MG FF: Angel Of My Life Pt 14 pg 105 18th nov

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Hey gals chinni here again, well a concept popped in my mind and I couldn't help but pen it down. I am giving you the prologue, tell me how is it?


My first FF: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60236320






PROLOGUE:



A girl stood on top of the cliff and is crying bitterly. His words are ringing in her mind she closed her ears and shouted "NO YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME.. YOU CANT'"

She is remembering her conversation with him few hours back.

She went to his office and is waiting for him in his cabin, she waited for 2 hours but he still didn't turn up. Finally that man came to his cabin after completing his meeting and was shocked to see the girl in his cabin.

"What are you doing here?" Asked that man rudely.

"I was waiting for you from 2 hours, where were you? Are you not happy to see me here?" Asked that girl.

He went upto her and held her shoulder harshly. He pinned her to the wall and told "I told you not to come to my office, then what the hell are you doing here."

"You are hurting me" cried that girl seeing the anger in his eyes.

"Listen Miss. Geet Kapoor, I never ever loved you. Its just a time pass and you are a passing cloud for me" told that man.

Geet is shattered hearing his words, she cupped his face and told "no don't lie. I know you like to play pranks on me, stop joking."

That man smirked and told "Remember you have once slapped me infront of whole college for teasing a girl. So its just a revenge from my side. I never loved you, I just HATE you." Then they heard a knock on the door. That man, parted from her and geet wiped her tears, stood there silently. That man opened the door and saw a girl who is wearing Mini Skirt, she hugged him and kissed on his lips. Geet felt disgusted seeing that. She turned her face aside.

"Geet.." called that man. Geet looked at him controlling her tears.

"Meet my Fiance Naveena Chopra.." told that man. Hearing geet shattered completely and she ran from there.

"Missed you baby" told naveena. That man closed the door when geet left his cabin.

Geet stood in the middle of the road numb. She don't know what to do where to go and how to face her parents. She felt so suffocated. She decided to DIE. She walked and walked and walked but she is not having any feeling in her, she is not feeling any pain. She stood on the top of cliff of the hill and jumped from there'''.

Hi, hello, Namaste gals. Prologue of the new FF, ANGEL OF MY LIFE.. how is it?

Waiting for ur precious comments and likes. Need your support in this FF too. Do tell me should I continue this' how is the oncept of the story. And yes I will post the character sketch on Monday and this FF has very limited characters and the whole story will reveolve between 4 people.

Please hie like and comment.

Love u all 🤗

Chinni.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX:


prologue: page 1 (above)

part 1

part 2

part 3

part 4


part 5

part 6


part 7


part 8

part 9

part 10

part 11


part 12

part 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely start..
who was the man who cheated geet?
i hope its not maan...
congrats for new ff dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice prologue...waiting for characterization and first part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting start hope the person who cheated geet is not maan
do add me in would love to read it ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome prologue
oh poor geet she has been cheated n she is shattered n trying to end her life
who is the guy i hope it is not maan
waiting for the updates

n congrats for the new ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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who is teh person who cheated GEET
plz dont make t maan
its a request
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just love it continu soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chinni 🤗...thank u for starting a new Maaneet FF...really emotional prologue...waiting to read the story...plz continue...TC 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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mindblowing prologue yar i hope that "man" is not "maan".
waiting for updates
thanks a lot for PM

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