Maaneet ff Envious Romance THREAD 1

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UltimateLioness

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Geet is married to Maan ans she can't speak and 1st word she spoke is "DEV" and Dev is a doctor... Geet was living in orphanage and Here comes my million $ Question :

How she knows him???😕

P.S you demand long comments tu i just tried to make it LONG😆

Loved you Story 😳

Edited by UltimateLioness - 13 years ago

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P0K0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Hi,

Guys...i am truly feeling sad...for making u all sad...but i had no choice...i had to take this step for my study...these days were like hell for me to keep pace with my studies...i was studing LITTERALLY 19 HOURS PER DAY...!!!!!!

But i have a good news for u...since i have made my daily rutine in order...i have sorted out some hours just for myself...so i've decided to unpause this ff ... :)

That means aap saabko mera 'new-nakhraas' jhelni hogi... !!! :) :) :)

I may update part 6 any time now...so u have to check it out cause...i cant pm u guys the update at this hour...

I hope this made u a little bit happy...

Love u...😛

Edited by ZAHRAN99 - 13 years ago

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ZAHRAN99
Hi,

Guys...i am truly feeling sad...for making u all sad...but i had no choice...i had to take this step for my study...these days were like hell for me to keep pace with my studies...i was studing LITTERALLY 19 HOURS PER DAY...!!!!!!

But i have a good news for u...since i have made my daily rutine in order...i have sorted out some hours just for myself...so i've decided to unpause this ff ... :)

That means aap saabko mera 'new-nakhraas' jhelni hogi... !!! :) :) :)

I may update part 6 any time now...so u have to check it out cause...i cant pm u guys the update at this hour...

I hope this made u a little bit happy...

Love u...

Very much

Happy wid

This news.

Waiting for u.

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

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P0K0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

...but he knows his way very well...after all he IS the MAAN SINGH KHURRNA...

Maan put her on the table...she sighs in relived...but it was short lived cause the very next moment maan lifted her up sideways and went to there room...geet was stiff all the time...she was too much concious...about where he was taking her...he closed the door...looked at her and smirk...she got afraid and extended her hands to the door knob to open it...but maan immidiately moved her away from the door...

''no no no...jaan...dont do that...''

Geet looked at her fearfully and maan gave her a concerned look...as if she was a baby touching a knife...making her more scared...

he sat on the bed taking her on his lap...making her face him by putting her legs both side of his waist...geet made her eyes downcast...looking here and there...scared ...and totally uncomfortable by the proximity...

Maan's hand very slowly moved to her back and snapped open her kurti's string...she jumped and put her hands on his chest to distance her from him...maan immidiately gripped her hands and laced his fingers with hers forcefully...and placed them on her lower back...she was totally stuck in his strong embrace and this made her shiver...

Her plane and loose satin dress slipped making her shoulders bare...she closed her eyes tight...her face turned cute red...

Maan eyed her every gestures carefully...then he eyed her bare shoulder...glowing...to be touched by him...he leaned closer and placed a light kiss on her nape...both shivered...one out of passion and the other,out of fear...

He kept kissing her nape, then shoulders ...and suddenly stared to bite her shoulders one by one...

She realised he was massaging her shoulders by biting them...she made a crying noise and wriggled continueously.

''one more protest and your violin is going to the dustbin...broken'

Geet stopped all her movements right away...like a stone...maan sighed placing his face on her shoulder disappointedly...''why r u afraid of me this much jaan ? Main Booth hoon? Jo tumhe khaa jaunga?huh? Bolo?(thanks mona...wink...wink)

Geet nodded no cutely looking down.Maan smiled fixing her dress ...''chalo,so jao...kaal main tumhe music shopping per le jaunga...oh! And sorry for threatning u mishti...''he said kissing her head lovingly...lying on the bed and making her sleep completely ON him.As she is timid, she fixed properly on him...he smiled,kissed her head,''good night wify...''and closed his eyes sleeping peacefully...

But geet was no where near sleep...she started thinking about her violin and the person who gifted her that...

Past

(Mere liye!!)geet excitedly asked the person in sign language...

Ha geet...happy birthday!...the person said looking at her smiling...

She ran to her table...took a large piece of paper and wrote and showed it to him

It says,''THANK U DEV''

Dev smiled ,''mere samne manners dikhane ki koi zarurat nahi geet...and by the way , birthday girl is looking very cute...'' to which geet gave him a dazzling smile

His inside and out filled with happiness...''18 year old...means very soon you will become an old hag like her...''showing a picture of mother teresa he burst out laughing.

Geet smile faded and looked at dev tensed...dev looked at her and laughed more loudly ''...god damn geet! U bought that...ha ha ha ha...!''

Geet made an angry cute pout and left...dev looked at her...she went out...after a moment...she came back...dev looked at her curiously...she looked him from the corner of her eyes...grab the violin and then went away pouting...

Dev looked at her and nodded his head laughing,'' Dumb kid,...iska kuch nehi ho sakta...lekin jyasa bhi hai sirf aur sirf mera hai ''

She sat behind a tree and started playing the violin...creating a happy tune...she liked the violin...it must be expensive...cause it's from france...dev went there for a conference and brought this for her bithday...knowing her violin got old...she closed her eyes mentally praising the violin...

just then Mylo(my puppys name) ran to her and laid on her lap...she open her eyes and smiled kissing it...she brought it from a road accident...its mother was dead and mylo was sitting beside his mom...trying to wake her up...and she couldnt tolarate the sight , she brought him here...other kids named him mylo...but it always stays with geet...

Just then someone caughed and she looked there only to see a beautiful older lady looking at her...admiring her...she got up and greeted her with a smile...

Just then Dev called her name as he was looking for her for manafoing...geet looked back at her and asked permission to her to go...when she gave that permission she took the violin and mylo and went away...

Dev saw her and ran to her...''aarree yaar ! Accha i'm sorry...i take my complement back...geet ...bolana maine sorry?''

Geet :(say as much as u can but i only wish,when i get old i would look like her)...she pointed at Savitri devi from far who was walking away...lost in thoughts...

Dev looked at her direction and whisteled...''...WOW...so sexy...na...geet ?'' geet looked at him open mouthed.shocked at his besharmi...

Dev turned to geet and saw her shocked...confused dev asked,''..what..?''

Geet stompted at his foot and went away ''...phirse gussa...ohho...geet ke babaji...''dev looked up then followed geet once again...

Part-7

Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Geet dam scared of Maan.
Maan trying to be close to Geet. Removing her fear.
He is blackmailing her. But that won't help him for long.

Past starts.
Waiting to knw more abt her past.
Wat did Dev do to her???

Edited by crazydream - 13 years ago

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Thank u sooo much dear dat u'll conti it. Bt dont ignore ur studies dear.Do well thr too.
One request,as u won't b pming so wenevr u update jus post regarding d update on "daily update thread". Plz,it wil b easy to knw abt updates.
Regarding update...
Nice part.
Maan trying so much to make geet comfrtabl.
Dat dev says geet is his. ;> :@
nevrrr.
Waitng fr nxt.
Wats in past?
Also maaneet moments :)