MG FF: Angel Of My Life Pt 14 pg 105 18th nov - Page 5

Character Sketch:

Maan Singh Khurana:

MD of Khurana Constructions. The handsome, hot hunk of delhi. Very simple and down to earth. His bro and sister-in-law died in an accident 4 years ago leaving a 1 year old pari with him. Though maan is chachu to her, but she calls him as papa. Brij, sam, dev and geet are his best friends. He is super senior to geet.

Pari Singh Khurana:

Niece to maan, but she don't know maan is her chachu, she is thinking that maan is her papa. Loves maan a lot. Geet and pari are partners in crime, they don't leave a chance to make maan, brij and sam's life hell with their tantrums. Studying in upper KG.

Brij Handa:

Best friend of maan, very hot tempered but good at heart. Geet is his little sister and loves her a lot. He is a head architect in KC. Loves pari a lot. But pari is scared of him due to his temper.

Geet Handa:

Best friend of maan and sister of Brij. Loves dev a lot. She left her house because of dev but he cheated her. Very innocent, bubbly and chatter box. Loves to tease maan. Pari and geet are partners in crime.

Sameera Sharma:

Best friend of maan, geet and brij. She don't like dev. She is an orphan. Loves brij, she is so fond of pari.

Dev Rathode:

Best friend of maan, brij and geet. Loves geet but due to some reasons he broke her heart. A play boy but very caring when it comes to his friends. Loves pari a lot.

Hey only 6 characters in this FF, the story will revolve around them. More 2 characters will be introduced as the story proceeds. No negative characters.

Part 1:

Geet stood in the middle of the road numb. She don't know what to do where to go and how to face her parents. She felt so suffocated. She decided to DIE. She walked and walked and walked but she is not having any feeling in her, she is not feeling any pain. She stood on the top of cliff of the hill and jumped from there… before she fell down a person caught hold of her hand. He pushed her towards him and slapped her tight on her cheek.

"Are you mad geet, what the hell are you going to do? End your life?" Shouted that person. Geet looked at that person and hugged him crying bitterly. She is completely shattered, she don't want to live anymore, she wants to end her life. "Why you saved me from ending my life. I don't want to live, I want to die" told geet and is crying bitterly.

"Shhh geet don't cry, who is talking about ending her life, geet?? No I cant believe this, I know only strong geet not you" told that person. Geet broke the hug and looked at him. "I left house and came here" told geet. He looked at her with out blinking, "what are you saying geet" asked that person. "Yes MAAN, I know my family don't like love marriages so i left my house came to delhi. To start a new life with DEV, but but he cheated me maan, he told he doesn't love, he did all this for revenge for slapping him infront of whole college" told geet. She sat on her knees and is crying. "What should I do now maan, tell me, I trusted him but he broke my heart. I cant bear this maan, I cant" cried geet.

Maan bent on his knees and cupped her face. "Geet, come with me, we will go to my house. We will think what to do" told maan. "No maan I don't want to come, I want to die, I cant live without dev maan" told geet. Maan's heart ached seeing her cry, she was always bubbly, cheerful and cracking jokes around. But now she wants to end her life, that too because of that ba****d dev. He knows dev is a playboy, but he thought he is serious with geet but no he again cheated. His blood boiled thinking of dev. But now he is more concerned for geet.

"Geet, don't talk rubbish, suicide is not solution for all the things. Now don't talk anything and come with me" told maan sternly and took geet with him. She got into the car and maan drove to KM. the drive is silent, geet is sobbing silently looking the other side, how her life turned upside down. Maan is looking at her time to time and saw her crying.

"What should I do now? Should I talk with dev? No he wont listen to anyone and I don't want him to know that geet is with me. Should I inform to brij, he will be worried for geet, he might have started searching for her" thought maan.

