MG FF: Angel Of My Life Pt 14 pg 105 18th nov - Page 43

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Part 12


"How are you feeling now geet?" asked maan.

"We need to go somewhere" told geet with full authority. Maan looked at her confused. "Geet where are we going?" asked maan but it went to geet's deaf ears. Maan stood up with no other option and followed geet, from the time he came here all the weird things are happening. So he thought geet's behavious in one of those weird things. She took maan to one of the store room, she is searching here and there for store room keys but she is not getting.

"Geet, what you are searching?" asked maan. Listening some sounds near the store room, dadaji came out to see maan and geet near the room. First he is shocked to see them near THAT room. "Geet beta, what you want?"asked dadaji. "I want this room keys" told geet without looking back. The authority and the sterness in her voice didn't go miss by dadaji. He is wondering what happened to her suddenly. But any day they have to know the truth then why not today thought dadaji and gave the store room keys to geet. Geet took them and opened the door. The room is covered with dust, its been some years they opened that room. Some times dadaji opens the room praying to god to send them soon.

But when the door opened, they were mesmerized to see the big room which is very beautiful even thought in those dust and all. Geet went inside the room, smile is adoring her lips. Finally she is there where she has to be. Maan too entered into the room followed by dadaji, dadaji is nervous how their reaction will be after seeing the room. He is observing both maan and geet. Geet is looking calm and happy but maan is confused. But when maan's eye caught the big photo frame in front of him made is shocked. The same type of photo yesterday janu showed them. But what this pic is doing here.

Maan closed his eyes, some blur images are flashing in front of him. His head started spinning suddenly. He then opened his eyes and looked around, a small smiled adoring his lips too when he saw the photo frame in front of him.

*The whole past is just my imagination. Its entirely my logic, if you have any problem then let me know. And yes in past the characters will be talking in hindi but I will be writing dialogues in English only*

Its early 1700s, where the Kings use to rule their kingdom, people use to worship king as the god. Here comes the 2 kingdoms. Khurana kingdom and their enemies Rathode kingdom. The king of khurana kingdom isMAAN PRATAP SINGH KHURANA, The eldest son and the intelligent person. People respect him for his kindness. He treats his people as his own family. He is 24 years old. The king of Rathode Kingdom is DEVENDRA RATHODE, He is also good by heart but want to destroy Khurana Kingdon as Maan Khurana killed his father. Dev's father is a womanizer. Day by day his deeds are becoming extreme so maan with no other option killed him. For this reason dev want to take revenge on Maan and destroy his kingdom.

It's a new morning, Maan got up from his cozy bed at early morning 4:30 am. Its his routine, he goes for a near by forest which is just a few miles away from the kingdom. He loves to explore places, mainly greenery. There is a small lake in that forest, he took his horse and moved towards the forest. In less than 15 minutes he reached forest and got down of the horse and tied it to the tree. He went near the lake and started his favorite hobby swimming. After swimming for some time he came and changed. He is looking here and there but didn't find anyone. His face fell, when he was about to go he heard the sound of payal. They are different, those are not the same payal which he hear daily. He hid behind the tree so that no one can see him.

The girl came near the tree and saw the horse. "You are here only, then where is Maharaj" thought the girl pouting cutely. She looked here and there but she didn't find maharaj. Here maan is truly enjoying her restlessness. "Maharaj, now enough of your pranks. Please come na, see my new payal" requested that girl. She is wearing a simple lehenga, with choli covering her head. She is looking like a godess. "Maharaj please come out na, I have to go home early today. No one knows that I will meet you daily here that you too know. Then why you are teasing me"cribbed that girl. Maan took baby steps and reached that girl. Her back is facing him, with a swift, maan made her face him holding her bare waist. When his cold fingers touched her bare skin a shiver ran through her spine making her weak on her knees.

"Today why maharani ji want to go early. One you came late and want to go early" teased maan. "Wo.. wo.." due to the close proximity words are not coming out of her mouth. "Boliye na" asked maan smirking. "GEEET"someone shouted her name. geet came out of her dream land opened her eyes. She looked here and there. "I am dreaming again about him"thought geet and smiled sadly. Geet, she lives in Khurana Kingdom. Early morning she too goes to that forest for flowers which are available only in that forest. She secretly admires Maharaj Maan. But maan never saw her. Slowly slowly she fell in love, but she is a mere girl in Khurana kingdom. Many beautiful girls will come for him. She is not that lucky to get maan. She only dreams about him, and feels herself lucky.

Her day starts with waking up from maan's dream, she goes to the forest to get those flowers. And she will help in house hold work. She has a younger brother and her parents work in KK (Khurana Kingdom). Some time she sneaks into the kingdom to see maan secretly, some times her luck favours some times not. Geet best friend is Sapna. Geet is a dancer, she loves dancing. But not permitted to go out. She will be idle most of the time. Her life is full of fun. She has each and every information about maan.

"Geet, what are you thinking?" asked sapna her best friend, they both are sitting near their house. "Nothing sapna. Hey why don't we find some work in KK" asked geet. "Yes its nice idea, but our parents don't allow na" told sapna sadly. "But what we will do sitting idle" told geet. "You want to work in KK to kill your boredom or to see your prince charming daily" teased sapna. Geet smiled shyly and ran from there.

Here maan is talking with ministers about dev. He is trying to come to KK but maan's men stopped him. "Maharaj, we should be careful with devender. He is very angry on you" told minister. "Yes I know, but I did right. I always goes with truth and truth wins" told maan with confidence. They about his people and about their welfare.

Everything is going normal, morning geet secretly admiring maan and dreaming about him. There is no problem and tension in anyones life, until that day when maan saw geet. 😆😆😆

Precap: Come here called maan. geet don't know what to do and what to say. She slowly walked towards him. "Ji Maharaj" asked geet nervously.

Friends, from now the main story starts. It will be a cute love story at start with loads of maneet moments. They story will turn intense in further updates.

Next: part 13

Edited by chinni10 - 11 years ago

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