MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome part di do change some of geets behaviour with maan so that we can say she is maans geet nw nt guru's
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just love this part dii
but sad for geet and annie
maan is trying to fill his place
but this is impossible for both girl
and again became alone nA

love geet with children
and this rahul i just hate him
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the updates
dont forget to pm me dear
missing this
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Posted: 12 years ago
super update dear its really heart touching to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-13 was very sweet...liked annie and maan's bonding...missing guru...🤔

But amazed to see the pic carring a kid...i haven't seen that b4...!which episode it was..?

Anyways...the part was fabulous.👍🏼

Love,

Zahran.
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it a lot...
hope rahul doesn't use annie...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
loved it

geet hasnt come out of her shell yet
hope by going to the orphanage school she may come back to her old self

rahul in india n trying to meet maan
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Glad that Geet is starting to work at orphage.But Maan is not letting his grief out.And Annie's frndshp with Sameera,what its gonna result in????

Its getting interesting.
Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
somberi somberi..yeppa update pannuva,,,its 15 days..2 weeks u hv updated
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Posted: 12 years ago











H2 - 14


MORNING IN BREAKFAST TABLE,

Maan came and sat in his chair,

Anni : gm Bhai and Gm Dadi

Dadi : gm beta

Anni : were is Geet Dadi

Dadi : she left to school

Anni : so soon, she had her breakfast

Dadi : no beta , she said she is not hungry

Anni stop her eating and looks at Dadi




Anni started to cry : Dadi u left her like tat, I miss my Geet Dadi I miss her , Guru Bhai why u left us and took my Geet with u,

Dadi : Anni calm urself

Anni : no Dadi , how can, u know how is Geet , she was so lovely person, we were leaving our life full of dreams , and love, but now

Dadi too started to cry and , and felt little like falling down, Maan holds her

Maan : Dadi wat happen

Anni : Dadi

Dadi : nothing Maan I feel little bit dizziness,i think my bp increased






Maan in stern : Dadi u had ur tablets

Dadi : no Maan

Maan : Nakul Nakul

Nakul : ji sir

Maan : why u didt give medicines to Dadi

Nakul : sir she said she will have later

Maan gave him glare and took Dadi to her room

Dadi : Maan im alright , pls Maan don't worry ,

Maan : Dadi first stop worrying

Dadi : how cum Maan , wen Geet is like tat how can I not worry for hers

Anni holds Dadi ki hand and started to cry

Maan : pls Anni stop crying

Maan gave Dadi her medicines , Dadi had it

Maan : now u take rest Dadi

At tat time , Maan phone rings

Maan : ah say Adi , hmm I cant cum now , cancel all meetings and he cut te call

Dadi : Maan im feeling better now , u go to office

Ani : yes Bhai I will look after Dadi

Maan : it is ok

Dadi : im saying Maan im ok, u go

Maan : but Dadi

Dadi : nothing , Anni is there and Geet too will cum , so u go

Maan left to kc

KC,

Maan enter to his Cabin, Adi knock te door

Maan : cum in

Adi : GM sir

Maan : Adi wat happen why u called me, cant u attend te meeting

Adi : sir u had meeting with Mr.Mehar

Maan : wat u mean I had, then te meeting was cancelled

Adi : yes sir

Maan : the why u called me

Adi : sir Rahul

Maan calm hearing Rahul name : Rahul


Adi : sir we had meeting with Mr.Mehra , but Rahul bibed him and cancel his meeting and fix his with u sir


Maan : so now Rahul started to use his tactics to meet MAAN SINGH KHURANA, and smirks

Adi looks at Maan

Maan : Adi don't stop him, I want to meet him

Adi : ok Sir

Maan : I will be I conference meeting and no one should disturb me,

Adi : ok sir and he left his cabin

Maan : so MR.Rahul Khanna was so eager to see ur HELL

AT 12, KC


A row of cars enter KC ki premise , from tat Rahul got down and went inside te building


All te time, Maan was watching Rahul from te cctv camera , from te time he enter KC,


Rahul ki sec went to te reception

Sec : my boss have a meeting with Mr.Khurana

Pinky : sir u r boss name

Sec : Rahul Khanna

Pinky : hmm ok sir u can go , Sir is in conference room,

Sec : ok

Pinky : but sir only Mr.Rahul Khanna is allowed

Sec : why

Pinky : sir our Boss will having meeting only te owners not with employees

Sec : but

Rahul stops him : it is ok

They moved to te conference room , mean while pinky informed Maan abt Rahul

Maan was sitting in te chair facing te wall, showing his back, Rahul enter te room

Maan : welcome Mr.Rahul Khanna

Rahul was shocked to hear

Rahul : u know I will cum to see u but u don't know who im?

Maan turns to face him and laughs


Rahul was shocked to see Maan sitting like a king, who look like his father YASH SINGH KHURANA, he for few secs thought tat he is talking with Yash khurana





Maan : wat Mr.Rahul, r u shocked to see me

Rahul came back to sense

Maan : take ur seat

Rahul sat : im cuming to point wat u want

Maan smirks : ur life

Rahul : wat ? r u have any idea whom u r talking with

Maan : r u thinking im still 5 year old boy who cant do anything to te person who killed his parents

Rahul : so u know

Maan : hmmm

Rahul smiles : inspite of knowing who im, u r playing with me, u too want to die like ur parents

Maan smiles : u think so

Rahul : Maan stop u game or else

Maan raised his eye brows : or ?

