SS:LIKE AND OPPOSITE -part 8updated on page 13 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update dear👏

Loved it so much👏

Continue soon dear😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HOW DOES MAAN KNOW HER AND AND SHE DOESNT

PLEASE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 4

MAAN: open u r eyes my dear... oh i just forgot to welcome u ...ok now i will do...welcome to the hell dear saying this he just tighten his grip around her...

GEET: get off me...
Maan : why should i leave u...u r my wife... i am having every right on u...
Geet: leave me... i hate u...get off me...
Maan: because of u i had lost everything, now it ur payback time,, he was enjoying her frighten eyes, her struggling ,gives him an unknown satisfaction . She was almost done, the grip was losing slowly but he held her both hands and pinned her to the bed, geet looked at him horrified'.
Geet:y r u doing this... apko iss kuch nahi milega maan,,, u'll regreat only,, he smirks'
Maan: lets see who will regreat'. She was hating his smell,, he is on high but still no one can say it as he is in his control'. He saw that she can't tolerate the smell and turning her head'. He comes close to her trembling lips'..
Maan: so u hate this smell... but i like it...i like to hurt u more...
Before geet can push him he smashed his rough lips on her'.. she closed her eyes and continue her protest,,, the more she protest the more he increased the pressure on her soft lips,,, he cupped her slender neck and pulls her closer,,, trying to open her mouth, but geet sealed it tightly'. That angered maan,, he bite the corner of her lower lips harshly,, she winched in pain, blood was oozing out' she was having difficulty to breath so finding no ather option she opens her mouth and he slipped in,, kissing as if he would lose her,, he twirled his tongue and capture her,,, biting it,, she cried in that kissed but he didn't let her go instead his hand started its works on her body,,, her each push boost his ego,, he continue his merciless rough treatment' when he felt breathless he broke the kiss and came on her neck,, kissing and biting it,HER DENYING was making him more restless, He is in so much rage that he dosent no what he is doing and for now he has to satisfy himself by hurting her'. But somewhere its his desire also woken with her touch,, the way he was tasting her... he wanted to feel her more,, have more'. he has no control on his mind and body'.
Geet: leave me... or else ...
Maan:or else what will u do DEAR...remember u r facing MAAN SINGH KHURANA...U CANNOT DO ANYTHING AGAINST ME...
He tastes her slender neck and then came to her chest,, in no time he untie her dori of her blouse and harshy pulls her blouse down her neck'. Her tears were already soaked her face,, she screamed when his teeth bite the soft flesh of her upper cleavage' her voice was meek but only protesting his act,, begging her to go'. But he turned to be deaf,, he pulls her blouse hook tearing it apart and threw it on the floor' and next min he undid her skirt also,, she tried to cover herself ...when his hold became loose...she with all her force push him... wrapping bed sheet around she run towards washroom get herself locked in it... tears kept rolling down from her eyes...
Geet(st):babaji ,what is happening in my life... what did i do to deserve this... y he is feeling happy,by hurting me... but i have to be strng infront him... first i have to find the reason for his act...
Maan(st):y did she do this to me ... y she turned me to a monster without feeling... though i hate her y i loosened my grip seeing her tears...y does it still affect me... (running his fingers through his hair)...i swear that i will make her life hell... she has to face my wrath for hurting me... for breaking my heart...
Maan was fighting with his own feeling... and due to effect of alcohol ... he soon drifted to sleep...and geet sleep was far away from her... she sat beneath the shower for hours... trying to wash away his touch everywhere... due to her buries ,her whole body was in pain.. after some time she came out of the wash room ...and saw that he had been slept alredy... she calm down a little..and she settled herself on the couch...
Precap : geet trying find the truth...

hi friends i m sorry for late update... i got held up with my project work...here i had given u next part... tel me whether u like it or not.. sorry i could not reply to beautiful comments... but all are nice... thank for ur huge support...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Nice story.. Why Maan force Geet to marry him?


Ps: can u make Index 1st page.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update

Brilliant

even i m eager to know the truth

Continue soon dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the updates dear..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear is this the prologue of the story?


[Quote=manupavan]
LIKE AND OPPOSITE

PROLOGUE:
'LOVE' is most powerful weapon to destroy someone...
some how he also start to believe in it... because of that love only,he changed to arrogant MONSTER,because of that love only He became an EM0TIONLESS PERSON...because of that love only he set to revenge...
what will happen when he destroys an innocent person in his revenge...



Edited by spvd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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found the above 2 in ur other threads...and plz add the link in the pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
part 4
nice...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

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