Anni u get ur certificates ready u start ur study

Anni : no Dadi im not in mood

Dadi eyed Anni to see Geet

Dadi : u should not say tis beta

Anni : ok Dadi , but if Geet agrees then I too will start my studies

Dadi : sure why, Geet too will join u

Saying tis Dadi saw Geet who was lost in her thought

Dadi : Geet beta wat u r saying are u ready to continue ur studies

Geet didt respond

Dadi went near Geet and tap her shoulder

Geet came out of her thought : ah Dadi

Dadi : Geet u too will continue ur studies with Anni naa

Geet : no Dadi im not interested

Anni : then im also not interested

Dadi : pls Geet beta for Anni sake

Geet : no Dadi I want to work, pls Anni

Dadi : work, ok then u can work in our KC

Geet : no Dadi I want to work in some orphan school, pls Dadi

Dadi : school

Anni : yes Dadi Guru and Geet have a dream to build a school for unable childrens

Dadi smiles : tats good , Geet beta , why u want to work, u can have one for u

Geet : no Dadi pls I want to work Dadi

Dadi kiss her on her head : ok Beta u can work, in our trust school

Geet nodes

Anni : then me

Dadi smiles at Anni's antics

Dadi : u can study

Geet : yes Anni u continue studies

Anni : without u how i will go to college

Geet : no one will be there for anyone till last, some or other they have to leave them

Dadi and Anni know wat she is saying , Dadi hugs her

Dadi : ok I will arrange for ur work Geet

Geet nodes

Anni : wat abt Maan Bhai Dadi

Dadi : don't worry he wont say anything

Anni : were is he

Dadi : he went to office beta

Anni : office

Dadi : hmm he is always like tat only, his first family his office

Anni : hmmm

IN KC,





Maan enter to KC with his style and his eyes full of fire , if some one cum in front of him, he will burn them, he enter to his cabin

Maan called Adi , Adi enter his cabin

Adi : GM SIR

Maan : Adi wat abt him

Adi : ahh we got information tat he is arriving to INDIA so soon

Maan : hmmm , wat abt tat London ali project

Adi : I checked te details, only u have to sign

Maan : hmm u can leave

Adi turn to leave , but stop and look at Maan. Hie eyes was full of red like burning coal



Adi : Maan

Maan knows wen he will call him Maan , he raise his head to see Adi

Adi : how are u,

Maan stares at him and look into his file





Adi : MAAN I know wat u were going through but now u should think abt ur family Maan, ur sister Anni and Geet, they already lost everything in their life, now they need u Maan


Maan stares at him

Adi look at him , and went out


Maan closed his eyes leaning on his chair




Maan (st) : yes Adi is correct, but I cant leave him, who is main source for all tis, if HE didt enter in our lifes, maa , papa will be with us, I don't need to lose my Guru, and they went through so much, no I wont leave him

KM,

Maan enter KM so soon , Anni saw him, and run and hugged him

Anni : Bhai I was waiting for u,

Maan caress her hair : hmmm

Anni : ok now u go and freshen and cum, we will have coffee together

Maan : ok Anni


Maan went to his room freshen up and came down, saw Dadi sitting with Anni and Geet who sitting all so silent,


Maan thinking he have not seen her tis much quiet even for a sec, who will be teasing him to core was sitting lost in her world


Maan came and sat between them, Anni went and sat near Maan

Anni : Bhai take ur coffee

Maan : thanku Anni


Dadi : Maan I thought to Anni to continue her studies


Maan : hmm ok Dadi I too was thinking tat


Dadi : and Maan Geet want to work


Maan : work? Raising his eyebrows


Dadi : yes Maan , she wants to work, in our trustee school


Maan : hmm, he look at Geet who sipping her tea


Anni : Maan u will cum to my first day college naa,

Maan kept quiet

Anni : pls Bhai , till now Guru Bhai will drop me, now he is not here

Hearing te name Guru, Geet went to her room

Dadi : Geet beta

Anni : im sorry Dadi, but

Maan : it is ok Anni I will cum

Anni : thanku Bhai , only on my first day, then I wont disturb u

Maan : Anni u have all te right to disturb me,

Anni smiles and hugs him

Dadi : Anni I will go and see Geet

Anni : I will also cum

Dadi : no beta I will look at her, u be with ur Bhai

Anni : ok Dadi


IN GEET ROOM,


Geet was sitting and thinking abt her days with Guru, te way he use to pamper her and Anni , and te way he protect them


Dadi came to her room and saw her , Dadi kept her hand on her head

Dadi : Geet beta

Geet lyies o Dadi's lap and started to cry




Dadi wipes her tears : Geet beta pls don't cry, control urself

Geet hugs her

Dadi caress her hair to soothe her pain.


Maan stood near te door and watching Dadi and Geet and went to his room.
















PRECAP : GEET KI FIRST DAY IN SCHOOL

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Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional part.geet loves guru so much.cant accept maan nw.😒..father also saying truth.i think maan should change himself for the sake of annie nd specially geet.😊...geet someone beside her.annie try to found guru on maan.its difficult.😕..waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 12 years ago
very emotional and painful part di😭
guru died and maaneet married waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
just now read the whole story its awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
double updates..
pongal special..
i thought sweet pongal..
but both parts are fullof pepper..
u made me too emotional..
gurus death
n his last wish of making maneet 2gether
geet not able 2 accept the relation..
i couldnt write more..
podi..yennala onnum yezhutha mudiyala..
azhara mathiri irukku..
superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow another update
loved the update
surely both may not b able to accept each other soon
wondering how their journey is gonna b

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sab kuch bikhar gaye...aisa nehi hona chhiye tha...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
i am really angry doc dii
why you kill guru
you know i am wiping my tears in middle
they are flowing like river
sach i never wants you kill guru
for any reason
this is the first ff where i dont mind
geet with someone else

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