SS:LIKE AND OPPOSITE -part 8updated on page 13

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part 1

AT TEMPLE
PINKY:is ur decision is right to marry MR.MSK... without even seeing him...hey come ya he to arrogant and dosent care about anyone and when he gets angry, even god dosent know what will he do...(as pinky woks in maan office...she know about him very well)
geet: pinky u know na.. its papaji decision ... u knw very well i will not go against him... aur hum mere babaji per pura barosa hey..he will show me right path...
pinky: geet ...think twice before u take any decision ya..can i talk to uncleji...
geet:piny pls.. i dont want to papaji to feel bad... once he heard about proposal ...he is very happy about it .. i dont want to spoil it...
just then geet cellphone rings... seeing an unknown no .. geet hesitates and and answer the call

geet: hello...
person:hi sweetheart... how r u..
geet(angry): who r u...
person:i m MAAN SING KHURANA .. UR WOULD BE HUSBAND..
geet:look MR.. still the ristha is not finalized...so i hope u know ur limits...
maan:of course dear.. i know it... k i call u to inform u that u have to agree to this marriage at any cost...
geet :if i say no ...
maan :u will have to face my wrath...
geet: what will u do MR.KHURANA...
maan: so u r so eager to know... k ill tell u... i know that your father is your world... if u say no to this ristha.. next second ur father will in road..
geet: u r lying... it cant be..
maan: it will happen if u say no dear... for ur kind information ur father business was taken over by me yesterday...u already know that u r father is heart patient .. if say no u r father health will also destroy...so think about it.. tommorow my dadima will be coming to ur home to finalize our marriage.. i hope u r intelligent and take right decision...ok bye sweet heart...
geet feel misrable thinking about her plight...and thinks about her father and goes to her home with pinky...she could not take any decision and she did not say any thing about her conversaion with maan to pinky...without knowing what to do she heads to her home...

precap:geet's decision

hi friends i know with few lines of prologue its difficult for u to analyse it.. so here i posted first part.. hope u all like.. kindly comment on it whether u like it r not...
love
manu


part 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3112569&TPN=3&#61995119

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
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Interesting Update !! 😃 !!

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thank u friends for ur support... tomorrow i surely update
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part 2
AT HOME
geet enters home after leaving pinky at her home... she is not in the world and thinking about her conversation with maan... while walking over stairs... she slips and before she hit the ground two pair of hands was holding her protectively... her eyes is closed due to fear... slowly she opens her eyes to see the person...
RAJ HANDA: Geet tum teek tho hey na...did u get hurt...(his eyes showed that how much he worried about her...)
geet:papaji mey bilkul teek hoon... app sintha math kegiye...
raj handa:geet tumhra thyan kahan hey... could u not see and walk...
geet:sorry papaji... here after i will be careful.. (she lowers her eyes... )
raj handa: geet is something troubling u... pls tell me if there is any..(he said those words looking at her...)
geet:aisa kuch nagi papaji... m alright... just thinking about my exams...
raj handa:when do u started tellling lies geet ... geet just remember one thing u r a open book to me... i know what u r telling is not truth...
geet wants to tell the truth .. but again fears about maan and gets scared,as she know her father defintely wont agree to the maarige if she tells the truth to him.. .
raj handa:geet are u thinking about ur marriage... see geet i dont go against ur wish .. if u like this proposal ,ill accept it .. if u say no i wont force u..
s... he always treated her like princess... her wish was his command...even after her mother death ,he bought up her so lovingingly that she need not felt her mother lost...
geet:nahi papaji.. i know what u ll do will be always for my good... and i am happy about it...(she had tears saying that)
raj handa:then smile my princess.. aur kal savithiri deviji is coming with ur proposol ...so be prepared...(his phone rings.. seeing the no raj hesitates and goes outside to answer)
raj handa:ji mein janthi hoon ji.. just give me sometime... ill arrange the required amount...
geet overhears the conversation
raj handa:k k ji within one month every thing will be ready...thank u ji...(saying this he gets in his car and leaves home..)
geet(st) :so everthing is true ... papaji is in sort of money... and what i am going to do now...
(she thinks about her father ) papaji ..i know u love me more than ur life... but u r everything to me..for u i can eve marry a monster... even it leads me to death ill marry him.. i dont know how he lookslike r y he is doing this...and i m ready to live in the hell for u..
NEXT DAY:
SAVITHIRI DEVI is talking with RAJ... geet brought down by pinky... geet wanted to see the monster... but only savithiri devi was there... she thinks about it..
savithiri devi:geet ... i know u wanted to see maan ..when we r coming here.. maan received a call about his urgent meeting .. so he went there... if u want u can see this photo(she hands one cover to geet,)...
savitri devi;ru ready to marry maan.. and to became dil of our house...(geet looks at her father.. seeing his happy face ...she says)
geet:i agree to this marriage (saying this she left from there..and enters her room.. just then her phone rings.. )
geet(trembling):hello...
maan: how r u sweetheart.. seems u had agreed to our marrige...
geet: may i know y r u doing this...
maan:u will come to know about it, after our wedding dear ... so our wedding will takes place after two days...so be ready for it...(he hungs up the phone)
maan(himself): so geet finally u had agreed to the marriage...fine.. now be ready for ur payback... now ull know the effect of ditching MSK...
Precap: MAANEET WEDDING...

hi friends due to my project work ... i could not update ... hope ull like this part...


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