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Posted: 11 years ago

PART -34

What is happening...koyi muje jawab kyo nahi de rahe hai

Her whole body was trembling ,her chest became heavy...she trying to hold sofa

Seeing her condition.. geet imemdiatley reacted.. dadima.. dadima..

Hearing the sound maan immediately turned back..

He understood what was happening to her, immediately he tooK her into arms and rushed towards hospital ...

Geet tried to follow him

WHEN GEET ENTERED THE HOSPITAL SHE SAW MAAN WAS AT THE ICU

MAAN WAS LOOKING THORUGH THE GLASS DOOR , DADIMA WAS LAYING ON THE BED, she was attached to all the wires, she became so pale...

Maan thoughts went on her dadima, how she after losing her husband, her kids..his parensts lost in the accident, she took care of him and dev...dadima please I cannot leave without... please come back...

At the same time

He could sense some at the back of him... her hands on his shoulder..the hands which he is used loved..once . which he do not want to leave for the rest of the life ..the drems which he had seen.. but now ..felling her touch.

.no... do not touch me

Geet was shocked seeing the sudden outburst of maan...

She came here...she knows how much maan loves dadima...and now seing her condition maan , she wants to confort maan...

But now seeing maan outburst...

You are reason for this.. dadima ki he halat tum zimmidar ho...

Khas tum mere zindime nahi hoteto atleast ..ye sab nahi hota...khas dev be zinda hote...if he had not in relation with you...

Maan kaise baat kare rahe app..

Now in hopital everyone are staring at them...

Ha I am telling truth ...just leave me ...and go...

Maan.. iam your wife... how could I leave you and go...we are binded into a relation.showing her mangalsutr...

Oh...you want to bind me in this relation...hmm

Ok ..he suddenly took the mangalsutr into his hands ...making them to break...

At one secong geet felt as if some one has pushed her into a deep slumber...her whole world had crushed into prices...she fell down on her kness.. trying to hold the locket from falling..

Jao geet... now leave me alone...there is no relation between us, no sting which is binding us.. ab you are just dev ki vidva ho... sirf.. dev ki...

The words echoed in the geet ears...vidwa.. srif vidwa..

She rooted in the place... do not know how much time... but when she came into senses when the nurse called her

Madam I am seeing last few hours you are sitting her alone

Is there anyone here...in the icu..

Hmm...

The nurse could understand that something happened to her...in the hospital as a nurse she saw many things ..when anyone losse their relatives

Bechari she is looking so young, may be she lost some close relations..

She left the place when she got the call

Geet was walking on the dark roads, she do not where to go.. she saw some kids are playing with the ball on the street ,seeing the kids she rembered about vicky... vicky..

She was knocking the doors of the mansion ...

Maan just now came from the hospital ...kali di pressured him to go house and take rest...he wants to look after Vicky also...

Kali di.. par dadima,

Maan dadima is still slepping...tum since morning you are here why do you go to house , vasie bhi doctor told she is out of danger

...maan

Ek baat pooch.

. what di

Where is geet ..what happened between you to.

Di ..from nowonwards geet is not my wife...never bring geet topic before me...

Now seeing geet again before him, his anger rosed

Why are you are here I told you that never come again in my life

maan please listen to me please once vicky.. vikcy needs me.. I promised to dev... I have to look after him, please mere baat suno...

No.. way geet what you have utill now it is enough.. you snathced his rights

sMaan please .. please..vicky se muje alag mat karo please ..

Until whhat you have done is enough ...you go away... from here... but I know itni asane se tum nahi javoge...so I will leave you.. saying that he draggeed her from the house making her to sit in the car..

Geet could not understand what is going on, where maan is taking her..

Maan where are you taking me, dadima kasie hai...please tell me, I am worried about her ,but maan is not replying anything

Geet was surprised seeing maan taking her railway station ...

Maan why you brought me to railwaystation.

..but maan quitely dragged her to the platform , he did not see what the train or where it is going he simply made her into empty coaches of the train. Pushed her into a empty seaty, c aught hold of her hand...trusting some notes in her...

Geet .. see now never acroos my path I do want to see your face again saying that he went away leaving the shocked geet

When he yash entered the platform... he heard the announcemnt that train is ready to leave...

Oh yash..tu gaya aj gaya kama se today pakka maa se dant padegi..why there is need to help that person. You will never come out fom your weakness . now see you are late to station and if you do not catch the train and you will not reach home...he running fast to catch the train at finally he could able to catch the train...

When he entered into the train he was trying to breath normally..

Oh god if I tell maa that I catched the moving train she is going to defenetely kill me.. oh yash do not think about that now.. ..tab dekha jayega now enjoy this train ride ..hope you will get nice company ..

From the past yash was looking at the lady who was sitting opposite to him, may be she is deep thoughs

But he cannot sit quitely...his character is like that ..

See miss...we have to travel togther, it is better we know about each other, I am yash ...nam suno hoga app.. ..i know it is little bit filmy but kya kare.. whenever.. I see a beautiful lady like you..my heart responds ..like this ..

What is your name...

But still there is no response form her, come on yash my be she do know english...

appka nam kya hai...

but still..

yash this is south train...may be she south indain ...

me peru yemiti"( in telugu)

unghaludaya peyar yenna? -

in tamil

ninghelode peru yenthaanu

in malayalam

Nimma Hesarenu

Oh god I asked in all south indian lan... but still there is no reposnse from her...

Edited by rsusmita - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan don't listen to Geet..I think Dadima knows truth about Geet..I think Yash take her with him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know it is shock udate.. but hope you liked this twist
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update di
shocking though bt u rocked with the emotions di
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lol itni sari indian languages wow di
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan is gone mad
idiot atleast uski baat toh sune
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsem update maan not listening
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
why maan not listening to geet
he left her in unkonwn train and told her to never come in his way...
what will he gonna do when he came to know the truth how wil he find her and where
eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg wht an update. And what a twist
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sady part...
Maan cant u trust hr once n listen her...
Its dat gusse mai hum apne nuksaan he karte hai...
Ab geet south chale gayi...
Yash will tk cre of geet.. n i think ki geet pregnent bhi hai...

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