SS:LIKE AND OPPOSITE -part 8updated on page 13 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for next part continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
maan stopped seeing her tears
he wants to hurt her also but cant see her tears
why

pm when you update

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Posted: 12 years ago
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why he wants to hurt her...

there must be some misunderstanding...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Part 5
MORNING:
Geet saw the time, as it was six in the morning... she went to the washroom to freshen up... she choose to wear simple green suit... though it was simple ... it added to her beauty...maan was still sleeping under the effect of alcohol... so without making any sound she went downstairs...
Maan woke up after some time... he tried to find geet in his room..he looked for her in the washroom not finding her ... he became really angry...thinking about last night, he thought she left home...
Maan(himself):so she again left me... she escaped from me... no i will not allow u to live in peace...i ll show u who is MAAN SINGH KHURANA...
With that he went to get ready ...while he was coming down he could hear some giggling sound in the living room...in the living room geet was surrounded by dadima..maan's maasi sheela,maan's cousin pari... all of them are telling geet something... she is similing at them... maan forget himself in her musical laughter and starts to admire her... a smile formed in his M shaped lips...he forget his revenge on seeing serene beauty in front of him...
Pari was teasing geet ...and she didn't speak anything...afterwhile maan came back to senses when his maasi called geet for some puja... he became angry again on himself for getting carried away like this... when tried to leave for his office ...dadima called him...
Dadima: maan ... today also u r going to office...
Maan: dadima.. i m having some important meeting today... so i have to leave...
But dadima was not in mood to allow him...
Dadima: no maan ur not going anywhere today...i had arranged pooja ...
So u have to stay here...and thats final...
Knowing about his dadima , maan had no option but to stay there...
After somewhile pandit came ...both geet and maan sat made to sit together to perform pooja... geet hesitated to sit so close to him... maan sense her hesitation and thought to tease her little...he found all busy with pooja...
Maan(whispers in geet ear):hello dear... yesterday u thougt u escaped from me... for ur kind information i loosen my grip on my own... today u cant escape from me ...(geet eyes widen in fear) .
Geet: don't think so high about yourself ...i know how to save my self...
Maan(scarstically): what will u do...
Meantime the pandit called them ...both performs pooja...and geet was taken to kitchen to make something sweet as it was her first day...
At breakfast..
Dadima: geet beta ... serve this gear to maan first ...
Geet does as per daadi instruction .. and serve rest them after maan..when maan took the first sip... his expression changed ...he became very angry as the gear was salty... he was about to shout at geet... then only he observed that everyone enjoyed their food..,then he looked at geet... she smirked with a teasing smile... 😆
Dadima: maan how was the gear.. (maan realy tried hard to swallow it)...
Maan: its nice dadima... no one would have tasted such a SWEET gear...(he tried so much to give a good smile).
Maan: geet u have prepared such a sweet dish... i want u to have this gear with all of us..
Geet eyes really widen.. now she cant even refuse him.. as whole family members are present there...
Geet: maan ill eat afterwads... (but maan was no mode to leave her)
Maan: no geet ... as u have taken a trouble of preparing such a SWEET dish... i want to feed u with my own hands...(saying this he took a spoonful of gear and brought close to her mouth)
Geet(closed her eyes):hey babaji ... muje raksha khar na...(she took the gear without opening her eyes...
Maan made her to eat rest of the gear fully
Maan(st):what do u think geet... i will not leave u that easily...u have to payback for ur deeds...


Precap: daadima plan to bring maaneet closer...
Hi friends... i know u all are angry on me... first i m sorry for late update...
Thanks for ur huge support... here read this update and let me know whether u like it r not...
With love
Manu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay me first
nice update...
Loved kheer part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
part 5
nice part...
Maan is too much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
lovely update dear continue soon and do pm me dear ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
MAAN MADE GEET EAT THE SALTY KHEER IN FRONT OF EVERYONE

ALSO PLEASE GIVE THE LINK PROPERLY IN THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
read all the parts in one go
liked the concept very much
please pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40



first of all my request is that so big fonts are making the update looking very ugly...

it is ok if the update is short...we also understand that sometimes u may be having less time so can't update big part...

update was wonderful...

still it is not known that why Maan wants to take revenge...

loved Kheer part...she gave salted Kheer to Maan and Maan make her also eat it with him...

thanx for pm...

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