Rahul : u have to face ur death , I will destroy ur life and ur Dadi , tat I left u both, but not now

Maan was so calm : u really think u can touch us,

Rahul little bit feared to see his calm face ,




Maan : Rahul be ready to face ur Hell, I wont leave u tis time, u will beg for ur death

Rahul roar : Maan dare u challenge me, ur father challenge me , now ur turn, I will not leave u, I will destroy u and ur family,

Maan raise from his chair and holds his collar : try if u can , and push him to te floor

Rahul struggle but stand holding te wall,

Rahul : Maan be ready to face Rahul and left from there


Rahul was in te car was fuming all te while

Rahul : how dare he will challenge me, how dare I wont leave him and his family

Rahul to his sec

Rahul : his family

Sec : sir his Dadi, , now only he got his family back, his sister and his brother , but his brother died

Rahul : hmm , wat his sister doing

Sec : studying in xyz college ,

Rahul : wat Sameera ki college , keep a eye on her

Sec : ok sir

AT EVENING,


Maan was going for a meeting, to xyz , road and se his car is standing, Maan car stoped and ask te driver to call to call his BG'S

Bg's : GE SIR

Maan : why u all standing here

Bg's : sir mam and showed him

Maan saw , Geet is standing in te bus stop and waiting for bus



Maan : why wat happen to her car

Bg's : sir mam, is going by bus

Maan : wat , for how long

Bg's : past one week sir

Maan : u didt inform me

Bg's : sorry sir

Maan : ok u all leave I will look after it


Maan saw Geet getting inside te bus , Maan follows te bus and te bus stops ,and Geet get down and started to walk , lost in her thought, holding her bag and walking in te road ,





Geet was walking without knowing a car cuming across her, but te car took diversion, but in tat sudden brake Geet falls down,


Geet : sorry sir

Car driver : hello r u deaf , u cant see and walk wants to die go some were else and die not in front of my car

Geet : sorry sir


She stood up took her bag and try to go to inside KM, Maan who saw Car cuming close to Geet and Geet falling down , he was angry te way tat man saying abt Geet a nd Geet asking sorry ,. so he came from his car and holds Geet and drag her inside KM


Geet was shock te way Maan draging her inside ,



Geet : Maanji wa.. t wat u want

Maan holds her arms strongly : wat te hell u think of urself , ah


Geet felt pain , te way Maan holding her and was scared to see Maan ki eyes which pouring volcano




Geet : Maanj




Maan : already coz of u Dadi is not well, now u want to die leaving everyone to cry for u naa, ah

Geet : wat wat happen to Dadi

Maan : don't worry for her , don't worry for anyone, but live in ur pain and kill others too

Geet was crying and closed her ears

Geet : Maanji

Maan : u don't cum from ur shell and make others to cry for u , wat u want , ah , he push , Geet hold te bed post and stands


Maan : yes Guru died , so u want other also to die with u


Geet was shocked : Maanji


Maan : then wat if u live like tis , u know wat will Anni and Dadi going through seeing u like tis, every day they both are crying for u, we too have pain losing Guru, u know wat is going through me, till now, after 20 years I got my brother but I lost him in two weeks, u know wat my heart feeling , u know wat I went through wen my Guru died in my arms, u know wat I felt wen Guru ask me to marry u , no u don't know anything , u know only to drown in ur pain,





Geet was so shocked to hear Maan ki each words

Maan : u know wat Dadi feeling seeing his grandson die in front of her , whom she will cry for , ahan but she control herself and now she is feeling for u, u know wat anni going through seeing her friend like tis


Maan hold her both arms and came close to Geet , seeing her shivering lips he lost himself, wen he saw her eyes , his heart pierced seeing Geet ki tearful eyes , his hold on her was losen, and he turns showing his back to Geet




Geet realizing wat she did to other wen she lost in her world.

Geet : im sorry Maaji ,

Maan : im sorry

Both of them said in one go

Geet : wat happen to dadi

Maan calm himself : her bp shot high, she is resting in her room

Geet rush to see Dadi room and holds her hand

Geet : im sorry Dadi

Dadi was shocked to see Geet ki state




Geet : im sorry Dadi I realize wat I didt to u all

Dadi cares her head

Dadi : wat happen Geet

Geet wipes her eyes, : I know coz of me only u r not well

Dadi looks at Maan , who was standing near te door

Dadi : no Geet , nothing like tat, I forgot to take my medicines and I got my bp high

Geet wipes her and Dadi hugs her




Anni enter with coffee : and me

Geet : cum my princess

Anni smiles with tears in her eyes , hearing princess from her Geet ki mouth long time, she cums and hugs both of them

Geet saw Maan and mouthed Sorryu, Maan nodes his head and went out













NEXT PART- 15,58


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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