PYAR KE EHASAS -thread 1 note on pag-50

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hello everyone...this is susmita again

iam here again with a new ff'. actually I promised my friend that I will write for GEET-2

this ff is specially for


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2921945/geet-begining-of-a-new-era-mg-stories-updated-7-8


"Geet - Beginning of a New Era" page. so i will be updating this story every Tuesday

So guys this is the story


PYAR KA EHASAS
















.. CHARACTERS

SAVITRI DEVI:

65 YEARS OLD LADY , VERY RICH KIND HEAR TED , GENEROUS LADY , LIVES IN HOSIYARPUR ,SHE IS LIKE HEAD OF THE VILLAGE, DEVELOPED THE VILLAGE A LOT ..OPENED SCHOOL AND COLLEGES FOR THE WELFARE OF THE SOCITEY, HER ONE WORD IS ENOUGH FOR THE VILLAGERS TO OBEY HER ORDER.CAN DO ANY THING FOR HER

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:

MD OF THE KHURANAN CONSTRUCTIONS, WHICH WAS ESTABLISHED BY HIS GRAND FATHER (HUSBAND OF SAVITRI DEVI ) CONSIDERED AS ONE TOP MOST FIRMS OF INDIA, HE EXTENDED HIS BUSINESS IN OTHER FIELDS ALSO, 26YEARS, HOT SEXY, HANDSOME ANGRY YOUNG MAN

AT THE YOUNG AGE HE TOOK KHURANA CONSTRUCTION TO IT S PEAK

DEVMALHOTRA :

26 YEARS ,GRANSON OF SAVITRI DEV(DAUGHTERS SON) WHEREAS MAAN IS SAVITRI DEV SON'S SON, AND DEV IS DAUGHTER SON BOTH ARE COUSIN , LOVES MAAN A LOT, HE IS KIND OF REBEL, WILL BE THE FIRST PERSON IN HELPING OTHERS , ALWAYS WILL BE OUT OF THE HOUSE

MEERA :

SISTER OF GEET , VERY HELPFUL MORE WILL BE DISCLOSED IN THE FUTURE

GEET:

SISTER OF MEERA CHEERFUL, LOVELY,BUT AT THE SAME TIME STUBORN GIRL, WILL GO TO ANY EXTENT TO FULFILL THE PROMISE , SHE HAS DONE

NAKUL:

SERVENT ,BUT HE IS MORE LIKE A FAMILY MEMBER , IT IS LIKE THEY ARE GENERATION SERVING IN THEIR HOUSE, LIVES WITH DADIMA IN HOSIHARPUR

KALI DI:

WIFE OF NAKUL STAYS ALONG WITH HIM WITH DADIMA

THESE ARE MAIN CHARACTER AS THE STORY UNFOLDS MORE CHARACTER WILL COME

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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS IS THE PROLOGUE, ACTUALLY THIS COMES AFTER 15 TO 20 EPISODES

MAAN was seeing geet, with piercing gaze,as if touching her soul,

There was silent everywhere, occasionally , only the temple bells are ringing, the temple was calm and silent one type of sacredness was there in the atmosphere ,even though there is calmness in the atmosphere, but their hearts are full of storms

Maan was seeing geet, she was sitting quietly on the steps of the temple,

If you are telling truth then why you did not came near to me, immediately after the death of dev, why you waited for 2 years ?

though his tone is very low,one can tell how much angry he is

geet did not answered immediately,

these 2 years I tried to live myself , but I could not , now, I was forced to come near to you

she stopped as if some thing has stucked in her throat

so guys this is the prologue,

was geet was in danger, will maan will able to save her from that danger

I WILL POST THE PART 1 ON NEXT TUESDAY

INDEX


PART:1: h ttp://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3133455&TPN=4

PART:2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=4

PART: 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=6

PART-4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=9

PART-5- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=11

PART-6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=14

PART-7 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=16

PART-8 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=19

PART-9- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=22

part-10 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=26

PART-11- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=30

PART-12 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=36

PART-13 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=41

part-14 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=45

part-15- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=48

part-16- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=51

part-17--https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=54

part-18-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=58

part-19-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=62

part-20https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=67

part-21-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50?pn=72

part-22-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50


part-23-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50


part-24-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50


part-25-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50


PART-26-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50


part-27-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50


part-28-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50

part-29-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50


part 30--https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50

part-31-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50

part-32-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50

part-33--https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50

part-35-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3133455/pyar-ke-ehasas-thread-1-note-on-pag-50



THREAD -2

Edited by rsusmita - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAAN was seeing geet, with piercing gaze,as if touching her soul,

There was silent everywhere, occasionally , only the temple bells are ringing, the temple was calm and silent one type of sacredness was there in the atmosphere ,even though there is calmness in the atmosphere, but their hearts are full of storms

Maan was seeing geet, she was sitting quietly on the steps of the temple,

If you are telling truth then why you did not came near to me, immediately after the death of dev, why you waited for 2 years ?

though his tone is very low,one can tell how much angry he is

geet did not answered immediately,

these 2 years I tried to live myself , but I could not , now, I was forced to come near to you

she stopped as if some thing has stucked in her throat

so guys this is the prologue,

was geet was in danger, will maan will able to save her from that danger

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept n nice cs...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear...
prologue is very interesting...
waiting 4 part 1...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting... but dont make GEET as wife of dev like that yaar... pls...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey welcome n congo..
nice cs...
prologue is bit confusing... can c ki geet is in sum trouble... bt a lot of things r going in my mind... i no dis is after many parts.. so story k saath we will understand...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for new story

its an intrsting one

continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on the new story
nice cs
interesting prologue...
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept
pls continue soon
pls add me in ur PM list

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