writing the story.. will try to finish it
thinking about the idea
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Originally posted by: rsusmita
writing the story.. will try to finish it
thinking about the idea
Part-33
When he entered the house he saw geet was in her room sleeping next to vicky, the way she was hugging him so protectively, as if her life depends on him...
At one second he lost in her innocent beauty but he again remind her betrayer..
No geet I will not come into your innocent face, behind these innocent mask.. I have seen that geet.. I hate you geet.. for what you have done
HE RETIRED INTO HIS ROOM, TRYING TO CATCH THE SLEEP, BUT SLEEP WAS FAR AWAY FROM HIM
Next day being Sunday all are in the house...maan settled in his study trying to catch some work..
Geet tried to go inside in the room to see what he is doing but in return she received his anger, ...
Maan what happened to you please , iam missing you, she remembered how they used to work together , both sitting in the study room...how he is used to tell about his work.. and
Maan I know I was wrong in keeping you dark, I was not that close to you, we became close nowadays...i want to tell you you... but darr lagtantha .. .. what if you do not believe my words...and I do not who are behind vicky and me, who had killed dev.. jijaji.. .. maan please give me one chance.. I do not want to losse you.. I lost everyone... abhi is dil ko itna himmat nahi tum he khone ki...after dev death even I am far away.. I know you are there for me.. I did not feel alone.. I know..if I come you will look after me, you do not how I felt when dadima brought your proposal... I felt like I was on heaven.. I know you will surprised seeing me there ...at any cost I do not want lose you, that is why I agreed to this marriage alliance... I know you agreed to this marriage because of the dev ...even I put the condition you married me, I thought I will make a place in your heart and then slowly I can reveal everything to you but my fate ...
Ma.. maa...hearing those words.. geet suddenly stopped writing she closed the dairy...
Maa see ee there..
What happned vicky.. what you want to show me..
Maa rain...
Now she know what is going to come next...he wants to play in rain.. actually she only made this habit to him.. she loved the first drizzling of rain.. ajebesa khusboo hai is mitti me.. she loves that , how meera a she used play in the rain.. ..
Maa pleaje..
Okay baba.. saying that both went into the garden.. to get drenched in the rain.. at one second geet forget all her problems, and started to play with vicky
Maan was seeing all this from his room, balcony, the way geet playing with vicky, both are lost in their own world, geet too became just like a small kid.. playing with vicky
He saw how the kids in ashram used to adore her, she loves kids and becomes just like a kid ...
But again he lost in her betrayal...how could he do this .. how could he stare her like this...
No...pushed the flower vase at side.. making his hands bleed...he moved from that not want to see the geet,
Geet heard some noise...coming from inside..
Vicky you go and change the dress.. you are good boy na .. saying that she rushed inside seeing the maan with the bleeding hands, immediately she rushed
Maan what happened, itna sara khoon,...
Maan beta... what happened to you
They both saw dadima at the entrance gate
When savitri devi enterd the house, she saw how geet was trying to talk with maan and maan was pushing her...
So it was true what kali told, there is some problems going between them...
Dadima when you came... so suddenly... Is there any work..
Maan tried to behave normally controlling his anger
Maan beta e kasia sawal hai.. why I cannot come to see my grandson
At the same time vicky came ..
Maa see.. iam good boy I changed my dress see..
Hearing those words... savitri devi was shocked...
Maan ye baccha kiska hai...
Dadima vo...
She started at the vicky.. there are lot features of dev in this boy
Maan ye dev ke beta hai kya...
Ha ...
Then why he is calling geet as his mother...
Dadima...vo..
Muje sach.. sacha .. batana maan..
Vo vicky dev ka beta..
Then why he is calling geet as his mother,
There is complete silence in the room
Bolo maan I want answers for my questions..
What is happening...koyi muje jawab kyo nahi de rahe hai
Her whole body was trembling ,her chest became heavy...she trying to hold sofa
Seeing her condition.. geet immediate reacted.. dadima.. dadima..
Hearing the sound maan immediately turned back..
He understood what was happening to her, immediately he too her into arms and rushed towards hospital ...
Geet tried to follow him
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