Soon they reached KM, "geet we reached home, come lets go in" told maan. He got down from the car and opened the door, but geet sat like a statue. He kept his hand on her shoulder and called her again. "Geet…"

Geet looked at him. "We reached home" told maan. Geet nodded and got down of the car. He took geet inside, when they are entering the house a 5 year old girl came running to them. "Papa.." called that girl. Maan smiled at her and took her in his arms. "My princess came from school so early" asked maan. "No papa, its 5 pm. You are late today" told that girl. "Sorry pari, see geet aunty came with me, don't you wish her" asked maan. Pari looked at geet and smiled." Aunty…" shouted geet. Geet smiled a little at her and took pari in her arms. "how r u aunty?" Asked pari. "I am fine baby, how r u? missed you pari" told geet and kissed her cheek. Pari too kissed her cheek and told "come aunty I will show you my toys which papa brought" told pari. Maan smiled at both atleast geet is smiling when pari is around. "Ohh papa, I forgot to tell you, brij uncle is waiting for you" told pari.

Geet looked at maan with horror, maan is also equally shocked, inside the mansion, brij sat on the couch waiting for maan. When he saw pari going out shouting papa, he though of waiting for maan inside. But its more than 5 minutes pari went out and she didn't come. Now brij got worried and stood up and came outside. He saw maan and pari with geet. His blood boiled seeing geet.

She left house for that dev and now what is she doing here? Is maan helping her? No maan cant do this, I know maan very well, he wont support all these things. Then what geet is doing here. But his anger over powered and he roared "GEET…"

Pari is frightened seeing brij shouting, she looked at him with wide eyes. Brij softened seeing pari's fearful face. He smiled sweetly at her and told "pari beta, I want to talk to your papa and geet aunty. Plz go and play in your room". Pari looked at maan, and he nodded. Pari ran to her room.

Brij first listen to me told maan. But brij is angry on geet for doing such thing. Geet lowered her head in shame. Brij neared geet and held her shoulders tight. "Why geet why you did like this? Tumne hamari parivaar ka izzat mitti me mila di, I can never forgive you for this geet. You broke the trust I have in you "shouted brij.

"Bhai.. plz listen to me" begged geet. But brij didn't listen to her and he shouted on her. Maan tried to stop him but he is not listening to anyone. Brij slapped tight on her cheek. Geet fell on the floor and she hit to the ground. Blood is oozing out. Both maan and brij didn't notice it.

"Stop it brij just stop it. first of all she is shattered and now your words. She committed suicide, if I didn't go on time then she must have died by now "shouted maan. "Maan what are you saying, no geet cant do this. Ha I was angry on her but I cant see her in pain, she is my princess maan" told brij.

Just then a girl entered into the mansion and saw geet in a pool of blood and at the same time maan and brij too saw her blood. "GEET" shouted brij and bent down to see his sister. "Geet open your eyes, I am sorry gudiya, gusse mein I raised hand on you. Plz forgive me gudiya, opened your eyes" cried brij patting her cheek.

Maan saw sameera coming towards them, "sam call the ambulance" told maan. Sam nodded and called the ambulance immediately. Soon they took geet to hospital and doctors are treating her. Brij hugged maan. "Maan, yeh maine kya kar diya. How could I slap her, maan nothing will happen to her na?" asked brij.

Maan consoled him. "Brij, pls calm down. Nothing will happen to geet, she will be fine and she will fight with u see" told maan. Brij is pacing outside worried for geet. Maan looked at brij, he knows how much he loves geet. But today his anger is justified. But somewhere his heart is telling that something is going to happen.

Its been 2 hours doctors still didn't come out. After like eternity doctors came out and called brij. "Doctor how is my sister?" Asked brij. "We are so sorry Brij, we tried our best but she slipped into COMA, she is not at all responding for treatment, its like she don't want to live" told doctors and left from there.

Brij, maan and sameera stood there numb not able to think anything. Brij sat on his knees and crying bitterly. "Gudiya, you cant do this to me. Plz come back to me plzz" cried brij. Sam looked at him with teary eyes and placed her hand on his shoulder.

Precap: maan, brij, sam taking care of geet.

Dev going abroad.

hope u all are happy now... he is not maan but dev.. 😃

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